KriYansh OS: The musicals

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Super cute!!!!!!!!!!!

This was different n superb!!!!!!

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

uff shenz..why didnt u PM this before..??? 😡

this was sooo awesomeee... eekkksss

i soo just loved eettt... 😳

Trainee and Trainer's relation... woah... 😃

aur upar se...those double meaning talks...from both the sides...

i mean both Rey n Kria...

i'm in love with this OS... 😃

shuru mei i couldnt really understand wats it about...but sooner with the flow evrythig became clear...

and der kiss... eeppp.. i loved der confession... 😳

overall.. Amazinggg OS... 😃

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Re
unresd

amazing os shenz
and the title was so gud

haaaye i luvd this concept

trainer trainee🤣
hehe

poor rey kitna control karna padh raha hai :p
and those double meaning dialogues plus the seductive actions are nt helping either :)

oh gosh weapons...like seriously weapons :o
me bhi dar jati for sure

so finally atleast sum1 took a step ahead
thank god
anth bhala toh sab bhala :p

fabulous os shenz thanx for the pm

Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 11 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Eppsss. . .
Shenz di. .
Dat was such a lovly os. .
Kria seducing rey. .awww bechara rey . .tch tch tch. . .itni na-insafy uske sath 🤣
bt finaly. .they were 2gethr . .
Awsm os di .
Lovd it. . . . . . . .

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

it was really a tr8 to read dear..
soo good..
kri nd ds much of seductive.. aanhaan.. it was refreshing..
loved d os a lot...👏👏

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

U know what ur pm always brings smile on my face. . .Saal mein ek-do baar jo milte hai!😆

Why don't write more frequently?! *pout*

about this OS- It was ah-mazing..

Their double-edged words n teasing game were thoroughly enjoyable..

Luvd it to d core..

Edited by --Shukti-- - 11 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Superb os...😃

This flirty n seductive kriya is fun to read... 😉

Kitna tacts lagane padte hain iss sadhu ki tapasya bhang karne ko... 😆

Bahot dedicated trainer hai rey... ek baar bhi khud ko distract nhi hone diya...👏

Even confess bhi nhi kiya... awww... his thinking is justified...😳

Ye zaalim duniya nhi samajhti true love ko... 😆

But finally... he noticed her efforts... & confessed...😛