Wading Through Fantasy (An Arshi SS) - Ch 5 Pg 34 (Completed)

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Ah and the first chapter is here already, lucky, lucky me!

You grabbed me from the get go, as I started reading the chapter I was so picturing Khushi all the way until I read the "Rani Sahiba" reference Clever, very clever! :D

What a refreshingly different start, then ofcourse our Arnavwa had to make an appearance too with his intense gaze on a certain girl with long black hair and chamkili eyes.

I am officially intrigued and hooked, I don't know what took you so long to get your story out. You clearly have the talent for it! Loved the chapter, bring on more yeah? ;-)

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

first of all, I really loved your introduction...we all know it & u should know too that u r a genius...
now came to the story...fabulous start Gita...totally felt like I am watching the first episode of a drama with two parallel leads...Anjali-Shyam...and Arnav-his Chamkili...the word chamkili never felt so sweet to me ever...today it did...
so Anjali is eager to live her life full now...loved it...and her meeting with Shyam...dramatic and superb...he is positive here hai naa...hopefully...
and Arnav stared at THE GIRL sitting in a coffee shop...yehi baki tha...and engorged in her thought...and found her again...
but is she really afraid of him???does she recognize that he is the man from the coffee-shop...
wanna know the POV of other members of each pair...waiting for more...

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luvbug

@luvbug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Omg I super excited to read this story from u ... Yay u finally decided to write a story... I'll come back n read tomorrow ... It's 3am n my husband is literally glaring at me right now as I type this ... In short I wanted to say this is my res 😊

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

You've finally decided to write, I'm so excited!

Congratulations on your first story, and loved your introduction!😆

You had me fooled there with the beginning, I really thought it was Arnav and Khushi.

Great intro, and loved the explanation for rani sahiba!

The Chamkili part was pure ArHi magic, ek baar phir.

I'm intrigued by your story, and charmed by it...can't wait for the next part!

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

unres

i am glad that u have opted to start writing!!! and what a bumper start!!!⭐️

the first time i read the 1st part of the update, i thought it might be Khushi... but it was Anjali and Shyam! And the Meaning behind why he called her Rani sahiba is something that really got me interested. Then her chote--- Arnav on other hand got to meet his Khushi... nice meeting and the way u planned the fall... i was like--- haye!!!😉

and the meaning behind the Chamkili and the poem... uff got me hooked to ur story. really looking forward to it...

what i observed though is that the guys like naming their girls in their own peculiar ways. one nick named Rani Sahiba, while another gave nick name of Chamkili to his Girl with Chamkili ankhon wali

waiting for ur next update and many congratulations to u on such a wonderful start!!!👏

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

I'm so thankful to whoever who managed to convince you to write.

When I read Lakshmibai, I thought she was not joking.

It really is Lakshmi's story.

Then I thought the woman was Khushi, but the Rani Sahiba at the end gave it away!

And I absolutely loved your take on the falling in Arnav's arms scene.

This was definitely more realistic.

Now I'm just looking forward to reading more.

Thanks Gita, for the PM.

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Heyoo ! Haven't read your stories before..but just found this one.

Read it...and i have to say its really really awesome.

The first chapter itself was so intriguing...now i'm really keen to know what happens next.😃

Anjali and Shyam's part was really cute and interesting.

And Arshi's part was as usual super romantic...Hayee ! Loved it !☺️

Lol..the great ASR staring at a stranger..and then he's caught !

And then the mall encounter was awesome..

I wish i could go and pat the boy for his job...but then also slap him tight..i hate brats ! 😆

Anyways , the first chapter was awesome..😉

Do PM me when you update plz 😳

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

very lovely start...nd the description is great !!!
loving it

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Gita, what an intriguing start. Absolutely loved the first chapter and I should also thank those who encouraged you to write . 😛

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verisimilitude

@verisimilitude

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

woah.. Mami started a SS
I dont have more words to express

Part one was excellent G.. Anjali and Shyam Love story.. yeh toh nayi soch hain.. Nice to see the determined Anjali who wants to get out of the delicate doll pampering.

Arnav Singh Raizada coming out of his musings to start fresh love story..

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