Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #2 [ Completed ] - Page 82

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Posted: 11 years ago
I always look forward to reading updates of this particular FF because sometimes you do not need all the evilness and the villians to make a story interesting. Sometimes a simple and a beautiful definition of love is all that you need to get hooked to it.
Like towards the end when she was feeling uncomfortable in those clothes, he simply draped his coat over her shoulders, then how they simply hailed an auto to Juhu beach instead of hiring some expensive car to Taj or Oberoi maybe, instead of pasta or other continental dishes, they were more than happy to share a plate of pav-bhaji. This is where the true essence of the FF lies.
I am so happy to see Payal's dream coming true. I love it when Khushi feels escatic over her friend's victory. These two deserve all this and much more. Payal and Sumer are going great together. Their relationship is progressing at a steady and a comfortable pace. While Arnav-Khushi together are explosive, their love is amongst the most purest you must have come across.
Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.
That was so romantic.
Khushi whisked away to Mumbai her dream city by her boyfriend Arnav.
Nothing but the best for Arnav's girlfriend.
I was so happy for Payals success.
Khushi's speech about Payal dream coming true brought tears to my eyes.
I can't wait to read more.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
A dedication! And that too for me, yet I'm late! Urgh! *ashamed*

But mints! Thank you so much for this! Such a wonderful chapter! Lovely man! I'm definitely lucky!! Thanks buddy! And its your wor that earns the praises and all well deserved too!


Now I'm super happy with payala idea! They look so good together in my fav color!

And I'm super proud of Payal! You have shown a very strong character in her!


Sumer and payal! Gradually moving on I'm liking it!


Beach arshi rabba ve! Bliss!


Precap is interesting!

Also a special mention on the feelings part! The insecurities scene! Lovely description and getting over with it by just stating I love you!


Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update..arnav is a Prince Charming for khushi who filled her life with happiness and love, and he is fulfilling her every wish...how romantic...and awesome dresses..arnav is clean bowled after seeing her in modern attire...lovely update...thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome, d things arnav does for khushi just to bring a smile on her face makes me go awww...lovely update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
this is wat i call an absolutely perfect update. it was just awesome and i cant stop myself from falling for ur super sweet and way too handsome arnav. he is truly a prince charming. he is fulfilling every of khushi's dreams without even her having to say wat she wishes for. i hope that this mumbai trip is going to be one very special journey with many sweet memories that they are going to cherish all their lives! n he is so protective by the way he knew she was feeling uncomfortable and gave her his jacket, such a gentleman.

i can understand khushi's insecurities but wat matters the most that arnav fell in love with the girl she is, modest in her thoughts without those fancy modern clothes. so y would he ever want to see her differently. he sees the real inner khushi who has a golden heart and an amazing girl. anyway its the people who make the clothes not the clothes that make people wat they really are

im so happy for payal, she has made it and she has realised her dream through her dedication and hardwork! she is awesome young lady and it sweet to see that she gets along so well with sumer. maybe in the long run it will be something more than friendship between them:)

i really hope that you are going to update the next part soon because the precap was so damned romantic!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update !!! so khushi surprised arnav.. however it pained arnav to come across khushi's insecurities.. well their love can win anything and khushi will overcome her insecurities as arnav's love will make her forget her there is any difference between them.. finally khushi visited beach in Mumbai.. loved the update...

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haye Mints this Arnav singh Raizada is such a dream boyfriend? Makes me want to ask you kaha milega yeh? 😳😆
I am so happy for payal she definitely deserves all the accolades which will soon be coming her way and what else on top of that she also has sumer now by her side. Sone pe suhaga this is.

And that dress Oh my God it was beautiful and i can quite imagine khushi looking astounding gorgeous in it...bechara Arnav. 😳

So the teaser for the next chapter makes me wonder what is going to happen next 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
loved arshi😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
such a beautiful update.. loved their dresses..

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