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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Wow finally taarey r Frd n
Thr bond is growing n taani
Also feel same to rey wow yaar
Now waiting for nxt prt plz update
Soon plzz thanks for PM n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Awesome update
Aww..rey gave chocolates to Taani
Nd she accepted that😊
Wow..taarey like each other
Waiting 4 next part
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
hey awesome update dear.. 👏

rey is so dumb

taani gave him to hold the chocolates n he thought that she rejected him!!! 😲🥱😆

seriously waiting for the proposal 😛😉

loved taarey's conversation ⭐️

plz update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
wow superb nd so cute yr taarey msg convo was superb😊waiting for taani's test
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
superub update
finally taani realized her love for rey
waiting for some taarey romance
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
aww such a simple n sweet story...loved it...
continue soon n pm me...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Lovely update
Aww Taarey are too cute
Hmm Rey give Taani chocolate away lol
I like their messages to each other
Can't wait to see if Rey will pass the test or not ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
At first thnkxx a tonzz for sending pm again.. Udpte was mindblowing.. Swaron teasing rey ws nyc.. Lol rey so desperate hahaha... Aww he gv chocolatez to taani.. Haha he misunderstood n gv chocz to kids loll becharai taani.. Msg part ws very cute.. Cn't w8 for nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
awesome updt
loved swaron teasing rey
rey trying to express his feelings to taani
loved their msg convo
updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

PART 3

Next day rey came colg early... as he wanted to confess his love to taani directly.. he also knw that the ans will be +ve but then also he was scared.. as how to propose her.. so he called swaron for the help... swaron knw that taarey has chemistry and both feel for each other but they don't knw that rey indirectly confesses to taani many times..

Rey was aiting eagerly for swaron... but he forgot to inform them to come to colg early... it strike him later after coming to colg and waiting for half an hour.. so he decide to meet them in colg hour only..

Rey was sitting in classroom only.. student start to come one.. and they were shocked to see rey so early.. and rey was giving them awkward smile and waiting for swaroon impatiently... and today only swaron are late... afte some time swaron came and shock to see rey so early and now there shocking expression converted into confused as rey was giving them angry glare.. and they don't have any idea why he is so angry...swaron came forward..

Swayam: hey rey aaj tu itni jaldi..

Rey: mai 7:00 o'clock se yaha tumhara wait kar raha tha..

Swaron were confused.. as he didn't inform them..

Sharon: par wait karne se pehle hume inform to kar dete...

rey: wo excitement mai bhul gaya...

swayam: par baat kya hai..

rey: wo mai aaj..

swayam: aaj kya..

rey: aaj nahi kal wo mai aur..

Sharon: rey kya aaj or kal kar rahe ho... directly come to the point..

Rey(think):oh god Sharon apne siren mode mai aa gayi.. aur mai boluga kal maine taani ko indirectly propose kar diya to wo mujhe mar dalegi.. ab mai kya karu..

Swaron saw rey thinking and speaking to himelf...

Swayam: kya hua rey kuch bol kyu nahi raha..

Rey: ha bol raha hu na..

Sharon: par hume sunai nahi de raha... so jor ka bolo...

Swayam: Sharon chill.. ab bol rey kya baat hai..

Rey: wo aaj mai..

Till then taani enter the class and rey saw so he stop... taani blush seeing him and passes smile...taarey lost in each other.. Sharon got irritated when again he stopped...

Sharon: phir tumhari gadi aaj mai kyu atak gayi...

Rey(still lost): taani ke liye..

Swaron were confused.. but they turned where rey was staring.. and they saw taani.. and she was also looking at rey.. both taarey are lost in each other.. swaron smirk and cough loudly.. they came to world.. taani blushed and smiled at swaron and went to her seat.. rey saw swaron who were smirking looking at her.. rey was feeling embarrassed..

Swayam: ye sab kya chal raha tha..

Rey: wp mai bol hi raha tha..

Sharon: lagta hai swayam aag dunno taraf lagi hai..

Swayam: u r right swayam.. rey mujhe lagta hai wo bhi tujhe like karti hai..

Rey(think): thank god in logo ko puri baat pata nahi chali..

Rey as abt to tell something... before that Sharon drag him to seat behind taani.. so that swaron and rey are sitting behind taani's bench.. and rey was sitting just behind her..

Rey: guys mujhe tumhari help chahiye..

Swayam: isme puchne wali kya baat hai bolna..

Rey: wo mai soch raha hu ki taani ko aaj directly propose kar du..

Swaron: what??

Rey simply nodded his head..

Sharon: it's a great idea..

Swayam: lekin ek baar taani ki bhi feeling jan le... I mean this step should not hurt her..

Rey was abt to say something.. Sharon interrupted...

Sharon: swayam taani ke behavior se evident hai ki wo bhi rey ko like karti hai..

Rey was smiling and blushing hearing this..

Sharon: and when u will express ur love then only ur love life will start... nothing will work when u do nothing...

Swayam: hmm. Here I also agree with Sharon..

On the other hand taani was listening to shareyam... she was blushing when Sharon said that it was evident that taani love rey... and she was impress with Sharon words..

Rey was listening to them very carefully.. he was happy that he got such a lovely friends who are there to show him correct path... but the main problem is how to propose her..

Rey: par mai usse propose kaise karo...

Taani giggle hearing this... but they didn't notice this..

Swayam: isme problem kya hai directly jakar I love u bol de..

Rey(think): wo to mai indirectly bol chukka hu.. but taani kuch aur chahati hai ye mai inlog ke kaise bolu..

Sharon: swayam tum idiot hi rahoge.. rey I will help u..

Rey: yaar Sharon u r such a sweetheart..

Swayam: ho gaya tera..

Sharon: so listen taani ko pata nahi hai kit um aaj usse propose karne wale ho..right

Rey knws that this is not right as taani knws that he is going to propose her today only..but rey nodded as he has no other option.. and taani giggle hearing this..

Sharon explained Sharon how to surprise taani by confessing his love for her suddenly... she was telling that they will do all arrangement in sharon house and will call her and play romantic music.. and they suggest some cheesy line also... taani was adored Sharon for helping his friend.. and she like Sharon idea also but it was not a surprise which rey also knw... so he thought to give a shock to swaron.. she turned back suddenly.. and swaron shut there mouth.. and gave her smile.. taani laughed and said..

Taani: I knw Sharon rey is going to propose me today..

Swaron were shocked and there mouth were wide open... they turned toward rey who nodded in yes..

And swaron gave embarrassed smile to taani and she laughed and turned around.. swaron gave angry glare to rey.. who is now scared of Sharon reaction..

Sharon: what was that??

Rey: wo mai batane wala tha..

Sharon: kab jab hum surprise puri tarha plan kar lete.. agar usse pata hai to tumhe humari help kyu chahiye..

Rey: kyuki pehle wo mera test legi phir decide karegi...(he said with a pout)

Swayam: what??

Taani turned back..

Taani: waise Sharon jab bhi kissi ke liye surprise plan karo tab thoda dhire bolna.. nahi to pata chal jata hai.. u knw diwaro ke bhi kan hote hai..

Rey: taani its not fair..

Sharon: actually taani u r right(taarey raised there eyebrow)...tumhe tab tak rey ka proposal except nahi karna chahiye jab tak wo tumhare test mai pass nahi ho jata..(rey was shocked)

Rey: tum meri friend ho ya taani ki..

Sharon: filhal tum mere sab se bade dusman ho..

Taani : ok u guys carry on with ur fighting... aur rey jab aap pui tarha prepare ho jayege tab mujhe bol dena.. don't be late..(wink at rey)

Saying this she went out... rey wa shocked seeing this bold side of taani... swaron laugh seeing this..

Rey: guys pls help me..

Sharon : I wont...

Saying this she went off...

Rey: pls swayam tu to help kar...

Swayam: mai kya help karu..

Rey: agar mai uske test mai pass nahi hua to..

Swayam(laugh): tu pagal hai rey... wo bhi tujhe pyaar karti hai...

Rey: I knw that..

Swayam: to problem kya hai..

Rey: par..

Swayam: par war kuch nahi... wo tujhe bas tease kar rahi hai.. aur tujhe apne pyaar mai bharosa hai na..

Rey: ha..

Swayam: so tension kis baat ki.. aur tu fail bhi ho gaya to wo tujhe reject karegi...par fail bhi is tarha hone ki wo impress ho jaye..

Rey: I will try..

Saying this he left.. rey went to fire exist tp prepare himself... after talking with swayam he was feeling better.. and thought to propose taani.. but little he was scared... so he closed his eyes.. taani face came in front of him... there talk chat and morning incident...and a smile crept in his lips.. he slowly opened his eyes.. and msged taani to come in fire exist.

Rey: mujhe nahi pata aaj taani kya test legi.. but I am sure ki aaj ke bad couple honge.. as she also love me..

Rey was lost in his thought when FE door open.. he turned and saw taani.. beautiful smile was there in her face with a slight which is due to rey's presence and thinking abt proposal... rey was seeing her with so much love.. he forgot all the tension.. and he moved toward her..

Taani was not able to see in his eyes and see was nervous... rey thought some time ago the girl standing befor him made him nervous but now she is getting nervous.. he smirked seeing her blushed face.. he came near her ear and said huskily...

Rey: test mera hai... daar tum kyu rahi ho..

Taani: daar.. mai daar rahi ..

She said stammering... rey smirked seeing her reaction.. taani gather some courage and continue with stern face..

Taani: aap kuch bolne wale the...

Rey came more closer to her... but taani didn't move..this give more confidence to rey... rey placed his one hand on his cheek... taani closed her eyes.. he brought her face more closer to him... and more toward his ear... give a slight kiss on her earlobe.. taani shiver and clutch his shoulder.. and rey said

Rey: taani tumhe bhi pata hai maine tumhe kyu bulaya hai..

Rey turned his face to see her reaction but she didn't react..and her eyes were closed so he continued looking her from corner of his eyes..

Rey: taani mai tumhe zyada kuch nahi boluga... becoz I knw tum kya feel karti ho.. aur humare bich jo bhi hai usme kabhi word ki jarurat nahi hui.. so aaj bhi mai humare bich koi words aur cheesy line nahi lauga..

He was paused for a moment.. and bring taani more closer by pulling her from waist.. taani gasped at sudden contact of her body with his.. she clutched rey's shoulder tightly.. and rey continue..

Rey: I LOVE U TAANI..

Saying this he placed a kissed on her cheek and look at her face... and when taani that three beautiful word a smile crept in her lips... all awkwardness went out from window.. rey saw that smile which was content.. taani slowly with her closed eyes move her hand from his shoulder to neck.. wrapping her both arm around his neck... and with a slow process she hugged him... rey was enjoying her reaction.. he also hugged him tightly.. digging her face on crook of her neck...

After sometime rey slightly apart from taani.. and said huskily..

Rey: mai ha samjhu aur now also u will take test..(he said with smirk)

Taani laugh slyly...they broke the hug.. taani was standing in front of rey with her hand folded in front of her chest... rey was looking at her with puppy face..

Rey: so..

Taani: test to aap ko dena padega..(taani said with naughty smile)

Rey smirked seeing her.. and pull her from her waist... such taani's both hand are around his neck.. and rey's hand on her waist..

Taani: rey maine abhi tak ha nahi bola hai.. so pls maintain distance.. I am not ur gf..

Rey:u r my gf sweetheart..(taani blushed).. mujhe tumhara yes tabhi mil gaya tha jab tumne mujhe hug kiya tha.. and rahi baat distance ki wo to maintain nahi kar sakta jab tum itna blush karogi..

Taani: rey..(she hit him on her chest)

Rey: so test lena ka irada hai ya mai samjho tum aone student se itni impress ho ki directly pass kar diya..

Taani: test to dena padega.. aur bohat simple hai..

Rey: accha aur wo kya hai..

Taani; zyada kuch nahi.. aap ko bas mere ek question ka ans dena hoga.. aur uske reply ke bad hi mai bolugi aap pass ho ya fail..

Rey: so shoot..

Taani: describe me in one word..

Taani with a smirk asked this question.. as she decide to pull rey's leg... thinking that what he will say.. is she beautiful smart loving or something else and if he said one thing she will ask for another compliment... but he cant say all of this..

But her thought process break when he left her waist.. she looked at him him with confuse face.. his face was showing so much love then why he left her... then slowly he cupped her face.. and came close to her.. starring deep in her eyes.. taani was also starring at him not blinking her eyes.. he came very close to her... cupping her face.. with such a proximity.. moan skipped from taani mouth..

Taani: reyyy...

Rey: one word taani... that's MINE.. u r mine..

Listening this tears rolled down from her eyes.. she wont she get better ans then this.. she just closed her eyes with a smile... rey looked at her teary eyes and he knws this tears are of happiness and approval.. so he came close and put his lips on her.. taani also responded.. and they share passionate kiss.. and start there beautiful relation..





sorry guys for late update... i am little bit busy as i am going home.. and i wrote this update in little hurry and didnt proof reading.. so ignore if any mistake is there..

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