#2: ArShi FF: VAS-Undefined*Pt 33 upd* THread 3 Link Pg1 - Page 50

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Posted: 11 years ago




NICE UPDATE



AMAN BECAME MAD



YA PAKA IT HAPPEN WHEN NIDI MAKE ME DUFFER ANJU PAGAL THEN Y NOT POOR AMANJI



MY HEARTY SORRY FOR HIM



ANSH AND KUSHI WOW WHAT CUTE MA AND CHILD



ANSH SHARE HIS ALL CHILD HOOD FEELINGS TO KUSHI



KUSHI GIVING EXAMPLE TO HER LIFE AND MADE ANSH HAPPY CUTE PART



ANSH PAKA ASR XEROX YAR SOME TIME I THOUGHT ASR TALKING



ANSH PERFECTLY ASK KUSHI ALL HER LIE OMG



PLZ ARNAV REALISE THE LOVE OF THE CHILD TOWARDS HIS MOTHER



WHO IS THE STUPID NANA USING EVIL WORDS TO THIS SMALL CHILD



FINAL END WITH NIDI WITH ROLLING PIN



NOW WHAT GOING TO HAPPEN TO POOR AMAN JI ?



WAITING FOR NIDI NEXT PAGAL WORK



UPDATE SOON



Edited by vijiasr08 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Unres
Who named you Meenu?
You should be named as *The Devil*
How could you end the update so soon?
I just started reading it and then you said Bye bye??
Huh..
Not fair..
Make it long next time.
Now, coming to the chap.
That was awesome blossom
Loved it to the bits.
Ansh Khushi convo was sooo sweet and I was like 'awww' all the time.
Loving their bond totally.
I just hope Arnav bhi jaldi se maan jaaye..
When r u planning to write their face off?
Jyada wait mat karwana coz uske baad you hv to write lot of Ahem scenes too.
All in all, it was a fantastic read.
Now if u don't update it soon, I'll take that Rolling-Pin from Nicky and hit you.
Samjhi?
Jaldi se update karna..
And wait..
Lemme congratulate myself..
I got the 2nd place..
Yay..
Sabaash Kiran 😆
Stalking on
Update soonwa
Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love u viji baby for the res

Yeh meenu ka kuch na kuch karna padega and on top of that sush proof read it toh phir mera kalyan hona pakka hain

Hey ram main kya karu sab mujhe kaise cute innocent child ke piche pade hua hain
Me not rolling pin pagal

Aman y u r wasting your time on me go and concentrate on arshi it will be better for you otherwise i will show you my devil side

Love the cute scene of ansh and khushi..too adoable

Now what will happen next..you ended on me


Edited by Nickysweet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

superb updt ji..loved it..
poor aman..meri BR ne kya pyaar ka tir chalaya re..phaatu aman to pura ghayal ho gaya
meri sandal queen.chalao na naino se baan re..jaan lelo na jaan re..(meri BR teri pyaar ki chemical reaction ne to aman k dil me chemical locha kardiya re..)..arnav also shocked to see aman like dis(dekh sanki tere pyaar k chemical reaction ne hotwa ko v chaunka diya..lol)
lo agaya little version of the great asr..the way ansh enter khushi's room..jst like his father..baap bete ek jese he hain..love the way he charged on khushi as if he is her father..lol..love the convo of ansh nd khushi..aww poor baby thinks that he was responsible for his mother's death..felt really bad for him..bt love the way khushi make him understand that he was nt atall in fault nd should celebrate his bday for family sake..lovely..
the great asr also amused to see this much bonding of his son nd khushi...both father-son duo can't resist khushi..lol..happy to see that ansh happily wear the dress dat khushi brought for him..
ye lo akhir pahunch he gaya latoo aman apne SQ k pass..hain ye sanki rolling pin se kya karat hai ji..inbestigation karek padi..lol..(aman ko pura hiladala he meri SQ ne..lol..bichara pura phasa)
luking forward for some rub away b/w aman nd sanki..lol
continue soonwa ji:)
Edited by arshi_sush - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ROTFL will ever dis defective piece be all normal and wonder wat'll poor Nicky do with dis defective piece, hope dis one is also a defective piece(Nicky) DM has sent specially designed 4 one and only defective piece in d earth(Aman) to hve some peaceful life and un-interrupted romance with BJ Belly Laugh . Hahahahahaha poor Arnav would be wondering wen did his right-hand man was a defective one while working yrs with him . DM: Ye lo ji. One side u create a defective piece that even after growing like a Saand(Bull) behaves like a child and here u also create a child who is much mature and understanding. Great example of Irony is my Pati Dev. Huh! very true and never knew BJ was also d same no wonder he created Aman with defectiveness 🤣 . Ansh: Oh! So I will fall ill? Are you ill proof? Hehehehe very smart indeed just like his father and how much he has clearly observed Khushi into deep dat he understood her each and every misery in dis cottage 😭 . But more dan dat it was Ansh heart felt confession dat he was carrying inside him for yrs with out opening in it with anyone and glad he was soo free with Khushi . Really felt sad how much he was in grief 4d death of his mother becoz of him, guess now Arnav will show Mr.Choudary messing with him and his son's life Devil. Hahahahahaha loved how Ansh confessed dat he hates girls only into Khushi's ears 😆. DM: Aha, a new fact. Arnav Singh Raizada, many more yet to come. oooh can't wait wen'll d truth come out very soon and finally Arshi be one and Ansh would get a mother's love which he desires while seeing other kids hving a mother . But suddenly he moved back as Khushi tried to remove his pant. Ansh: eeks. Puppy shame . Close your eyes . hahahahaha really enjoyed Ansh being kid wen he behavs all grown up, hope he's slowly coming to enjoy his childhood . Update soon Meenu, can't wait to see now wat Aman is going to get dis time as Nicky is hving rolling pin in her hand, guess dis time he's gonna get poked by d pin instead of sandal 🤣 . Thanks 4d pm.
Edited by saj111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so sweet update.. loved ansh and khushi's bond.. poor ansh is going through so much of pain.. does his so called nana have any brain to say such things to kiddo.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR LOVED ONES!!! GOD BLESS ALL AND MAY THE YEAR BE FILLED WITH HAPPINESS AND PROSPERITY FOR EVERYONE!!! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...lovely update ...
Now what will Arnav do...? I also dint like the fact that Arnavs mom dint have the guts to tell Arnav the truth behind Khushis letter even now and letting Khushi suffer so much in his hands... I thought she was a kind woman... But I hate both Arnav n her... Doesn't Arnav have common sense to think that had Khushi left him for money...why she dint marry any one till now...? I don't think Arnav really deserves her love at all after all his brutal acts... Please Meenu...don't make Khushi accept Arnav easily just for a sorry or even for Ansh's cause...
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww it was very cute update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice dear
Love khushi n ansh,bond
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
thanks for the pm

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