#2: ArShi FF: VAS-Undefined*Pt 33 upd* THread 3 Link Pg1 - Page 65

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing upd
aww! cutipie ansh i just love him
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
such a fast proposal wow aman tusshe great ho
arnav trying to get back khushi
4 love stories on track really nice dear
thanks for the pm
ur such a gud writer
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow..I lovd this update...
Especially Arshi scene...
Nd both Aman nd Nicky s so cute...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey, sorry got late to read this one. I don't know how I missed it. Maybe it came during my exams and I missed it.

Anyways, loved the update. Thanks for making something good bwn Arshi too. All other pairs are so lovely dovely. When I see Arnav going near Kushi I get panic attacks now. Because he always end up hurting her. So much that I don't want to see them together in a frame without others around. Because not even for one moment Arnav thinks with his brain and realize Kushi is not cheat. If he see her condition right now, he can very well know she has not married and was not with any rich guy. I can never forget the slap he gave her just after saving her from getting raped. Does he even know what a girl would be going through after such an encounter. Even then he was selfish and wanted his answers and when he didn't get it, he slapped her. I WILL NEVER FORGIVE HIM FOR THAT😡


Now coming to your note part, I understand. I'm a writer, so I can understand your feelings. But I would like to give you an advise, don't take a foolish step. If you feel many are not responding, then after giving a warning in next update that you will immediately clear your list, check the comments and likes next time. And remove the rest from your list. Just because some idiots don't comment, doesn't mean that you should punish the ones who read and appreciate your story. Then you become a worst writer who doesn't consider those who spent their time in encouraging your work. Remove those who are not commenting and write for those who appreciate your work. Don't spoil the spirit of readers. Many great writers often do this, they leave their story half way and leave IF. What happens? After that I was afraid to read a story on-going because we get too much into it and the writers cheat us like that. That is what worst writers do, I'm not talking about their talent but their ettiquette. if you have started something, finish it with full dignity, write for those who matter and wipe out the rest. You are free to ignore my advise too but it was my duty to let you know that with this step you are compromising your credibility.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome.
Now Arnav knew that Khushi was forced to leave him by some body. Hope he will find the person and the circumstance by which Khushi left him. Update was hilarious too..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum update... Nw khushi has strtd meltng
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm they kissed!!!!!

can't wait for Arnav to find out the truth
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipeee..!
10 pages of comments achieved..!
Meenu ab to update kar de..!
Pleeez :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aman is too fast.. hope he doesn't derail.. loved the update... this should give a hint to Arnav..
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice update...
sorry for late comment

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