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I like this Gupta family
Father reading newspaper and seeing news
Mother making food
Bua read fan fiction

Of course Khushi being herself

That was amazing!! Waiting for more:)

Much Ado about nothing.. The title caught my attention, Famous play of Shakespeare...

Fussing about something of not much importance..right?😕

Too much curious to know why you selected the title..😳

I have seen many suggestion of your work, from Rasgulla, and many other..🤗 But seriously yaar, my life is too busy that I am not at all getting time to read any completed work..💔 So, I hunt for works which is just 2 or 3 chapters.. and Thank God, I found out one of your work, which you just started..👍🏼

Let me tell you one thing... Frankly, I am regretting of not giving your work a chance.. 😔I have fallen head over heels with the style of writing..❤️ and now cursing my tough timing of not getting much time to give it a try.. But, I assure you that I will be following this work religiously..Promise.😃

Coming to the update.. One day, in Khuhsi's life.😉.

Friday evening..How I loved it during my school and college days.. But now after getting married and getting settled at UAE, I have to look forward for Thursday evening..🥳 as hereFriday and Saturday are weekends.. Don't know why I am telling all this to you..

Sorry sorry coming to the point..🤪

Yea, going through the first para itself, why I think that Khuhsi is a teacher or lecturer... As I had gone through both phase..😕

The way you wrote it gives me a clear image of khuhsi coming from a hectic work hours and returning back home and settling her things.. 👍🏼

And the monologue of Khuhsi was awesome..loved it.. how she is swabhimani and how her mother thinks that its not good to drink full cup of tea..lol😆

Hot streaming coffee, one marie gold and 3 Parle G...Perfect for enjoying the rain..;)

Loved how you wrote about Bauji enquring about her day at sharp 7:15pm..and how he turned to read the newspaper which he left out in the morning.. These are some of the common things happening in my home..

And how all watch serial except khuhsii.. lol.. Loved how you wrote about it..

And then the filmfare..Even I am just like Khuhsi... :D

Such a cute Bua, she has... It was indeed a funny situation.lol...😃

Then the phone call, can imaginekhuhsi shrieking ... and how she extended the call.. So, Payal is married, and now she is coming to settle in her town.. I hope Payal got married to Akash and we get to see ASR along with the family who is arriving..

By the way, you didn't disclose many things.. Hmmm.. I hope to get all clues by the next update..

I don't remember if I mentioned before, But I simply love the way you write., and when ever I get a chance, I will be attaching your Index.. 😎

~Amrita😳

Please do count my LIKE.. I wont be able to like as Im using from Mob.. Sowie😔

Can I use Anavti's lines here? I too will delay reading LLL and start this one first.

wow...interesting start...and different too...Loved the way Khushi thinks...and buaji read FF,like really...looking forward for more...

Very interesting story...I like the Gupta family..buaji is the best 👍🏼

KC