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Chapter 4

My oh my...Khushi has fallen hook line and sinker for Arnavji...the makeup and dressing up is all for that man alone...this girl is a goner truly...

Her efforts bore fruit with the keen appraisal by the man who it was all done for, mehnat kaam aye (my Hindi is pathetic so bear with me)

So Arnav likes her new look and asks her out for a date, it will be one mazedaar one for sure

PS - I liked MD and SRK in DTPH, movie not so much...the song is nice though

Hey chaitu... I know it's been really long but you know what I felt at home... Wonderful work and I was smiling like almost for the entire length... And I am loving this first tense take... You have pulled this off so beautifully...

Why do I get a feeling that this is not fictional at all... Her thoughts are as if taken out of a girls mind... Very realistically written and the best I liked is KKG being a FF fanatic along with Buaji... Hahahaa mind sharing Bua's midnight reading list!!!!!

Every single character is so sweet and I am not considering Sheetal when I am stating that... Like lavanya I will stick to tag her as satan incarnate... But it's good to have her as the devil-in-disguise avatar...

Having an Arnav who is not the ruthless rich business tycoon is a welcoming change... I was so pleased to imagine a jobless Arnav and hope that does not make me anti-ASR... What to do you have created one really very endearing Arnav... It was fun to think him as an teacher too... But an IT professional seems a better occupation, as he might not be so very successful as a teacher... When Arnav Sexiness-personified Raizada teaches what will the children concentrate upon???

Having a cute little sister is fun!!!! Being one myself I can completely relate with all the excitement n kick that lavanya gets out of her sister's love life... This character took me back to my days when I had such fun :)... Between why is she not a FF reader here... Little sisters secretly read the same stuff as their sister's...

Great writing Chaitu and I am loving it... But I am not liking the fact that you chose not to share what they talked for over 45 mins in phone :)

Chapter 5

I don't like this song but it suits the update to the K and A, poor Khushi teacher se tour guide...dil is broken into a 100o pieces...really.

Bike for a couple means only one thing, accidently braking and the pillion rider falling on the rider, nahin hua and me is feeling sad for teacherji...

Ms Talking a mile a minute live up to her reputation and talks a lot and eats a lot too...thank Amma for the food, a good way to impress Arnavji.

Khushi wanted a kiss and got a phone with scratch guard and all, disappointed...poor girl...I would have been thrilled...

She is not a silent reader (You are a mean girl and I like that) I don't agree with her old name but don't think much of the new one either, but this is Khushi Krazy Gupta, anything is possible.

Chapter 6

Sheetal is a Daayan

Arnav is a well-mannered guest

Lavanya is a constipated guest

Khushi is all bechari after listing the 9 reason why Sheetal is not like worthy and is setting her paws on Khushi's Arnavji.

I hope she felt deliriously happy after receiving the "puchak" kiss on her cheek, lips would follow Khushi...fruits of patience is sweet...like rasgulla or rasmalai

PS - This song is an all-time favourite for my brother no prizes for guessing why, I hated Anil Kapoor in the movie and MD was so badly presented but is was a hit song

lovely update...thanks for the mail

Chapter 7

Info about the song - Javed Akhtar wrote this song and the chorus lines are sung by MD and the other parts are sung by the others, a hatke feature. I like this song and MD looks smoking hot, the true blue Marathi Mulgi

Khushi needs to think on her feet and find more believable reasons to "bump" into Arnav but this one was a god send indeed and our lady made the most of it, good girl.

Her slambook interview and alternate answers were true Khushi style entertaining...

I want Arnav to read those answers and we will have another interview on our hands...

Loved sister's conversation and the rapid fire round!! Think Lavanya genuinely wants Khushi to move forward!! May be Khushi is waiting for Arnav to take the first step??

Chapter 8

I am finally up to date with this story and me is pleased...

Like Lavanya I have questions and I will provide the answers..

Q - Is Eccentrica crazy?

A - YES

Q- Is Eccentrica's Khushi crazy like her?

A - YES

Q - Is this a mad about MD songs story?

A - YES

Q - Do I want the next update?

A - Silly question but no pause, YES

PS - The song was plagiarized and yet it was fun, MD was cute and chubby in this song, I was awarded a hard glare when I told my brother this back then, but he is still holds a soft corner for her in his tiny heart.

Which friend has Arnav gone to see? Don't tell me its a girl friend.

Good one!!!!!
enjoying this FF and Kushi's antics..