love at first sight-TS updated 19/01

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hi friends... i have written a new ts on taarey... hope u will like it...

LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

PART 1

Swaron and rey are student of st. Louis colg... they are best friend... and swaron are in relationship... rey is very notorious but innocent from heart... Taani is new student in the colg...

Today is the first day of taani in the colg... she entered to the class... rey and swaron were sitting at last bench... as taani entered rey saw her

Rey POV

I saw her entering our class... she is so simple but attractive... she was searching for seat.. I thought to call her but she sat in first bench... I think she is giving her intro to her seat mate... she isn't nervous for her first class... she is very confident... I think her seat mate now friend told her something and she smiled.. her smile is so beautiful... I can't stop myself from looking at her... my thought was broken by my friends...

end of rey's pov

Swayam: rey... kaha kho gaya..

Rey: us ladki mai...

Sharon: konsi ladki...

Rey: that new girl at first bench...

Swayam: she is sweet...(sharon glared at him) mai normally bol raha hu... tum to sweetest girl ho...

Rey: kyu tune test kiya hai... (swaron blushed) now stop blushing...

Sharon: stop it rey...

Rey: guys mujhe us ladki mai concentrate karne do...

Sharon: I think she must be commited...

Rey: what??? Tumhe kaisi pata...

Swayam: itni sweet and beautiful... so its obvious...

Rey: I don't think so...

Swayam: lets see...

Sharon: but how???

Reyam gave mischievous smile to each other... Sharon understood what they are thinking ... she was going to say no... just then professor entered into the class so they settled down in their seats... after their class its break time.. Sharon was trying to escape but reyam caught her...

Sharon: I won't do anything...

Rey: u have to do this...

Sharon: no I wont... pls... I cant...

Swayam: pls sharon...

Rey: now u cant say no...

Sharon: ok..

Sharon went toward taani's seat..

Sharon: hi girls..

Girls:hi

Sharon(to taani): are u committed???

Girl sitting beside taani thought she is asking to her... so she replied...

Girl; ya I am committed... my bf is also in this colg but in different department... u knw he so sweet...

Taani understood that Sharon asked that question to her... Taani gave her disbelieving look and went from their... reyam heard shanni conversation... they came to Sharon... Sharon gave them what the hell look...

Rey: its your fault... koi directly aisa question puchta hai... first u need to introduce urself... and usko kaise pata chalega ki wo quest tune use pucha hai..

Sharon: oh pls... maine ye sab karne mai phd nahi ki...aur use pata chal gaya tha isliye wo waha se chali gayi... waise tu abhi se uski side le raha hai...

Rey: its not like that Sharon...

Swayam: Sharon u r his bff... pls understand him...

Sharon: I am not misunderstanding him... I am just teasing...

Swayam: so u didn't feel bad for taani's behavior...

Sharon: little bit... but now its ok...

Rey: so try it ones again...

Sharon: what???

Rey(with puppy face): pls... isse pehle mai uske pyaar mai majnu ban jao... so pls pata laga pehle se uska majnu hai ya nahi...

Sharon: ok... last time...

Rey: thanx Sharon...

Swayam laughed at sharey... they went towards canteen... they saw taani sitting alone... Sharon went towards taani...reyam sat in nearest table..

Sharon: hi... may I sit with u..

Taani: of course..

Sharon: I am Sharon...

Taani: I am taani...

Sharon: sorry for the direct quest...

Taani(innocently): wo quest mere liye tha...

Sharon: taani pls ... I knw ki tumhe pata tha wo ques tumhare liye tha...

Taani(laugh): I knw... but saman replied... so I thought may be that quest was for her... actly I was shocked hearing ur ques.

Sharon: why...

Taani: u asked directly without any intro...

Sharon(think): tumhari aur rey ki thinking kitni milti hai...

Taani: what???

Sharon: nothing.. so now tell me are u single...

Taani: why are u so eager to knw...(Sharon was embarrassed) .. leave it... I am single..

Sharon: that's great(taani gave questioning look).. I mean single rehna best thing hai...

Taani: I knw..

Sharon: let me introduce u to my friends...

Sharon called reyam... she introduced them to taani... she told taani that swayan is his bf and rey is her bff...they chat for sometime ... then they left... whole day went like that... but taani used to ignore rey...

Next day taani entered to the class.. once again rey was lost in taani... taani knw that rey is looking at her so she used to ignore him... but he was continuously staring at her...

TAANI'S POV:

Omg how shamelessly that guy is staring at me... what's his name I forgot... Oh ya remember REY... what does he think of himself... wait may be he is staring at someone else behind me... I turned no one was their... oh! he is staring at me only... I will also stare at him... I also started starring at him but he didn't stop... really it feels very irritating... but something is there in his eyes which is attracting me... no taani u can't think like that... oh god he wont stop... and I cant continue... so I turned...

After that class I saw rey called Sharon who is sitting in front of him... and he said something to her and she came towards me... omg now what they are going to do... I just ignore... I knw its not nice to ignore but... oh I think she is calling me... god pls help me...

Sharon: hi taani...

Me: hi Sharon...

Sharon: if u wont mind can u join us...

Taani: umm.. wo...

Sharon: no excuse... come with me.. I knw u r feeling bore here...

Omg how she knw that I am getting bore here... actually I am not used to sit quietly... or study like nerd... I knw I am topper but it doesn't mean that every topper is nerd... my thoughts were disturbed by Sharon...

Sharon: are u cuming...

Me: yup...

Me and Sharon went toward her seat... rey and swayam were also there... I said hi to them and sat with Sharon... And after that class started ...

After the class I was about to go when rey called...

END OF TAANI'S POV

REY: taani kaha bhag rahi ho...

Taani: aisa nahi hai...

Rey: wait lets go together...

Taani: ok...

There was silence for sometime... Sharon thought to give sometime to them...

Sharon: swayam tum mujhe kahi lekar jane wale the na...

Swayam: kab???

Sharon: mai dekh rahi hu jab se tum relation mai aaye ho mujhe bahar nahi le jate...

Swayam: aisa nahi hai sweetheart...

Sharon: to chalo...

Swayam: ok...

Sharon: taani tum rey ke sath jao... mujhe swayam ke sath kuch kam hai...

Taani: Sharon its ok... mai akele chali jaogi...

Rey: taani mai tumhe drop kar dunga... Sharon tum log jao...

Sharon: bye...

Rey: so where u stay???

Taani: rey seriously.. mai chali jaogi...

Rey: mai bol raha hu na mai tumhe drop kar deta hu...

Taani: rey why don't u understand ki hum abhi mile hai aur hum abhi aise nahi ghum sakte...

Rey: one min hum ghumne nahi ja rahe... I am just going to drop u...

Taani: rey pls...

Rey: ok...(taani gave sign of relief) but one condition...

Taani: what??

Rey: give me your no..

Taani: are u mad...

Rey: dekho mai tumhe drop karne nahi ja raha par ye to confirm kar sakta hu ki tum sahi salamat ghar pohach gaye...

Taani: mai first time ghar akele nahi ja rahi...

Rey: par ab tum akeli nahi ho..

They were silent for sometime... taani was so touched with rey's word... rey's eyes showed care for her and infinite love which is so pure... his eyes were telling that every word that he said is not just word.. he meant that...

Rey: taani give ur no number or else I will drop u...

Taani: nice way...

Rey: huh...

Taani: kissi ladki ka no magne ka..

Rey: u r not ordinary girl... u r special..

Taani: wo rey...

Rey: u can trust me...

Taani: ya take my no(she gave her no)

Rey: thanx...

Taani: its ok... sirf no diya hai...

Rey: uske sath trust bhi...

They caught in eye lock..

Taani: but listen don't call me... I stay with my parents... and I don't want u to call me...

Rey: ok...

Taani: bye..

Rey: see u soon..

Taani went from their... she was impressed with rey or I can say that she starts to like rey but taani is taani she wont accept it so easily...After some time she reached her home...

TAANI'S POV

I just entered my house and I got a msg... and I checked it... it was from rey... his timing is so perfect... but I wont reply him now... just make him wait... he should have some patience...

And I went to sleep.. I was so tired today... I got up after 2 hrs... I checked my cell and 5-6 msg from rey... omg he is still waiting for my reply... I should reply him... I replied him that I didn't see his msg and went to sleep...

END TAANI'S POV

REY'S POV

I want to drop her... but she was uncomfortable... that's ok... I wont force her for anything... but I feel nice that she trust me and gave her no... I knw she wont accept it that she also likes me... but I will make her realize that she is only for me...

Oh god... Thinking about taani I didn't realize about time... I think she reached.. let me call her... oh no I cant call her... but I can msg her...

Why she is not replying... its already 15min passed I msged her... Let me check whether msg is delivered or not... msg is delivered... may be she didn't see.. I will msg her again...

Now its too much... why is she not replying??? Has she reached safely... or she doesn't want to reply me... no its not like that... or should I call her... but she warned me not to call her and I don't want to go against her.. god please help me... I am feeling very restless.. .. my cell beeped ... hope the msg is from taani...

God pls taani ka msg hona... I slowly saw my cell and the msg is from taani... at last she replied to me... rey what are u thinking so much read msg... I was simply taking tension... she didn't see my msg... now I wont take time to reply her... I don't want to make her wait...

END OF REY'S POV

MESSEGE CONVERSATION

Rey: its ok... I got tensed so I msged u so many times...

Taani: sorry for that...

Rey: what are u doing??

Taani: nothing just sitting..

Rey: u have bf??

Taani: I think u knw the ans...

Rey: yup... just want to confirm..

Taani: no...

Rey: u wont ask abt me...

Taani: if u had gf then u wont be chatting with me...

Rey: I like u...

Taani: I knw... bye

Rey: sorry if I hurt u...

Taani: its not like that...

Rey: then why suddenly bye..

Taani: my dad came home.. and I have to go...

Rey: ok bye.. talk to u later..




part 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES/UNRES
*EDITED*
Superb concept yr..
Rey toh first sight ma hi majnu ban gya😆
Shaani part was nice...
Taarey convo was so sweet.😊
Rey dialogue was really heart touching,,'
Then their chat was wonderful..
Rey said I like u..awww😳
plz updt soon n PM me
Edited by -Sweet_Soumya- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
its superb
it was so nice reading this chapter
awesome dear
plzz pm me 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey its Nice and intresting story... 😊

like taarey convo is cute... 😊

rey fall in love with taani at first sight it Awsome... 😉

waiting for nxt part update soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it a lot..update soon n ya accept my buddy request n pm me😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb concept
rey already majnu ban gaya
Taarey convo was cute
loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
awiieee...
superb
part one was cute...
and loved everything yaar!!!
and last convo was lil awkward but
nice
update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aawwhhh That's realyy sweet 😳
Love at first sight 😳
Rey toh total lattuu 😆
Not bad 😆
Awwhhh I love the way he said I like yu 😳
Hayyyee 😳
Loved it dear 😳
Update soon n pm me 😳
Love: Ale_TaaRey ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Awesum start
rey - pheli nazar kaise jadhu kargayi hahaha
he fell for her
o gosh sharon direct ask her ques dt u r commited omg...
Rey being so caring..
Taani very smart
lubd it
thnkxx for pm
updte soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing concept
Loved it dear
Update soon

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