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@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#651

OK first love making scenes do not make your writings cheap
As a writer... when a story need that kind of scene a writer have to write... Love making is a natural pure thing.
It's your choice to cut out the 18+ tag from your story
but I had read you Price of freedom

And believe me THAT WAS NOT CHEAP

And coming to update

it was awesome... I think a little chat with NK will help KHushi to see some sense

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AneesahJabeen

@AneesahJabeen

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#652

Awww its so cute to c arnavs concern n khushis jealousy...so sad to c them seperate :(
Hope things work out soon

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#653

Ignoring his limited time, NK has just come to persuade Khushi not to sever relations with Arnav. He totally deserves to become Khushi's best friend. I hope Khushi would listen his advice.

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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#654

Is Dil ka kya karoon? Main kya karoon?
Haan kya karooon??
Mai kyaaa... Karoon?
Hayee... I am fidaa over all dresses of Khushi today Zara g...
Plzz tl me from which site I can buy these all dresses??
I loved them. Bas! They were so so so so much pretty!
And isn't Anjali then Anjili??
About update- I liked the feeling... Someone being possesive and over protective for you even after facing your rejection! I know Khushi is also liking this. :p Hehehe...
It was always seen but I think its 1st time you actually compared Arnav with wolf! Scary but intriguing...
Hmmm Nk! When will he and Arnav gonna meet??
I loved this update very very much!...

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#655

Wonderful update Zara ...

But am SAD for Arshi ... its too much hurt foR them ... but Khushi should really reconsider NK's POV and his advise to her ...

It really important in their relationship ... if she's gonna have one with Arnav ... and its gonna be YES like "dhau" . lolz ...

i want the next update to be Arshi kiss and make up ...

and i also want that smile to wipe off of Khuhsi's Nani face ...

Plz PlZ DO update again soon if possible ...

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Paridhi

@kparidhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#656

fantastic update..his possessiveness is very appealing to me😉 thanks for the pm

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#657

Khushi's fears are bigger than her love now. Thats why she is refusing this relationship.

I hope the love consumes her being that being without him is impossible.

Because i dont want her to listen to anyone, NK or her friends but her heart.

Arnav has been trying so much. I hope he continues it but also slowly convince Adhira.

Even though i feel its so dumb and stupid of her to build sandcastles in her mind. Fate is not in her hands and i want her to realize it! 😡

Btw, love-making scenes are never cheap. It's a natural progress in a couple's relationship.

Your writings are amazing so im sure you will do full justice. 😊

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#658

I hope Khushi will overcome her fears!!! Awesome update😊

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#659

I just hope everything is fine.. Arnav is a ticking time-bomb..

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#660

Ha this was an emotional update like really she just pushed him away from her like really he is too hurt. Hmm hope after NK talk she would make up to go to aman house and clear out things. Excited for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.

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