An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED) - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am so glad you are starting another story. I am looking forward to chapter one, the prologue was fantastic.
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOved it! Prologue sounded super interesting!! Cant wait!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow di, that was some background in the whole crafts around Lucknow.. Making things look more real!!


Arnav has been away from lucknow and sheesh mahal since 2 decades, after his father's death! .. So why the sudden interest now..? He has just taken over Raziada Resorts, so he sounds pretty much below 30's!


Khushi, unlike herself, sounded dukk,, infact the whole place around her screamed of something amiss!! Firstly her dull clothes, making me wonder if she is a widow or she has lost some member of her family, recently..?

She was looking for 'Occupation Again'.. She was working some where before..! Why did she leave that job..?

Wearing bright orange kurti and taking that stuff out from that old trunk, looks like she is trying to create a web of her own cheerful self around her! And also, why were clothes and jewels kept in trunk..? Did she just shift to some place..?


Prologue has given way to far too many questions., while title has generated the anticipation.. Update ki intezaar mein! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
A widow! A widow!
Also the age thing IS intriguing.
Just like shattered, I am keen to read about a not so young A+K!


Semanti! U make my hypothesis sound like a joke made by a 5yr old.
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Posted: 11 years ago
very interesting plot
looking forward to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Also!
I wonder if we will have a proper nayeem and lava story heer!
Edited by LooneyLuna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow..new SS..cannot wait to read more..the prologue gives so many different angles to think about, for a reader! wow!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Have bookmarked, so I can easily stalk!
A prologue and 25 pages 👏

Interesting start. I love Sheesh Mahal with Raizada together.

Khushi is intriguing.

waiting for chapter 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg new story.wow
interesting.waiting for Tuesday
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that was a good start to the story.
Khushi wanting to work for Arnav seems nice. I really want to read more.

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