First of my apologies for not editing my comment earlier...really sry for that!
Now I can't even begin to tell you, such an amazing writer and even better human wrote this specially for my bday. This gesture is really special Vaishu and I am so glad that I met you :) This truly made my day and I had a huge grin on my face reading it the whole time which in end made my cheeks hurt (yeah I was smiling this much!) thanks a ton for writing this :)
enough of emotional talk coming back to the OS
girl it was amazing...how many times have I told you you are an amzing writer and I can sure as hell say that many more times.
I just fell in love with the whole picture you painted here and the use of Italian language here...haye adds such a dreamy effect.
loved it how he spoke to her in different language and in the end told her what it means...simply beautiful.
This piece had such an aesthetically beautiful feel to it a splendid treat to read...LOVED it...
swayam as a painter is something which never crossed my mind and I am so glad u showed a whole new side of him to me and I sure as hell loved it :P
I loved how he left her with a sentence she couldn't understand and she reached forward to ask him what it means...then what followed of her being his inspiration and that sweet kiss was so aptly put I cant even begin to tell you how much I enjoyed reading it.
Coming to the ending, a conclusion of the story really matters and I have told you this before too that your endings simply leave wanting for more and that my friend is your achievement as a writer.
I loved how you ended it and the rest was left to the imagination, do they met again? or not...an amazing read :D
Edited by DaShInG_DeViL - 11 years ago
