ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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gmsk

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Awww..

Very beautiful <3

Loved reading it

Thnks for d PM..

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

such an heart warming update deepthiya👏👏

just so damn beautiful.. and probably one of the best love making scene i have ever read...

you've done a marvelous job

very beautifully written⭐️

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

loved it to the core of my heart

it was amazing

not only becoz they consummate their marriage

but ur amazing words to make us feel their love :)

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dikshita

@dikshitamehta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

loved d update

arnav is chooo sweet...

he care for khushi so much

i love ur ff 2 much

everytime after reading ur update i end up saying that u r an outstanding writer

will w8 for ur next update

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Ah!! what a romantic update.. this is how a man should love his woman.. i am sure the next part is going to wild and on the blog😉

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Dis was one of d best chapters ever!!
Great update.

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Awesome mind blowing superb update dear!!!! Loved it so much... Can't wait to read the next part:-))

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Mindblowing update u butifuly describe arshi i think those desparate for arshi honeymoon have in peace i truly lov this story update soon

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Mindblowing update u butifuly describe arshi passionate night i think those who desparate for arshi honeymoon have in peace now i truly lov this story update soon

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Finally SR ho hi gayi👏
haayyeee damn romantic and passionate...
i was getting restless when the all things were happening..
the landing, the showing house, getting ready...
cant they direct jump to the bed..🤣
last me wahi to aaye ...😆
but the way u describe it was hatts off..
her nervousness, his impatientness..
damn good..
i was reading like flowing with them...
having goosebumps up over my skin...
jiska hume tha intezzaar... SR completed..
now waiting for some more romance filled update..
morning SR bhi de do ab😆😆
imaptiently waiting for the next part
loved d whole update...
wondeful and romantic chappy..
❤️