Kuch Pal Ka Saath- Conclusion 3-pg 100 - Page 23

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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks lots for the great comments guys. Really apreciate it. I have no school on Tuesday or Weds, so I def. cont one of those days. 😃. There's alot to look forward to in the comming story...and alot of suprises. Were finally getting closer to my fav. part of the story.
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finaly ak r together. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont seperate them
really nice ff 👏 👏 👏
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Part 21- Sexy Love

Kripa and Meem went shopping. School was going to start soon, so they went to do some back to school shopping. They sat in the food court to eat something
M- So what's up with you a Angad
K- What?
M- I've been hearing some stuff
K- Really, what have you been hearing?
M- Nothing much…just that you have a new boyfriend
K- I see. And
M- And I'd like to know if its true or not.
Kripa looked around the food court. Then suddenly smiled.
K- You'll find out in two seconds.
M- What?
Angad came from behind Kripa and kissed her, Kripa returned the kiss
A- Hi girlfriend
K- Hello boyfriend
M- WOW
A- Hey Meem…you look like you've seen a ghost
M- huh?
K (laughing)- Meem didn't know we were together
A- Oh I'm sorry for the shock treatment Meem.
M- Its okay
A- Ok, Kripa I have to go.
K- Why?
A- Nah, I have an appointment today
K- Oh okay
A- Okay I see you later
K- Okay
They kissed again, and again, and again.
A- Bye Meem
M- Bye
The minute Angad left, Meem threw the salad at Kripa
K- What!!!!!!!!!!!!
M- When did all this happen?
K- I don't…two days ago
M- WOW….Oh my god!!! How do you eel?
K- I don't know…kinda strange
M- Why?
K- Okay, Angad and I were like best friends after Raj and Vedika left
M- So?
K- Like…he knows everything about me. EVERYTHING. He was the first person I told when I had a date with a guy, all my past relationships. He knows everything.
M- So, its awkward
K- I don't know…but I like being with him
M- That's good.
K- Yeah…and like I know about how crazy he was for Vedika, and now its just like…So do you like Vedika? You get what I mean?
M- (laughing) Yeah..but you cant let it get to you
K- I know…
M- You two seem to have to whole kissing part down
K- Yeah we're good at that.
Shazad was in the basketball court playing when Meem came.
M- Hola
S- Kya Hal Hai?
M- Good, you?
S- Same here.
M- So?
S- So what?
M- Listen, I cant stay that long
S- Why not?
Shazad put his basketball down, and went to Meem to kiss her. They were kissing and talking at the same time.
S- So, why?
M- I have to drop my sister to Sunday school
S- For what?
M- Arabic
S- Uff
Shazad let go of Meem
M (laughing) - What?
S- I cant talk about Arabic and make out at the same time
M- (laughing) Lets walk
S- Fine…
They were walking around the park, holding hands. Shazad put his hands around her hips, and was kissing her neck while they walked.
M- Yeah, I have to drop her to Arabic school
S- Oh yeah?
M- Yup.
Meem and Shazad were now facing each other now. Shazad kissed Meem really fast really good
S- That's Arabic too
M (laughing)- Byez
S- Your always in such a hurry
M-Sorry
Meem left and Shazad sighed. That night Angad, Kripa and Urvashi were having a dinner together. Angad was basically watching tv, while Urvashi and Kripa set the table and all.
K- Is he always like this
U- 24/7 dear
K (laughing) Would you like to change that
U- I've tried every possible way
K- Hm…let me try.
U- Go ahead, you know where his room is
K- Okay
U- And Kripa?
K- Yes?
U- No funny business.
Kripa turned around really fast, and walked to Angads room
K- This family to way to open.
She went into his room, and saw him sitting on the chair watching tv. She threw the wash rag at him
A- What the?
K- Hello boyfriend.
A- Hi
Kripa went and sat on Angad's lap. She put her hands around his neck and kissed him.
A- You seem to be in a good mood
K- Not really...I'm actually in a bad mood
A- Really? Then I'd really like to see you in a good mood.
K- You would?
A- Yes
Angad kissed her again.
K- Okay, then you'll have to do something for me
A- Anything
K- Help me set the table
A- WHAT?
K- Help me set the table, and I'll be the best mood ever.
A-…….I'm good with you being in the bad mood too.
K (laughing)- Angad….please
Kripa kissed him again, and again, and again. Angad picked her up and pushed her to the wall as he passionately kissed her.
A-(breathing fast) Lets go
K- (breathing fast) Where?
A- To get you in a good mood.
K- Yay!! Lets go
Angad and Kripa set the table, and Urvashi finished cooking. They all sat together and joked and laughed and enjoyed their dinner. Meem ate dinner with her huge family in a big table. It was a big dinner. Shazad sat in the basketball court alone, as he ate his taco in the moon light. Ms. Nisa was on a date that night. As she was about to drink her champagne, she saw Mr. Das in the bar eating his steak in the middle of thousands of strangers and still enjoying, yet here Nisa was with this man he had known for a month, and still felt so alone. Raj was in his kitchen trying to warm up his pasta on the stove, he burned himself and in anger threw the pot on the floor. Vedika was sitting in the table with tears in her eyes…staring at the empty chair. The chair where once her mother used to sit…as we go around Vedika house, we see her mother's picture on the wall…with a garland around it. For just yesterday night, her mother had died….no not died, she was killed..just like her father. Vedika was alone and scared. She wanted to call him so badly, just to talk to him, cry to cry to him…yet she wouldn't call him…never…never would she call Angad.

To be cont…

PROMO- Just don't wanna let go

Hope you all liked it, more Angad and Kripa romance coming up.
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!!!!!
Kuch Pal Ka Saath, will have a cool Halloween type part, but not now…in a while.

COMMENTS PLZZZZ

Karishma****
Edited by Desi Pride - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
i love a-k scene,boyfrnd-girlfrnd talks 😳 😆 😳
cont soon 😊 😊 😊

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!! to all


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Posted: 18 years ago
Woohoooooo Agad and Kripa are together woohoooooo! Yaaayaayyyayaa OMG i'm overreacting NOT! Yaaaay stpid Vedika if she calls Angad then she is dead too!😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Writers Comments-

Okay, Anagd and Kripa are together, and happy so far. Im happy about that too. But! Vedika's mother just died!Keep dat in mind. There are 9 characters in my fan-fic not just 2. Please be open to all of them, or else it might get hard for you all to enjoy the fan-fic

Edited by Desi Pride - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 Nice part loved Meems reaction 😆 😭 aww poor ved i feel bad for her losing her father then her mother 😭 😳 but angad and kripas part was sweet 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww such a cute part of angad and kripa 😳
anyways continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww meem n shazad areee wayyy cute....lol loved hw meem reacted when she heard bout ak......lol awww angu soo sweeet setting the tabel 2 kripz....n omg pooor vedika 😭 neways continue sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg angad n kripa kiss like million times lol but tehy r 2gether yay!!!!!!
nice part
continue soon

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