ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#701

beautiful update

fully romantic

loved it

thanks for the pm

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sushna

@sushna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#702

wow nice
hope she is fine
thankx 4 pm

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#703

the best part of ur updates is that u slowly build up the situation giving importance to each and every detail and it all seems so natural that it does feel like we r reading an FF

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#704

fabulous update...
the update was so natural that i was so lost in it...
the every emotion, the teasing and the blushing part..
damn beautiful!!👏
o god!! the house before the ocean...gosh!! was way beautiful..
kash mera honeymoon bhi aisa ho☺️🤣
back to the update...
khushi was scared about their futher confrontation
and i can feel and
understand her way of being conscious abt t
heir relationship...
i hope arnav will take this easy...
loved the swimming part 😳
omg😲 khushi having nightmares...my poor arnie was
so feared after seeing her state...😭
truely a caring and loving hubby he is...
waiting eagerly abt coming updates and the past...
update soon😃
loved the whole update..

P.S i know i told u i will pm you my comment but here I am...🤗

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#705

❤️❤️❤️ this beautifully well written update with love &romance👏

🥺 to see arnav like this

Eagerly waiting to read more

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Pari

@ammavedu80

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Love and romance
Kushi got the flashback of the past
Sweet and romantic update

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kritash

@kritash

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#707

awesome.
loved it.
superb.
third part was bit emotional.
eagerly waiting for the next update.

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#708

Amazing update in 3rd part kushi scared me arnav reaction is so imotional what kushi going to tel him super hit update thanx for pm

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#709

that was one very beautifully written update. simply loved the way u described every feelings and emotions with such passion.

for sure arnav is going to know y khushi was made to leave NY one day but i have gull faith in him that he wont let go of khushi or their bond!

liked the fact that they are truly having one magical honeymoon. these are the moments that a couple truly bond and these memories last for a life time

poor arnav, cant imagine wat he must have gone through when khushi was not waking up.

Edited by deeswarna - 11 years ago