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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jannat94

Don't be sorry
we'll wait till the time, u'll fully recover

Just take care Khushi 😃

And Get Well Soon


thanks
i m
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe


hey its ok get well soon dear ...thn u can update😊
we will wait 😊


thank u
i will...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

<font size="3"> loved it khushi... ❤️ viren is a sweetheart n i luv him ... Woww virat vadera GS... Par tune ladke ki kya image bna di... 😆 Anyways i m loving it more n more especially viren's description abt manvi... Pls cont soon... Thank u for the update... </font>


thank u dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pritivirman

woww... it was lovly
suprb
amzng
mndblwng
awsm
fabls
updt... 👏


thank u so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesome update.
virat character was different from u'r any ff and manvi is bubbly type of girl.
waiting next part who will win the challeng.


thank u so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
ooo rhis is part 2 ooo gosh lov this story babby :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART-3
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after thinking little virat gave mischiefe smile to maanvi which make her roll her eyes to other side..
M-with aligent attitude-hmm..ab jaldi batao challenge kya hai..mere pas pura din nahi hai yaha khade ahene ke liye..
V-smirk-i like it..
M-?
V-sit ong his bike-mujhe tumhare tikhe tevar pasand aye..chalo..kch tikha hi try karte hai..
M-whatever..jo bhi hai..jaldi khtm karo..
V-sem..
Samay rush near him..
S-yes..
V-in ke liye tikhe chellenge ka arrange karo jo last year us punjabi sandh ke liye kaha tha..
All sinears get shock..
S-woh chellenge?..woh bhi is ladki ke liye?
V-yes..smirk
s-agar aap ko yaad ho to woh punjabi sandh ischallenge ko adhe me chhod ke college chhod gaya tha..aur ye to ladki hai..aur lagta nahi hai ki ye
before he complete his sentence virat look at him with anger..
V-angrily-to tu karega iski jagah?
S-gulped..taken back-main?..n..na..nahi..main..to bas..
M-intrusped-hey..tum dono..ye natak bandh karo aur jaldi se khtm karo ye chellege..
Vn-walk near them nd abt to intruped nd stop all this but before that virat speak..
V-just two min barbie doll..ye tikhe tevar thodi der aur sambhal lo..-to samay-sem?
S-haa..laya..nd he rush from there..
Everyone look at his direction..but virat nd maanvi just looking at eachother..maanvi stood in front of with 4or 5 fit distance with reating her palm on her hips where virat resting on his bike with crossing his hands against his chest..
After few minutes..
S-come back with breathing heavily..with two other boys..
Virat nd maanvi look at them..
S-bhai..ye raha..
He point toward two boys..who holding trays..they r waiters of canteen..
V-great..
He look at maanvi with evile smirk..who stood with confuse face..
V-yeah..ye hai tumhara chellenge mis tikhi mirchi..
M-ye?..pasta?
V-haa..ye lekin..isme kuch add kaene ke baad..
M-confuse..
V-sem..
S-ji bhai..
Sem know what he trying to say..he took one spoon from other tray nd also one small middle size bottle nd open it..he took one spoon from from that bottle..nd added in pasta bowle..all juniers shocked nd their eyes become widden..one full spoon red-chilly powder..
Nd siners nd juners gve miecy nd sympthetic look to maanvi..
V-look at manvi who looking at pasta nd then him..as he fpund no fear on her face he felt angry..he didnt wann losse in front of whole college..
S-done..
V-ek aur..
S-kya?
V-still looking at maanvi-ye jyada tikhi hai..aram se kar payegi kyu?
M-look at him with angry look..
V-smirk..
S-hesitately add another full spoon of chilly powder in small pasta bowle..mix it..
M-still looking confident but from inside..she is hell scared..she know..she cannot eat spicy bcz she had alergy of red chilly..but this..she cannt back out..its against to her phylosophy..she smile little..which make virat more insecure..
S-bhai..ho gaya..
V-smirk-stood up properly nd walk near sem nd take chilly powder bottle nd find almost one spoon more chilly powder is still left in bottle..he took bowle of pasta nd chilly power bottle nd spring all left powder on it..which make all hell shock..viren also become more scared for maanvi..virat want maanvi to reject this chellege nd ask him for apology or she loss it..he is hell confident that she never eat this..
V-turn nd walk near to her with evile smile..raised pasta bowle in front of her-tumhara chellege..tikha hai..lekin tumse kum..winked..
M-look at him nd then bowle..
She abt to open her mouth to say something but stop as she hear some one fron her back..
Vn-come near to them nd stood beside maanvi-hey..ye jyada ho raha hai..
V-look at him nd smile-ohh..viren..yaar dude..tu kyu bich me aa raha hai?
M-look at viren..
Vn-virat..ye jyada ho raha hai..
V-dekh viren..hum pichhle 4 saal se saath padh rahe hai..tune kabhi mere mamlo me nahi tang adai nd maine..so dur rahe..yaar tujhe nahi karna naa kar..lekin mere raste me mat aa..samza?
Vn-seriously-virat..mazak aur masti utni hi karni chahiye jisse koi hurt na ho..
V-main koi jabarjasti nahi kar raha..-look at maanv-ye ladki khud chellange chahti thi..mere boys to ise chance de rahe the mere liye kuch karke nikal jao..lekin..ye tikhi mirch..uff..
M-look at viren-hey..viren right?..smile widly..
Vn-look at maanvi-huh?
M-viren?
Vn-yaa..yeah..
M-smile-thanks for be my frist frind in college..
Vn-confuse-kya?
M-haa..tum mere liye samne aye..means hum achche dost ban sakte hai..
Vn-didnt know how to react..she is crazy..
V-oh..hello
he abt to continu but cute off by maanvi..
M-yeah..i know..tumharri regging class nd all..just min..
To viren-hey..kya hum baad me baat kar sakte hai..pahele is se nipat lu?
Vn-no..tumhe ye karne ki jarurat nahi hai..ye pagalpan hai..
M-tum samaz gaye ki main ye karungi..great yaar..hum sach me achche friend ban sakte hai..baad me milenge..okay..
Vn-abt say but she continu..
M-come close to his ear nd whisper-dont worry..ye chellenge pura karne ke baad mujhe normal hone me time lagega..
Nd smile nd before he say some thing she look at virat..
M-sarte batao..
V-shock..she is agree???
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART-4
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V-try to not affected with her confident-great..dekhte hai..jaise ki tumhe pata hai..tumhe ye pura pasta khtm katna hai..yahi tumhara chellange hai..lekin agar tumne ye chellange khtm nahi kiya to tumhe har mante hua pure college ke samne apne knee pe jake mujhse maafi magni hogi aur is college me study karne ki permission leni hogi..
M-smirk..
V-lekin..saath me..tumhe..
Come close to her-sem ko sabke samne iss karna hoga aur ek week tak uski date banna hoga..
S-smile
All shocked..
Maanvi also nd of course viren..
S-come near virat-matlab bhai..freshiarse party me..ye..nd smile widly in exitment..
M-rolled her eyes to otherside..
V-smirk..-soch lo abhi bhi back out kar sakti ho..aur purane 3 task le sakti ho..
M-look at him-aur aga maine ye kiya to?
V-what?
M-agar maine ye chellenge pura kiya to?
Vn-just looking at her surpeisly..
V-no chance..
M-agar.maine.kiya.to?
V-jo tum kaho..looking into her eyes..
S-bhai..
V-stop him-okay?
M-done..
Take bowle from his hand nd look at viren..
M-smile-hum friends hai right?
Vn-huh?
M-i needed after this so?
Vn-a..a..o..okay..
M-smile nd blink at him nd gesture in thanks..
M-look at virat nd mixed that pasta again..
All looking at her with shock..surprise..fear..thinking she is mad..crazy..viren nd virat also..virat thinking that after one spoon she surly back out nd viren worried for her..she is just kid..last year that punjabi jutt cannt handle one spoon chilly powder..nd now she?..no way..
All just looking at her..
M-she looking at virat with full of confient nd took full of spoon pasta nd place first in her mouth..
All-ahww..shhh..gulped..
V-lloking at her with smirk..
M-smirk nd stars chewing..imigeatly her eyes become red hot nd she felt her ears starts playing..but she didnt stop..she continue..
All shocked..tears come out from her eyes..
V-smierk-u cannot..stop this..he didnt know why but this words come out from his mouth as he saw that tears..
Vn-hey..u..okay..
M-look at viren nd nodded with try smile..look at virat..nodded in no..i will..
Nd again she took another spoon of past nd eat..
All r hell shocked..she starts breathing heavily due to hotness of chilly powder nd her eyes become more teary nd red..virat become little worried..unnowilngly..nd viren try to stop her when she rtook 3rd..but she stop him again..
Virat juat staring at her like drumstick..all students loking at her with open mouth..their eyes become watery too see her like this..
Vn-hey..
He whisper worriedly..bt he know..she never ggoing to stop..she is damm crazy..nd diffrent..
M-her hands starts shicring nd her mouth also become read nd she hfelt little dizzy as she take one by one bite..but she didnt wann loss..she come here in this college for achive something..nd its maanvi..she is her owne strangth..no one can broke her..she is full of confident nd life..
S-meri date to gai..
V-get angry..bt same time unknowingl worried for her..didnt know why..
M-breathing hardly as chilly effect her alot..at last bite..she close her eyes nd hardly gulped that pain..yes pain..her throat paining like hell..she didnt know how nd who gve her this power to bear all this but she know if she stood her long she will be on floor..as she felt her feet become weak..
Vn-come near to her nd hold her from sholder-hey..r u okay?
M-open her eyes hardly..directly look at virat..crying bacly her eys..her throat become fire cave..anytime blast..manage to step towards him..
V-just looking at her..didnt know who freeze him..he felt bad for her..but he didnt want to feel that..
Just then all got shock..but its common..
M-scream loudly-ahhghhh...
M-smirk with her hell bad condition-maine..apna naam nahi bataya..mujhe..yaad..yaad..kaise rakhoge..MAANVI...MAANVI SHARMA..she siad with breathing heavily..nd in next moment she close her eye nd abt to fall but 4 arms catch her protectivly..
Virat nd viren look at eachother angrily..
V-abt say something but stop as they find her coughing..both look at her..nd become worried..with cough..blood come out from corner of her lips in her half unconcious state..
Vn-worried-shit..
Look at virat angrily..
Vn-puss his hand away from her-dur raho isse..
V-look at her angrily..
Vn-tujhe mana kiya tha maine..
V-maine ise force nahi kiya tha ye karne ke liye..
Vn-abt to say something but stop as they hear her murmring..
M-half unconsious-cellege medical room..tum..tum dono..baad me lad lena..mujhe marna nahi hai..smile weakly..cough..nd try to stoop on her feet..
VN-SHOOK HIS HEAD..
V-just stunt with her statment..
M-help me..nd again caughing with heavy breath..tears r still in her eyes..
Vn-huh?..haa..relax..main help karta hu..
Nd with that he help her nd drove her towards medical room..with glaring at virat..left all behind in shock..
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V-sarat ke mutabik..tum..tum..jiti ho..bolo..kya karna hoga mujhe?
M-rolled her eyes-common viren..lets go..
Nd walk other side with viren...
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hope u all like..
Thank u
khushi...
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Debo...
Sorry for late
Edited by Niaksharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for update dear...
Hw r u niw? ? ??????
What abt ur health ??????
Plzzz try to update sooon...
Take care
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Waiting for update dear...
Hw r u niw? ? ??????
What abt ur health ??????
Plzzz try to update sooon...
Take care


yeah..
I m updating in this story next..
Di's health is getting well
thank u..
I try to soon
-Debo
khushi di's sister...

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