ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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Aplihs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

That was mind blowing amazing...

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dis_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

chap 41

arnav fulfilling her dreams was really awesome

everyday he is giving her surprises along with love

loved it

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ranjanatripathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

You excel at writing emotional scenes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was the best ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The wedding!!!!!
The presence of her parents!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everything was just excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!

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dis_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

sissy my words are not enough to appreciate u

u got all the beautiful ideas to make this story awesome

thank u for writing such an awesome story while u too have ur own life

today i have no words to comment for this update

it has everything there

but now i really wanna know about khushis past

theres something big in their past

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asthagarwal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#305

Unresd on Pg 38 😉

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mishal07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Superb update👏

Awww arnav fulfilled her all wishes loved it😊

You wrote beautifully⭐️

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Loved it!! Arnav definitely needed a lot of Khushi in his life:). Though I wonder why she was sent away? Looking forward to the next updates. Thanks for the pm x