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ahhh cant c seperation nk ...true friend

starting my comment from yur note ;-)

glad that some one here on IF shares the same school of thoughts as i do .. very much happy at this .. i really respect you for the decision you made :-) .. you are right when you said ... your stories are enough to hook a reader MC is not needed .. :-D .. i read yur story paper planes .. and i loved it from start till end ..

now for the update ...

arnav in this story is a dream man of every girl ... really awsm in every way ..
i really liked the fact that he still cares about khushi .. her whereabouts .. he z a true n sincere lover ..
i just like everything about yur story it gives so much of postivity ... be it in terms of characters or the scenes.. NK is a sweet heart .. so are the others friend of arhi ..

i loved the scene where he said "not interested'' that showed he still cares for kkhushi s feeling .. i m glad he did nt act a jerk to make khushi jealous .. <3

the valentines celebrations... ohh i m soo excited to read it !! did i mention earlier that the festives yu narrate in stories are worth reading .. yu master that .. be it new year eve or the movie watching scene .. yu wrote it wth the right amount of thrill and described every detail wch was required .. :-) ..


hope khushi will go to aman s birthday party .. and wish everything would be fine ..

thank yu for writing such good stuffs ... :-D ..and thnx a lot for sharing ..

Hayye! Nahne is such an awesumm friend! :*

Originally posted by: AALUSLOLWA

starting my comment from yur note ;-)

glad that some one here on IF shares the same school of thoughts as i do .. very much happy at this .. i really respect you for the decision you made :-) .. you are right when you said ... your stories are enough to hook a reader MC is not needed .. :-D .. i read yur story paper planes .. and i loved it from start till end ..

now for the update ...

arnav in this story is a dream man of every girl ... really awsm in every way ..
i really liked the fact that he still cares about khushi .. her whereabouts .. he z a true n sincere lover ..
i just like everything about yur story it gives so much of postivity ... be it in terms of characters or the scenes.. NK is a sweet heart .. so are the others friend of arhi ..

i loved the scene where he said "not interested'' that showed he still cares for kkhushi s feeling .. i m glad he did nt act a jerk to make khushi jealous .. <3

the valentines celebrations... ohh i m soo excited to read it !! did i mention earlier that the festives yu narrate in stories are worth reading .. yu master that .. be it new year eve or the movie watching scene .. yu wrote it wth the right amount of thrill and described every detail wch was required .. :-) ..


hope khushi will go to aman s birthday party .. and wish everything would be fine ..

thank yu for writing such good stuffs ... :-D ..and thnx a lot for sharing ..

Great update Zara
Yay NK put some sense into Khushi

Loved d update

its awesome!
u made my day 😊

Originally posted by: CountingStarsx

* You're. ^^

:P

*shoots herself*