lovely update never thought even in my wild dreams that the cliff hanger is going to turned into such an emotional scene between the two...especially the way arnav gone numb after seeing the scar was out class...i am loving this TO DO OR NOT TO DO btw the two ;)...awe even khushi was thinking that he is going to DO but then her please please not to do tonight was hilarious...awe thats so sweet of her as she wanted to hold him while doing it ,woh bye tight hold :)
arnav also in dilemma of do or not to do ...he wanted to control but at moment it felt like he is unable to control any more but then the way his eyes had seen the brown spot... i ll be honest with u i was in gutter thought of that brown spot but u have turned it into scar hehehehe...i was thinking k awe arnav obviously if its on left it is for sure on right too but...gone crazy i know...LOL...LOL...sorry 18+ comment...hehe
such a heart touching story of scar ...i loved it beautifully written deeps that scar on her heart ,in true sense symbolised there pain ...the way both parted from each other ...ufff very very emotional...i loved it
khushi asking him to hug her tight was like wow really it was THE MOMENT btw the two...she felt his pain more than her owns...she avoided the topic...asking for food...knowing he also had not the one...awe so sweet the way he feed her..and carry her in his arms to bed..very very awesome and sweet gestures...
hehehe he thought her hands as blades...very innovative yaar...awe he got it on his hand ...and her stopping him from washing it...that mujhay chorde k jao gay was like hyeee khushi :)
i guess we should stop here considering ur disabled arms...LOL...LOL...deepu tooo good yaar...
i cant wait,prepare urself well...omg arnav wt u r going to do...hahahaha that is awesome line :)...even me dying to know now...hmmm khushi p r e p a r e urself well girl...he is going to rock ...hehehe
deepu awesome lovely dresses for both payal and khushi...hyee he wanted to see her belly button always...kiya romantic guy mil gaya hay yaar khushi tumhain...loved it...
there early morning phonic talk shawk was like wah wah carry on but obviously kaam bhee tu kerna hay ...hehehe...it was fun...so they leaving after wedding means they going to see the tree too...its story going to be disclosed soon...mujhay kiyo lag raha hay there can be written arnav and khushi...is he really going to take her to RM..me also lil sad like khushi...come on arnav do it yaar...otherwise next chum date is coming...LOL
arnav at akash haldi ,and khushi with payal...but arnav thinking abt his own haldi time and khushi her...yaar how come love bring two souls itna close that they can feel each other pain so beautifully...wt she missed he regrets for it...him taking her into there and applying haldi not to forget mentioning with the cute pic of her ...that was damn sweet ...lovely ,awesome and superb...both the parts r beautifully written...so much passionate yet doing nothing though...as per arnav ...:)...
just observed that how u have written whole first part inside bed room with emotions ,intensity,and passion...such a strong grip on writing deepu ,wow...and the second one families enjoying the ceremony ...there presence...happiness ...iss say achi koi haldi hoge kiya :) :)...PERFECT :)
PS: thank u so much deepu for making him kiss her scar ...that brought tears ...very touchy gesture ...loved it
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