And the latest chapter!!
Chapter 8
"He just want to give her punishment...not want to play with her life... "

I swear to god, I'm like sniffing and going through tissues at seeing him so scared for her. Finally, ma beast's feelin' the guilt. Honestly loved this line so much. Even though he acts like a cruel person, he proves that he still has a heart! This is probably my favourite one out of the entire update. I don't know why, but this provides this sort of justification for the fact that he can't take anyone's life. If you know what I mean...
"Its true he hates her most...but one more truth is..hidden in his heart..he loves her more...
Arjun was just blinding in his anger...he wannted his revange at any cost...
He was fighting with his emotion..."
Another round of applause for portraying his emotions so beautifully. Truly shows a man who is fighting an inner battle. Oh those battle of the mind and heart, always puts a person in the greatest turmoil of all.
"It was the first time..when he can't stoped himself for staring her so carefuly... ..
She was to beautiful to innocent... "
See another urge to whack him. Guy! It takes you three months to realise that fact when it's standing in your face screaming at you to look at it?? 😆😆 Boy, you cuckoo. I have to admit though, it was high time my SHSB decided to actually look at his so called "wify" 😆
"At last Arjun again touched her lips by his...n give breath to his mouth..."
Honestly speaking, this has got to be the most innocently beautiful gesture. I don't know why but it just made me stop and stare at my screen with a goofy smile on my face. Kudos for this one Piya! Though the whole of the bed scene was beautiful, this line just caught me off guard, in a good way.
"She slids more in arjun's arms...n hide her face on arjun's chest..."
😲😲 Did mine eyes just deceive me or did Riya just hug Arjun (once again, I will just pretend to ignore the fact that she was half unconscious)?? OH MY GOD SHE DID!! *does another victory dance* Boo yah! Lol, I just can't get over this part...😆😆

Oh no! Please no! Don't retract back into your shell Arjun! NOOO!!!!! Uff, I thought we would be getting a bit more romance. Ah well, that's what makes this FF so enjoyable! Hats off for nailing a vengeful Arjun! He loves her but he still cannot forget what happened with his sister.
Speaking of which, what the hell has Mr. Mukherjee done??

Me is now on the point of puling out my hair and screaming in frustration because I really want to know what he's up to!! That whole convo between him and Arjun is making me super restless. Although, a big thumbs up to Arjun for ending the call with a bang. Lol, typical SHSB.
Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago
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