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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
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Firstly, sorry for being to late to edit my comment. I was a little busy and... lazy! 😛

Nidhi and Sans, firstly hats off to you that your story has got 18 pages of comments! Not because awein but because you have written it quiet nicely. 😃

It is very difficult to make people go laughing and awe but you guys rocked on it with this two shot story. 👏

I loved this two short, like really! It was so cute and entertaining to read. I loved this all the way lovely dovey Swaron yet you showed how comfortable they are with each other. 😊

I just want to pray for that pure creature who Sharon dissected. RIP for it! 😆

I have never read such a interesting OS on swaron and not to forget cockroach. I loved it guys! I was having a big smile all the time while reading it... best line was... every line!
🤗

OMG! Who wrote that reproduction wala part!? I was blushing at that moment, man! Imagined that on Swaron and then i have to take deep breathes to calm myself down.. loved this naughty yet cute Swaron so much! 😉

Your OS made us so happy, dude! Especially me! keep writing such OSes. Please, i would personally ask you to write such entertaining pieces of OS on Swaron and make us happy!

Loved the Swaron and also loved this cute cockroach! 🤣



Luv,
Marium


Edited by -Marium- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Unres

Awesome one dear..thnx for d PM
Edited by -Suni- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
awesome one..
just read both the updates ,sorry for late comment, was bit busy..
loved it..
do write more..
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
OMG..that was one entertaining piece ...loved the way u showed the naughty side of SWARON..the reproduction theory and practical was cute and funny...
U mixed comic element in romance very well...
Loved Swayam and Sharon's reaction about meeting her dad...loved this OS...
all in all an entertaining write up..loved it..keep up the good work 😊👏👏
sorry being late..m kind of inactive
Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Amazing work..It was pure entertainment,funny and such a interesting one shot..I just loved it..Specially i loved the banner becoz u added both vrushika and sneha as sharon..So its really helpfull to imagine sharon to their respected fandom..Now the concept was naughty one but full of entertainment..Lot of interesting scenes,dialouges..And trully i enjoyed it..Keep it up..

Thanx for PM and sorry for late


Prateek


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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: -spongy-

res 😳

unres

okay it was too cute
like really cute
it was seriously a romantic comedy...
sharon's fear and swayam's dialogues were a great combo
i died laughing and adored their romance

this was super duper cute
your OS enhanced my banner... seriously
amazing work guys...
seriously... 👏👏👏 beautiful

thanks for the PM and the scrap 😉
update soon i can't wait
and do PM me

PS. me first 😃
victory dance
lets party 🥳


thank you so much for the comment
we are glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

thanks for the coment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: nature2

res plz Done

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
pat nhi kon poor hai swayam y sharon 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
nyc funloveing update


thanks for the comment
we are happy to know that you
found it hilarious😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhavz_vrushan

res
unres...
awww it was super cute...
sharon a bio student...😲
n she even dnt knw hw to cut a cockroach...omg...🤣
n poor swayam lawyer banke sharon ke boo project me help kr raha h😆
ohh i luvd it n side me cute romance b😳
update soon guys...😊
n superb banner ishu😳


thanks for the comment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

res

unres
thank you for the pm nidhi n sanskriti
it was humorous, amusing n ludicrous os
you guys always comeup wit such ideas
a lawyer turned into biologist
pyaar meih swayam ko kya kya karna parta hai 😉
ps a spl mention to the person who made the banner
it was ridiculously funny to see a cockroach in it 🤣
do write more n dont forget 2 pm me 🤗


thanks for the comment
isha made the banner😊

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