An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#931

Chapter2.
Amazing update.
Loved it.
The whole mannat ki chaabi scene was brilliantly written..
I am really glad to read and know more about the lucknowi history..

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VYGA

@VYGA89

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#932

Chapter3.
Amazing update.
Khushi gave in to her desire to be with him.
Then Why did she run?
Where did she go i wonder...
Thank you for yet another
wonderful update.
Thanks for the pm.

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#933

I am truly speechless... I really dont know what to say! I want to tell you how amazingly your wrote this chapter, But it feels inadequate, really!

I loved every but of it. I love such stories. and this one is sooo darn good!

The past was so beautifully written and so was Arnav's anguish. I could really feel it all. Reading your stories is like watching a movie in 4D. you know where you actually feel you are a part of it.

Now, I am eagerly waiting to see how this is resolved. Somehow I have a feeling Aakash's girlfriend is involved. Which is why she insisted on having this restored. She is either Sheetal reborn, and trying to help Khushi or Payal reborn, and trying to continue her revenge, or maybe she is a better person now and will take the curse away... anyway, this is just a super amazing story. .I am totally blown away.

Sorry, posted on wrong thread... I was re-reading all the chapters after having read the last one.

Edited by mem1 - 11 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#934

Heerz my awfully late unres on Pg. 111

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3788444&PID=95435166&#p95435166

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#935

Finally got the time to read... it was awesome... the way you described what Khushi wants was superb and then they kissed. Sigh!

Thanks for the pm.

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#936

Nice update.

Why did khushi run away from Arnav after such a sensational kiss.

Both of them are attracted to each other but are not able to express their feelings. What's that they are trying to hide from each other.

Girl you have really done a good r&d on lucknowi cuisines and architecture. Just by reading their names and the detailing you have given have made to try them😃

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#937

just read the prologue sounds interesting 😊

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foreversarun3

@foreversarun3

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#938

Ch 2 was awesome!!! Wow!!!! I loved it!!!!

So Arshi are both attracted to one another!!

Love this SS so far! 😊

Edited by rosesphool1 - 11 years ago

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#939

This is an awesome story. Glad I came across it. Love the detailed description of the place , art and cuisine related to that place. Enjoyed reading the chapters in thread one. You are one amazing storyteller.