ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#691

beautiful update...

very romantic and sensual..

last part of the update scared me ..

why she is so insecure and why she reacts like this..

what happened in past..

i'm really curious..

very interesting..

thanks for pm..

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Neetz11690

@Neetz11690

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#692

lovely n romantic☺️

khushi is so scared that how 'll arnav react when he comes to know the past

w8g 4 nxt upd

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rosaline

@rosalinesibs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#693

wonderful update...very curious 2 know der past...

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shubhi7

@shubhi7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Wonderfully superb update...loved their romance !! Waiting to know their past

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#695

Awesome...Romantic update...they share so many interests in common and they did so many things in child hood and they do not remember most of the things...the last part was emotional...why was khushi fearing water...something might have happened...we did not get that info...but when she woke up in shock...she was dazed and she was talking as in trance...I was really worried what happened to khushi...why was she talking like that...there is so much to their past...many secrets are to be revealed...waiting for next chapter as khushi was planning to tell him something...thanks for the PM

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#696

Awesome update...
Love their morning moments... Khushi ask for five minutes and slept 5 hours...😆 ... Poor anrie couldn't do anything but to wait...
Their kiss in pool was so magical... With the ambience you created it was beautiful...
Khushi's fear if water is related to her past... But what happened then... Did Khushi remember the incidence?...She wanted to tell something...Is this what she want to talk...
Waiting for the update...

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#697

Aww.. that was such a beautiful and romantic update <3

M eager to knw what khushi wants to tell arnav..

Thnks for d update and for the PM tooo :D

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#698

i dont think its really needed to comment on the romantic part

becoz i dont have any other word than awesome,beautful and amazing to describe them

i guess there is something more in their relationship

what was she saying

may be she would have seen that accident where arnav got hurt

that might have come across her mind when she was floating on the water

i forgot to tell this last time

if their parents would not have separate them there would be a possible chance of saving arnavs family

khushi is arnavs identity

they did a big mistake by separating them even though it was for arnavs better future

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

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Posted: 11 years ago

#699

Tht was simply awesome
Omggg the love they hav for each other
Hw arnav was broken
Wat is khushi planning to reveal arnav
Waitinggg

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divya

@divyashree449

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#700

It was a awesome,romantic and mindblowing update dear.Loved it.
The way arnav assured about not leaving her was really good, and their mischievous talk about being romantic was cute. Khushi said to wait for 5 mins and slept for 5 hrs.😆
Poor arnav couldnt do anything but wait for her. There are no comments for the romantic part.
It was just hot and passionate and mindblowing.☺️

Loved the way arnav cared for her. and the place was beautiful.
It was going on with a romantic scene with both of them in the pool and arnav trying to remove her fear of water.

But suddenly when khushi sanked in water and she was continuosly murmuring about the accident was really a shocking. She said annav and arnav couldnt recognize it.
I think khushi remembered the accident of arnav in childhood. Arnav was scared to death. he thought he lost her.

It was really emotional. Even i got scared that what happened to khushi suddenly and why she was speaking like that. There are many more secrets about their childhood which is yet to be revealed.
I think khushi is going to talk about that and her fear of water. Its going on interesting. Loved the way you wrote their feelings and emotions.Mindblowing dear.
Cant wait for the next update. Pls pls pls update soon...

Edited by divyashree449 - 11 years ago