Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #2 [ Completed ]

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#831

What I love about your story is that it is filled with honesty, dignity and sincerity - no pettiness, no hitting below the belt - the characters have so much depth and so does the story!

Drowning in Arnav-Khushis' love!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#832

beautiful part

loved it

thanks for the pm

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#833

Superb chapter...thanks for the PM

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#834

Another awesome update Mints... Arnav is such a sweetheart. The lengths he had gone to make this a fabulous surprise for Khushi was just so endearing... Loved the way he was missing Khushi by being just a few hours away from him... Loved the little surprise both Payal & Khushi had planned for him... I cannot express how adorable he was when he said that he loved Khushi just the way she was & she did not have to change for him at all, but nevertheless it was great to see Khushi making some effort to fit it into his set of friends, change is always good if it is done with the right intention :)

Their little midnight rendezvous on Juhu beach eating pav bhaji was so cute, love to see these two love-birds enjoy life's little pleasures freely without a care in the world, they are truly so right for each other...

And the other guy that was so commendable was Sumer... He really is a man in love methinks. 😉 A perpetual flirt, feeling suddenly uncomfortable & extracting himself from the clutches of women points to just one thing that his heart may have been booked already... 😉 Payalia is feeling so thrilled to see all this & basking in all his attention. Way to go, so glad to see their relationship flourish...

Hope you are doing well...

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

you hv nailed it dear...

beautiful update

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

Khushi is a lucky person to have a wonderful boyfriend her Prince Charming and on other hand blessed with a beautiful friend more than a sister with her. They both are so caring and loving about her...I just loved it how Arnav wants to do everything for Khushi to make her happy...you have created entirely different world...a world of ARSHI...Arnav is indeed so thoughtful...I feel bad that Khushi is still feeling uncomfortable in Arnav's social world...I know it is not going to change very easily as she has grown up like that...but I know with Arnav's love and constant support...I am he will bring her confident on a higher level...I am looking forward to read more about Mumbai and ARSHI...I so glad Payal and Sumer's friendship is growing gradually...it was an amazing update...

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Very nice update. Proud of Payal. Looks like her show was a grand success. Her hard work and dedication paid off. Also nice to read things going in the positive for Sumer and Payal.

What can be said about Arnav and Khushi. They are just too perfect for each other.

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#838

aahh!!...finally finished reading last 3 parts!!...

n i m sry sry lakho sry for commenting dis late!!...😭

d updates were amazing!!...kya bolu!!!...

every relation is growing so beautifully!!...weather its arshi's or khushi n d raizada's or payal n sumer!!!...

everything is jst perfect!!...

i totally can connect wid khushi!!...abt her insecurities to mend with arnav's world!!!...coz she is very simple grl wid simple dreams!!...on the other hand all arnav wnts is only khushi n nthing else!!!...😳😳

finally payal's dream came true!!...loved d way hw her n sumer's relation is growing slowly!!!...

she deserves all d happiness!!...

feeling bad for akash!!...bt no fear whn anjie is here!!!...😛😉

cant wait for der story to progress!!...

raizadas r lovely!!...n d raizada ladies rocks!!...😛😛

awww!!...pavbhaji at juhu beach wid ur love!!!...aur chahiye hi kya kisi ko!!!...😛😛😳

cant wait for nxt part!!...

thnx for d pm minti...😊

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#839

Wonderful updt thanx for pm just lov it

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#840

Awesome update...

Arnav has planned this trip to perfection... I loved how he care of khushi... He is a prince charming...

Sumer and Payal relationship has improved tremendously... Loved their few found bond...

Payal surprise for Arnav was awesome... Khushi's new attire totally blown Arnav... But I feel bad about khushi that she still is not comfortable in Arnav world. .. Loved how Arnav assured her...

Loved the update...