VIRMAN SS: REALIZING HIS LOVE UPDATED PART 9 PG 67(17.11.14) - Page 18

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Awesome Teaser 😛
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now waiting for the update😊

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PART 3:


HI FRIENDS... I am here with the next part of my OS(i.e) converted SS... Everything is dedicated to you all dear lovelies...

"Donno what I had done? I hate myself for being the sole reason for her pain and sobs everytime..." said this he rubbed his foreheads and closing his eyes unable to see her running away from him with her uncontrollable tears...

He went out of the party hall... He went out and sat at the garden bench. He was highly disturbed by his own feelings. Maya came towards him and started to talk something... "Will you please leave me alone for some time" he said angrily. Maya didn't expected this from him... As his anger is on the peak, she moved away without disturbing him. He was rubbing his hairs and closed his eyes in frustrations... But Manvi's image is often seen whenever he closed his eyes... her memories were conquering his thoughts at any times. He opened his eyes immediately bursting in anger...



"God... why she is always visible to me even though I am closing my eyes... why she is wandering in my mind always though I controlled myself not to think over her... why should I get this much pain whenever I see her tears... Why my heart always pleasing to see her... I need a conclusion today... WHY??? WHY???" he shouted alone... After few minutes... he broke his silence saying, "am I really loving her? Am I in love as she said"

Meera watched everything happened inside between Virat and Manvi. She know her friends were in a toughest time. But now it's time to make Virat understand everything she thought and came near him, "Virat... what was the problem between you both? Haan? You both were not like before. I can see the same pain in your eyes which I am seeing in Manvi's eyes these days... I asked her so many times but she didn't said anything. Common yaar... this is the last day that we all together?" she said concernedly.


Suddenly, Meera's mobile was ringing... She attended the call shockingly saying, "It's Sheethal aunty... Manvi's mom". Virat immediately looked at her curiously.


Meera: hello aunty... how are you?

Sheethal ma: haan beta... I am fine. Thank you. I just call you to ask Mannu...(in a tensed voice)

Meera: Manvi???

Sheethal ma: haan... where is she? I just dialed her number so many times but she is not attending my call. Is everything alright beta?

Meera: (blinking unable to answer her question) aunty... aap don't worry. She's fine. We are in our farewell party today... may be that's why she didn't noticed. Is there anything important to say to her?

Sheethal ma: wo... actually beta... I have a good news. We just planned our Mannu's engagement next week. It's her papa's wish and everyone of us are very happy and satisfied with the groom. He saw our Mannu in our family function. He loves her so much and his family proposed us for the wedding... We like them and agreed for it. But Mannu's decision will be the final one... If she say YES, then we can say our decision to them. That's why I wanna talk to her... I thought she would be with you.


Meera was shocked hearing her words... she donno what to reply for it... but somehow she wanna manage the situation so that Sheethal wouldn't worry.


Meera: Really... congradulations aunty... She would be with Ria I think. I'll say this to her immediately and ask her to call you after the party.

Sheethal ma: Thank you beta... take care.


Meera cut the call but her worried face tensed Virat... "What happened Meera? What happened to my Manvi? Why are you looking tensed?" he asked continuously shaking her shoulders.


"Aunty told me about Manvi's engagement... She would be someone's next week" she told...


He felt like his heart was cutting deeply by sharp weapons... Her words were piercing his mind, body and everything... He never understood this feelings these days... but now, he was shocked... He was not ready to give his precious gem to someone else...


"no... She is mine... forever..." he shouted unconsciously... but he realized what he said suddenly and went to a deep thought...


"I got the answers for my questions now..." said that his lips curved with a very sweet smile...

Meera wants to make him realize completely. She wanted her friend to be happy with her loved one. She moved to him and asked with a strict face, "No Virat... You are just a good friend of Manvi. How can you say this? Ofcourse you like her... but how can you say that you love her? Haan?"



Virat thought for a moment and closed his eyes... Again her images were flashing on his eyes as well as heart... "Yes... Meera... I was confused till. But now I am cleared... I can't live without seeing her face even for a second... you don't understand how I suffered these days without able to talk her and see her... I only knew how painful it is when she avoids facing me and talking to me. I missing her very badly" he said.


"I knew it Virat... You love her as much as she loves you. But now you have realized your love..." she said and gave a friendly hug to him...


"But donno what she'll do if she knew what her parent's plan... they were waiting for her decision and she was not there to attend the call..." she said worriedly...



Meera took her mobile and dialed her number so many times... even Virat also tried her number... but she didn't attended anyone's call...


"God... where she'll be? Why she's not attending our call?" he said worriedly to Meera... She dialed her hostel number to ask her wardon about Manvi. But she was shocked beyond the limit after knowing the answer from the wardon... Virat shook her shoulders, "Meera... where is Manvi? Say something yaar... plzzz" he shouted.


"She just went to airport... She got ready to go Rishikesh... Soon she'll be leaving this place. Go and catch her soon Virat... Wardon said she was crying continuously till she vacate the room... She will be worrying more now... she would be broken seeing you with Maya..." she said worriedly... "How could you go without even saying me once Manvi?" said this Virat left the place and hurried to the airport to stop her leaving his love incompletely...


He reached the airport and saw Manvi standing in the queue with her luggage... he took a deep-breath to know that she was still there...


Manvi was worried so much thinking her love cheated her today... She was broken completely after seeing him with Maya. She can't erase the moments she spent with his loved one. She can't forget the moment she gave herself to him... they are killing her every passing seconds. She knew that she can't get back anything she lost... But going out from there will atleast give her some relief... She was yearning to see her mom and craving to cry in her lap... So she got ready to go Rishikesh without biding adieu to her friends... She can't see him and say her final ...

Virat was walking towards her inside the airport... Her heart rushes that he was there and very near to her... She turned back to check her feeling was right... her eyes were wandering every nook and corner there... But her sight didn't reached his spot. Virat observes her and realized that she was searching only for him... She closed her eyes in disappointment thinking that might be her illusion. Tears are continuously slipping from her eyes in that pain of loosing him.



She was ready to move inside now... She took her luggage bag and stepped slowly... She stopped there realizing his touch on her shoulders. She turned back and looked at him. "Are you ready to leave me Manvi? How dare you?" he said and pulled her in his embrace...


She cried even more in his shoulders and said, "Sorry Virat..."


He parted her from his embrace and dragged her outside the airport... They were standing outside in the parking area where no one was there.



"Sorry? Sorry for what Manvi?" he asked.


She was blinking on his question seeing his face and stood still without a reply...


"I should be sorry to you... I am sorry Manvi... I am sorry for whatever I said... I am sorry for the reason behind your pain..." he said cupping her face.

"And... I LOVE YOU" he said finally...


Manvi nodded her head negatively and moved from his hold... "No... I don't agree this now... Don't lie Virat... How could you get changed this soon? Haan? I'll die if you cheat me using love..."

"Try to understand Manvi..." he said again trying to hold her hands. But she moved back removing her hands harshly from him.



"You thought me only a friend... You said you don't need me more than a friend... then..." her words got chuckled by her sobs. But she continued wiping her tears... "How could I believe this Virat? I saw you holding Maya's hand and ..." she can't speak more... She fell down on her knees and crying more closing her face with her little palms.

He can't see her crying like this... He also kneeled near her and pulled her in his arms... He hugged her tightly and kissed her forehead.

"yes... I love you Manvi... I need you not only as a friend... not only as my partner... but need you to be mine... to be my life..." he said.



He also added, "I am sorry my jaan... I did a huge mistake. But I just realized this and came to you... Now, I can understand how much it would be painful when you see your loved one with others... Your ma called Meera and informed about your wedding alliance... They are waiting for your decision and then engagement. I can't imagine you with some one Manvi... I'll never leave you. I wanted to hold you like this till my last breath... I LOVE YOU JAAN... trust me" he said...



Manvi was very shocked to know about the wedding plans of her mom. She reacted immediately, "Virat... Plzz don't leave me to be someone's... I love you... I love you Virat" said this she cried in his arms and hugged him. Her hug became even more tight and passionate now... "Don't worry baby... I am with you" he said pulling her more inside his arms.

I am over with my third part now... I wish to finish it as a OS till this. But I wished to continue this journey towards our virman wedding. It'll be not an easy task for Virat to marry her just like his realization... You'll gonna see the jealous, possessiveness, pain, romance in this story along with some Virman's family fun... Hope you'll like this. I wish to know your comments and doubts regarding this my dear lovely readers...


THANK YOU FOR BEARING ME...


TAKE CARE🤗


Please check the note given below my dolls...


Edited by madhuharini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

HI FRIENDS...

A huge thanks for your suggestions and wishes for encouraging me to continue this Os into SS... And I am completely dedicating this SS for you all my dolls... I didn't expect this. Only because of your trust and support, I can do this... thank you again from the core of my heart... Here comes all your individual suggestions...

Abbay: its totally your wish dear!!!!

Prathe: wow i guess all will be more than happy if u change this to ff dear...would love to read more of u r stories but thn decide wat u feel the best deat
os to ff is a gud idea and will be more happy to

Devan.monalisa: It will be nice if you make it a ss! Waiting for it!

Jayprabu: its upto you

Jannat94: Abi it's ur WISH I love ur all updates in ur stories...

Niaksharma: Of course we need ss...
Like to read this concept more...
Too good...idea.. Do long..

Kicha111: As u wish

Bt wl b happy if u cont d story wth more update

Meghna325: Abi it is really up to you I love your stories .

Kulsum Virman: go with it as you planned slow or fast doesnt matter its just awesome to read

Virman_superhit: Wow... Is that even a question to ask us... ..

I am sure there is no one who wouldn't want u to continue.. .. U turn it into a ff and we would b with u and keep reading and commenting... Like always... ..

Please turn it into an ss or ff.. Whichever u r comfortable with... Just one request... Plzzz make Virat realise his love soon... Hehe.. Can't c Maanvi sad.. .. Just give us their confession soon...


Nidakh: hey i like ur story continue if u want and can manage to give regular updates


Virumannu: SS...


Chandiniebinda: Pleaseee continue with this story..

I really like it..

Pleaseee..

And thanks for the PM..


luv_nishal: keep going dear


Preethi18: keep going dear...we luv tis story so no worries...


lavanya_sweet: do u really need to ask ??
make it an SS would love to read


.jai.: as u wish dear.. but would love to read more..


Negha: You make it as a SS


JESMY143VIRMAN : AS YOUR WISH DEAR.


.LiveLaughLove.: I think u should make it a ss if possible


Hangok: would love to read more, but you should decide,
i just want to read your works,
they are just great


Shirhid: hey its a fabulous story

i would like to read more

bt its totally upto u


niki795: love if you make into SS
continue soon
waiting for update


pink1: but the tile is realization his love if he realize love to her there nothing
if u want this story become os to ss then show like that he relies his feeling
and before he confess she left him and he feel guilty and regret that he can't
tell his feeling to her and he will search to her his feeling it my think and its depend
upon u what u want because this u story if u want u os or ss and it totally depend upon
u how this move if I provide my suggestion u feel bad or hurt from my comment then sorry for that...

hmm right update soon but I want little bit he should get jealous before confess his feeling to her because he also get little hurt see her with another guy how she going through pain and hurt update soon


ambarsariya: as your wish sweety...

I think it wud not b fun anymore reading family drama...

turn it into a love story...depends on u...

wud love to read anything you write...

but decide soon...

love ya...


nia333: yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai!!!...Iam always ready..love to read more... n more...
Pls continue
AUTHORJI..


Angelic_friend: OMG! OMG! This os... may be the soon to be ss is actually amazing!

It is so emotional di!

Feeling very bad for my mannu!

I want Virat to realize his love for his Manvi!

Maya is actually annoying me a lot!

Really eager to read di...Update soon!

And yeah! Before you ask me the answer to your question, I must say you know what I want... If not sure read the first line!

Take care!

Love you abi akka!


Kusharberry: change it into an ss iam waiting for ur update


Rachel19: Oh my god thats a awesome idea
Please change this os into a ss
Wanna read more
Please continue soon


Abqurah: as you wish dear


GOOGLU: ABT NOTE DEAR...
REALLY LIKE THE IDEA TO CHANGE THIS OS IN TO SS...
EGRLY WAITING FOR UR DECISION AND NEXT UPDATE..
...THNX ALOT FOR PM DEA...


naina927: Definitely convert it into a ss...

Waiting for the update...


virman.lover: awesome update

feel bad for manvi

plz turn it into ss

I would love to read more

thanks for the pm

thank you so much for all your valuable suggestions and ideas... I feel very special to get all these... and one more special thing, I got a very special new reader this time... who is none other than our NAINU... I am very happy to get her comments as I am a big fan of her works... thank you Nainu...

And Arthypapaye... hope it was upto ur expectation...

TAKE CARE MY LOVELY FRIENDS🤗

Edited by madhuharini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yayy! Update mil gayi.. and I'm first! Hoo hoo!😆😆😆

Coming to the update, it was damn good akka! I just thoroughly enjoyed it!
😃👏👏👏

Virat is in so much pain... that's ok as he realised his love for his Mannu!

Manvi believed him... Thank God! I'm really eager for reading the upcoming parts!😳😆😉

Waiting to see a passionate and possessive Virat di!😉


Let me wait and watch how the story proceeds!😉

Take care!🤗


Love you abi akka!❤️

Edited by Angelic_Friend - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

Yayy! Update mil gayi.. and I'm first! Hoo hoo!😆😆😆

Coming to the update, it was damn good akka! I just thoroughly enjoyed it!
👏

Virat is in so much pain... that's ok as he realised his love for his Mannu!

Manvi believed him... Thank God! I'm really eager for reading the upcoming parts!😳😆😉

Waiting to see a passionate and possessive Virat di!😉


Let me wait and watch how the story proceeds!😉

Take care!🤗


Love you abi akka!❤️



thank you so much Papaye...
very happy that you read it first even without my PM...
luv you too...
take care
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Update...Thanks for Pm...

Loved this update and Virat confession Part...Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Part...Loved It...Virat Confession Part Amazing...
Thanks for Pm...
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update finally he realize his
toward her waiting now he will
make her his life partner with facing
a lot of problem from there family
and waiting to see possessive and angry
for his love update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
update was awesome.
finally virat realise his love.love virman moment in airpot.
manvi parents fix her marriage.can't wait to see what virat will be do.

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