Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #2 [ Completed ] - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Congrats on new thread and new banner...
I loved the emotional conversation between Akash and Payal...I thought Payal is in love with Akash...she is indeed a very good friend of Khushi and Akash...I feel sad for Akash when he saw Arnav kissing Khushi...poor Akash...but there is always a difference between a lover and a good friend...and I think what Payal said is correct that she looked up to him as a good friend or a big brother.
She is really in love with Arnav...I hope everything is fine with both of them and Arnav will never hurt her. Now waiting for the weddin anniversary party...but will wait till you are fully recover.
Mints please take care of yourself and not to worry about the updates...health is everything and please take a good care of your health and come back healthy...we will be waiting for you.😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Though i am new to d story, i love d way u r writing!
Great update!
Khushi blushing is one of my fav scenes and dat being described so aptly really makes my day!
Great update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Awesome update
Love Akash n payal conversation.
What happened to Payal? She was humiliated because of being in a relationship. Please tell her story as well.
Arnav n khushi are in love, deep in love. They can't stop thinking about each other.
I like Arnav character in this story.
Precap is interesting. He is inviting khushi n his parents wedding anniversary, not that they are ware of khushi very well but I guess he know to introduce her as her girl friend perhaps n want to give their relationship an official name.
Get well soon n update soon.
Miltay hain break ke baad

P.S. Love the banner.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Beautiful update! Get well soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
All the best to you Mints...Good things await you in the coming new year. Get a good break, rest well and come back refreshed. 🤗
Lost in love khushi i have read plenty of times this must be a rare instance when i am reading about a lost in love Arnav so much in detail it was fun i must say that. 😆
Khushi is lucky to have a payal in her life who not only loves her but also looks out for her.

I am glad that Akash realised his folly so quickly hopefully maybe now akash can move on and you never know maybe fall in love with payal at some point of time. 😛

Can't wait to see the entire raizada families reaction when they see khushi at the party as Arnav's guest.

Thanks for the PM Mints and once again all the best and pakka milenge break ke baad!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
lovely update!

Sweet talkings!

Scary precap!

Apologies for the three line comments will edit after 20th


Cheers
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
it was a fab update
loved it
w8ing for arnav khushi's next date

will be w8ing for next update

Edited by dikshitamehta - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
In this whole chapter the only thing which got me most was that AR having feelings for Khushi. poor guy. but even arnav seems to have strong feeling for khushi so hopes AR finds someone, maybe Payaliya😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Payal is being a supportive friend. To both, Akash and Khushi.

Poor Akash. Seeing Khushi share an intimate moment with Arnav must have been terrible for him.

Arnav has charmed Khushi. He has gone through extreme lengths and it has payed off.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awww super updatewa
look concentrate on health now ...we will wait for the super story to go forward

we love u ...blessings

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