Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #2 [ Completed ]

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

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Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Fantabulous chapter Mints.. This Arnav of yours is seriously injurious to my heart 😆 I dont know about Khushi but when I read your chapters I feel like crushing this Arnav in a hug so tight that he wont be able to move or breathe 😳😆 My reactions are always like "Haaye 😳", "How cute", "Aww" and what not... You are a super duper talented writer Mints, words in your stories flow like all these beautiful songs. Hugs 🤗

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navjot7

@navjot7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

awesome updt
so arnav family has no problem with arshi relation
his all family know about them
i love this caring arnav
he is taking her to mumbai
thnx for pm
sorry for late comment

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#793

Lovely update! Apologies for the delay!

I simply adored the love filled care oozing update!

Such a bliss to read some thing that is as sweet as this!

Liking the pace surprisingly!

Looking forward to the life changing events!

Cheers

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nature-lover

@nature-lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Interesting, sweet and cute love story
Looking forward for next update
Send me PM when you update next

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Peek a boo...we are looking for you...

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#796

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Mints,

Perfect. Everything fitted in perfectly ...the way he whisks her to Bombay, surprises her by enabling her to attend Payal's big day ...something that they have dreamed of forever...the way Sumer and Payal have reached a great place where they feel comfortable with each other and share a beautiful camaraderie with each other, all their misconceptions cleared and done away with making space for some wonderful...it's almost as he is protecting her and taken her under his wings...not wanting to let anything bad touch her anymore...sweetly endearing .

Arnav is a dream come true,,,everyone needs one,...I want to know where I can get one like him...is there anything that he has not thought of...every detail has been planned perfectly ...what a superb bedroom. The excitement on Khushi's face was so visible with the way you wrote it...her asking him about the cost of it all and thinking about sharing the cost. So typical.

Loved how their reunion resembled one where two people are meeting after a gap of years. But in their simple lifestyle this was huge, the fashion show, the flying to Mumbai, the hotel, the fact that they have not really spent time away from each other adds to their excitement and this unique experience.

Loved how payal and Khushi surprise Arnav with the outfit, her western one. It was stunning. Loved how he reassures her that there is no need for her to change on his account as he likes her for who she is and what she is.

I can understand her feeling the way she does, seeing his world the modern girls and the kind of elite society he comes from ,it is natural for her to feel the way she does. But the fact that he is sensitive to her and these feelings, is good, however I feel these will have to be addressed more permanently, not for anything else but for her to feel as an equal to him or else this could in the future lead to issues between them.

I love how she is so happy for Paayal and that Payal's hard work is rewarded and her show a resounding success...

It's so overwhelming to see the love they share, he cannot keep away from her...and how he is always right by her side to support her, in everything, even to give her his jacket and share a plate of pav bhaji with her. Mesmerised by her simplicity and just her...

Loved the precap...their love is all encompassing..but does she mean they take their relationship forward?

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Main tere samne tu mere samne

Tjhko dekhu ya pyaar karu

Damn .. Payal surprising arnav was awsm ☺️ I wndr will dis surprise "surprise" us 😆

Back to update

Poor sumer Khushi ata hi he have no value in Payal life 🤣

Infct arnav was also having same trouble..

Bt also made sure khushi nd arnav are near only ..Only a inches diff

I loved how Payal is seeing Sumer in a diff perspective nw..

She is changing her feeling towards him...

I loved how Arnav expresed his feeling of how he loves khushi in her style..Nt d way wen she tries to change her for his lfesytle...

I loved d friendship Payal Khushi shares..

D teasing Arnav Nd d kiss on he neck 😃

Ufff he is soo naughty..

Is dis night still Young 😉 😛

Waiting to read more

Cntinuee soonish 😳

Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago

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A_BA

@A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#799

res😊

Edited:

First off, thanks for the dedication - that really means a lot to me. And trust me, the pleasure is all mine. Your stories are so well written and beautifully portrayed that it's easy to support them😊

Now on to the update, I loved it - love the way you portray Mumbai. Since I can actually relate to the city, it makes it more special to me.

I absolutely love that Arnav is planning this trip all the way down to what Khushi is going to wear...he has everything covered when it comes to Khushi! But I love the little surprise she gave him, leaving him stumped in her dress. I'm glad though that he expressed his love for her, with or without western clothing!

I feel bad that Khushi is still feeling uncomfortable in these social settings, but I know it will not change because of the way she has grown up. But with Arnav's constant support, I'm sure her confidence will be high!

I'm looking forward to more of the Mumbai magic that I'm sure you have planned.

P.S. love that Khushi gets the sea-view and gets to finally experience the beach😊 This Arnav is just too romantic!

Edited by A_BA - 11 years ago