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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

today only i saw this story...

interesting start, the whole story is based on kushis' pov, liked it little bit different, after reading the first chapter i guess kushi is confused type...liked the way she thinks about everyday and her family members..lavanya is kushis younger sis and payal is kushi's best friend and married...

liked it the way kushi discribed about her father,amma and bua (saint), sister... can not stop laughing lovely family...l loved it the way she mentioned she and her bua secretly follows fan fiction stroy and her intrest in skinny hollywood actresses instead of hot hunks can not stop laughing only our kushi will think like that...

wondering how arnav will make appearance, is kushi working or studying ???how old is she?????

thank u for the new story...

cheers...please continue..

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Interesting start and love your unique spin on things from Khushi's point of view. I could easily picture her character in your story. My AD is slammed but I will try to follow since this is an SS .

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@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Hahah!

Lovely start! This seems to be a promising one with loads ah laughter n witty moments! and more or less awkward!! Moments! Heheh!

I love her zeal! The way in which she sees the world and includes us readers as a part of it! Its nice! Heheh!

And bua is also as crazy us? Can't sleep without a fill of arshi! Heheh!

Now where is her hero? Our main cast?

Cheers

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

I wanna read more of khushi's musings! Waiting...waiting & waiting!

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Res... I m signing up now... Will come back later after I read :)..,

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

interesting and different concept...
loved it...

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Loving this story already!! Great job! Can't wait to see our Khushi in action!

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Deee

Like a boss 😎

Edited!

I all of a sudden remembered that you'll be update tomorrow so its better to Unres now :D

Hell, this khushi is a copy of me bas!😆

Ah so Mr. sexy raizada made his entry in his own grand way by which I mean, first sight me he checking out shuru hoyi gawa!

What do I read in her description about him? She indeed is a good observer or rather you are good one at that...😛

I certainly enjoyed his flashing smirks at her to show that 'See you looser, I won', reminds me of old IPK😭

And he indeed in a flirt! Just because she checked him out, he didn't let go of the opportunity to flirt with her😲

Ab update kro bas! I wanna read more of her musings. It makes my day reading someone who is as crazy as me😆

Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

nice update...

seriously yaar kushi thoughts meeting arnav can not stop laughing, and aman is a toddler,oh god that's hilarious😆😆😆😆😆 and arnav is not arrogant, a handsome business man for kushi its sexy Raizada...😉😉😉😉.. liked the way arnav and kushi teased each other...

whole conversation between aranv ,akash, payal, kushi are very light and very nice...

thank u fro the updateyaar,can not wait for Tuesday...thank u for the video...😛😛😛

cheers..

Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

🤣

I'm having a Gala time with this spunky Khushi 👏 And she kept grudges for more than 2 years 😆 but conveniently forgot it at athe first sight of bournvita eyes 🤣 And subtle pointing it out by Arnav is too 😆

Arnav admits she is a big girl, haaye what's coming next 😳

This shows your versatile writing Chaitu (may I?) be it Romance, Drama, Humor et. el

ILUD for making me crack when days are as mundane as they can be 😉

Cheers

(ps: I love RomComs 😛)

(pps: I love Madhuri too and the songs you have choosen here 😃)

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago