ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Superb parts.. Falling in love with this FF more and more..

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Awesome update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved Arnav and Khushi romance

Arnav remembered their separation so clearly

Khushi knows the reason why she was separated from Arnav

but just cannot imagine how Arnav will react if he knows the truth

He is such a lovely husband he understands her so well without Khushi's telling a word

They are fulfilling every rituals what they missed in their wedding

It was very nice of Arnav to apply haldi to Khushi

Very beautiful update

Waiting for next update

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

that was quite an emotional one with the haldi moments...

lovely...

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Swathi/Ammu

@Swathiarshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Nice ... Worth the wait update😃

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

yeh ... once again attended the haldi ceremony of arshi and that too in private 😉 😆

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navjot7

@navjot7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

awesome updt
haldi part is lovely
like arnav i also want to know why their parents seprate them
thnx for pm
updt soon

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Lala seriously, never imagined you wud think THAT brown spot..Damn girl...so gutter..I clearly mentioned on her shoulder blade still your mind wandered to gutter..Ab iss ladki ko mein kya karron..ROFL..i know u wrote it clear abt shoulder but the moment when his eyes went on the brown spot ...just for aik pal k leay i was drawn in gutter...hehehe

For me the best imagining his blush smile right after she asked that..LOL..I know I wrote it and I am going crazy...yup deepu his smile in the end on khushi continous asking wt he meant by that was uff and woow :)

Heehheee what else will he do? He will that every reader is asking me almost for last 3 weeks..ROFL sab ke sab bechare...More desperate than ASR ..i know but me more than happy the way u r taking it step by step...take ur sweet time ,no worries :)

Restless Soul ROFL...Palm tree sequence is not coming now..It will be clear much later after their SR..ok will try to wait but kiya kerain control nahi hota...u know curosity kills the cat..hehe

Aww dont thank me...He better kiss the scar..warna waatt lag jathi usse. You wont believe I wrote the first part 3 times..I wasnt happy, I had to re-write 3 times...I was going nuts..I am glad the emotions came across well. And you know I want to write this but I am sure its explicitly understood by people who believes in love. He kissed her scar but his mind didnt wander around to go beyond that. If one may go na*ed infront the other person in situations like these, people like ASR will not look through the phy attributes and they will try to reach the soul which is what I wanted to emphasize and equally Khushi as well didnt feel shy the moment his face turned to worrysome.

I love this chappy..Zhank you for beautiful feedback

very well said deepu the moment it came to the pain they shared ...it was not at all lust or anything but eyes were only seeing the childhood memory,pain ,their separation all in that one scar...although it must be healed up with time...but it became bleeding fresh once again in their heart ...u rock girl...kitna pyaara likha hay yaar tum nay,love u loads :)

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Very beautifully written..⭐️

Part 1 - wow!! superb never thought they have such a painfully memory to share😭.. you explain all the emotions so well,( pain, sorrow, anger and their deep love)...⭐️

Seems like shashi is going to face ASR ..

Arshi is incomplete without teasing so like it😉..

The way he hide the surprise is nice..

Part 2- Like both the dress.. wow!! the way Arnav applied the mehandi to her bride..⭐️

waiting waiting for thursday😊..

Just wanted to ask how about the Palm tree near pool, as Khushi's mother had told her??

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ranjanatripathi

@ranjanatripathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

It was a superb...rather mindblowing update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for the marriage to get over so that they have their own private time...not that they have not been managing so in between!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Awesome update
Loved there past as how Arnav never liked khushi in tears
And I was wondering what will happen when arnav comes to about there separation...??????...

The dresses are awesome
I loved it
All in all awesome update
Waiting for yhe next update
And dear a question when will you revel what is on the garden which Garima asked khushi to look at farmhouse???????
Update soon