ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED - Page 68

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome fantastic amazing and beautiful update...❤️ it to the core...
❤️ mr raizada and mrs raizada...tiger and tigress in real sense...

❤️ the way in a kiss he has made clear his point ...loud and clear...no place for insecurities when he is there with khushi

❤️ the reality check of honey moon and marriage ..

❤️A man who treats his lady like a princess was surely brought up by a queen!... teaches a lot deepu

❤️ it still feels like dream.

Then you will never wake up from this dream.


❤️ ur taste and the ambiance u created beacuse of ur immense strong vision...the outside ocean view breathe taking

❤️ there all lovey dovey passionate moments...

❤️ beautiful morning...his and her care and concern towards each other

❤️ sun set scene..resembling arnav ...it will always be written in my memory till my last deepu...hats off

❤️ the ambiance of setting down of sun ...seeing it from near to get its pure calm view ...both step inside the pool...viewing it live ...wow


❤️ that floating scene ...beyond imagination...u have written such a soul full scene...hats off

❤️ it the way arnav got panic...in real sense it seems like if she is not there with him...his saansain rok jaye gee...beautiful...

❤️ u deepu :)

everything felt so serene ,calm,and peaceful ,👏❤️

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seeta_naips thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a romantic honeymoon

she is still feeling guilty for her family's death

ah so she remembers how he got the cut over his eye
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...one more story from their childhood memory to come...excited to read the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that was an amazing update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anothr epic uodatee..
Hw cn u gt bettr and bttr mann..
Arnav is siimplyyy mindd bloowwing and khushi no less :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just amazing! Eagerly waiting for the next part ;D
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Posted: 11 years ago
khushi is scared of the truth to be out and arnav s reaction to it...
the way he reassured her...that was beautiful...
after the hot passioante moments...
she recollected each memory...as a fresh song written...
no matter how much arnav s aroused he makes sure she s okay...
the marks by her n him..n him teasing her...very naughty 😉
the place is just marvelous...
hayee...the way they were runnign...teasing...
the bathroom..hot passionate moment...
all those encounters were way too sensuous...☺️
the way she discribed arnav to be the sun...
how beautiful it was...
the view..
arnav taking her to the edge...
the kiss while they were floating...all of that was simply amazing...
a childhood memory of sitting together in the pool...
the sudden change in khushi..shouting for arnav...
that was really scary...
poor arnav...he told there is nothing to fear..
but he was dam scared seeing her so lifeless..
she s the most precious person in the world for him...infact his world...
what is it that khushi s gonna tell..is it all about their childhood...
i guess that mark is about what khushi dreamt...
am glad she s fine...
out standing update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
update the next soon dear😃

p.s. so happy to see u back😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it. it was emotional, sensual and happening. what khushi want to talk. eager to know.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it so cute! what happened to khushi?? i hope its nothing bad!
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Posted: 11 years ago
good to c u!!!!
must say i have been missing ur updates like hell!!!!
it was awesome update!!!!
loved it!!!!
i guess arshi r gonna discuss some past events!!!!

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