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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for being late...
exams the..
so comment nhi kr payi.
superb update..
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

sorry for being late...
exams the..
so comment nhi kr payi.
superb update..
continue soon.

No Problem dear
Well exams kaise the thank God Diwali kharab nahi hui
Wish u a very happy Diwali 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks sarita
stay tuned 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 7 A
After award ceremony was over it was party time for all all were enjoying in their own way. Avinash avantika annu shree chotu liza n shree were chatting n also were sharing different things regarding office,life home etc. Arjun n riya were busy in their private time which was rare for them they were sitting apart from rest n chatting. Sameer was busy with high officials n Aisha was happy to see all of them enjoying from apart as she was not well n in recovering state so she was sitting in the corner n was happy to see her team n her family enjoying. Avinash n avantika called her so she went there n sat with them. Sameer was watching this from far as when officials took leave he saw avantika calling aisha to join today he cant take his eyes off aisha was looking so beautiful that he was stealing glances n admiring her beauty. She could also feel his gaze on her but she didn't dare to reciprocate it back as her family n team mates were around she could only lower her gaze shyly when their eyes met for fraction of second. Someone was watching this from far n that was Arjun he signaled Riya n riya too noticed this Arjun said "Dekho apne bhai ko kaise dekh raha hai Aisha ko?" Riya smiled n said " Haan wo to main bhi dekh rahi hoon aap bhai ko jaante ho na wo sirf dekte hi rahenge kuch karenge nahin" Arjun with a smile said " to phir hum kuch karte hai " saying this winks at her riya said " Matlab" Arjun replied "Bas dekhti jaao aur meri haan main haan milana" Saying this he took riya along n sat with the aishas family n rest of the team.
Arjun after sitting called sameer too and made him sit along with the team n said "Rathore yaar party kuch boaring nahin lag rahi hai matab koi gana wana nahin" Sameer said " Arjun ye government ki taraf se arrange ki gayi party hai isme koi entertainment thodi hota hai " Arjun said " Nahin hota hai to kar dete hai tum hi koi accha sa gaana suna do tum to bahut accha gaate ho" Sameer gave him a glare n said "Tumhe sunna hai na to tum khud hi ga lo aur sun bhi loo" Suddenly shree asked Arjun "Sir Rathore sir Sach main accha gaate hai hame to pata nahin tha" Arjun smiled n said Shree rathore bahut accha gaata hai hum college se saath hai tumhe pata hai college main ise gaane ke liye prize mil chuka hai aur to aur bahut si ladkiya mara karti thi ispe hamare chief bahut chupe rustam hai " saying this he winks at shree. Shree n others giggle n sameer gives a glare to Arjun n signals him to shut his mouth . Arjun ignores n saya " Ghoor kyu raha hai aur itna bhaav kyu kha raha hai suna de na " Sameer again gives him a glare. All team mates also requested him to sing but aisha was quite. Shree said to aisha "Aisha Tum hi kaho na Rathore sir se ki gaana suna de tumhara kaha thode taalege "Sameer n aisha both got embarrassed n Aisha had no choice but to request sameer she said in a polite voice "Sir please Suna dijiye na " Smaeer smiled n said " OK Fine" . All cheered him n shree handed over the guitar smaeer adjusted the strings n sarted to singh

Jis ke aane se rango main doob gayi hai shyam 2

Sooch raha hoon kisse poochu us ladki ka naam

Hehe--- aha aahaa

Rang hai sona roop hai chandi aankhe hai neelam

Hooth hai kaliya daanth hai moti zulfe hai resham

Oh Hoho

Rang hai sona roop hai chandi aankhe hai neelam

Hooth hai kaliya daanth hai moti zulfe hai resham

Jaise gazal hai jaise kawal hai

Jaise chalakta jaam

Sooch raha hoon kisse poochu us ladki ka naam

Jis ke aane se rango main doob gayi hai shyam 2

Sooch raha hoon kisse poochu us ladki ka naam

As song ended every one clapped for him n after a while party ended n all went back to their places.
In the night when they avinash n avantika were in room n discussing about party. Avinash said" Aaj bahut accha laga sabse mil ke aur sameer ji kitne acche hai hame kitni respect di unhone aur mujhe nahin pata tha wo itna achha gaate hai" Avantika said" Haan mujhe bhi bahut accha laga aaj aisa lagta hai ki bhagwaan ne bete ki ichha bhi puri kar di yadi mera koi beta hota to sameer ji jaisa hota " Avinash smiled n avantika said " Aapse ek baat karni thi mujhe lagta hai ab aisha ki shadi ke baare main sochna chahiye usne bete se badhkar saare farz nibhaye hai is ghar ke liye saare desh main apna aur hamara naam uncha kiya hai ab hame uski kushi ka khayaal rakhte hue Ek aache jeevan saathi ki talash karni chahiye" Avinash said" Par use yadi koi pasand ho to" Avantika replied "Yadi aisa hota to wo mujhe zaroor batati" Avinash said" Aur yadi use khud hi pata na ho to" Avantika in confused way "Aap kya kehna chahte hai?"Avinash said " Mujhe lagta hai sameer ji aur aisha ek dusre ko pasand karte hai aur tum to jaanti ho ki dono apne feelings ko shayad abhi tak pehchaan nahi paaye is liye kuch kaha nahin" Avantika said "Aisa kuch nahin hai sameer ji ek acche insaan hai aur Boss aur senior hone ki vajah se Aisha sameer ji ki bahut izzat karti hai " Avinash said " Shayad tum theek keh rahi ho tum usse pooch ke dekho yadi mera andaaza sahi hua to hame ladka doondne ki zarrorat nahin padegi" Avantika said " Thek hai main aisha se baat karke dekhti hoon."

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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 7 B
Next morning Avantika thought of speaking to Aisha. Aisha went into the kitchen to hep her mother a bit but avantika said " Aisha beta tumhari tabiyat abhi poori tarah se theek nahin hai tum ye rehne do aur annu ko bula lo breakfast ke liye" She went n called anuu n started serving the breakfast to all suddenly her mother avantika said " Aisha hame tumse kuch baat karni hai" Aisha said "Haan maa kya baat hai" Avantika said " Ek baat ka sach sach jawaab dena sameer ji tumhe kaise lagte hai" Aisha was surprised a bit with this question but said " Maa jahan tak main unhe jaanti hoon wo ek bahut acche seedhe aur suljhe insaan hai shayad jis post par wo hai or jo unke saath hua us vajah se serious ho gaye hai par tum ye mijhse kyu pooch rahi hoo?" Avantika smiled n siad " Hum chahte hai ki ab tumhari shadi ho jaaye tumne jo bhi abhi tak kiya hai usse hamara naam roshan hua hai par jis tarha ka kaam tum karti ho usme bahut zaroori hai tum par koi ungli na uthaaye aur ab tumahri shadi ki umar bhi hogayi hai" Aisha was surprised a bit with this sudden marriage thing but Replied " par is sabse Sameer sir ka kya connection hai?" Avantika with a smile said "Tumhare Papa ka ye sochna hai ki shayad tum sameerji ko pasand karti ho aur yadi aisa hai to hame koi bhi aitraaz nahin hai kyuki wo bahut acche insaan hai aur sabse badi baat wo tumhare kaam ko samajhte hai to tumhe koi problem bhi nahin hogi" Aisha was looking at them with wide eyes open n shocked face n said" Maa ye aap kya keh rahe ho aap jaante ho na yadi aisa kuch hota to main aapko zaroor batati han ye baat bilkul sahi hai ki main sameer sir ko pasand karti hoon par as a senior or may be as a friend too but ye"" Avinash cutting him short said " Dekho beta hum sirf pooch rahe hai kyuki shayad tumhara kaam aur tumhare cases tumhe ye sochne ki fursat na de aur dosri baat tumari marzi ke bagair kuch nahin hoga kyuki hamare liye tumhari kushi bahut matter karti hai tum achhi tarah soch lo aur yadi tumhe koi pasand hai to hum se khul ke keh sakti hoo" she said "Papa Aisa kuch nahin hai ye faisla main aap par chod rahi hoon aapko jo bhi sahi lage mujhe koi problem nahi hai kyuki meri zindagi ka faisla aap se accha koi nahin kar sakta" Avinash With a smile said" Beta main jaanta hoon par ye faisle kismat leti main main umeed karonga ki mari beti ko mujhse bhi zayda pyar karne wala jeevan saathi mile aur beta meri ek baat yaad rakhna tumhara jo bhi faisla hoga tum usme hum tumhare saath honge par meri baat pe gaur zarror karna kyuki zindagi ke safar main dost se accha saath koi nahin deta kyuki use tum khud chunte ho aapka dost wahi hai jo uncondionally aapka saath deta hai aapko bahut pyar karta hai aur sameer ji ne tumhara waise hi saath diya hai aur shadi usi se karni chahiye jo aapse pyar karta ho to zindagi aasan aur khoobsurat ho jaati hai" Aisha smiled n said "Main aapki baat yaad rahungi papa" She hugged her parents n went to her room . Avantika said" Badi samjhdaar ho gayi hai aapki beti "Avinash said "kyu mere akale ki hai kya tumhari bhi to hai na" Avantika smiled n resumed her work n avinash dipped his head into newspaper.
Aisha was thinking about all the happenings in her room n what her father told to her was correct yes he stood by her in every problem be it was training , Saving n proteting her during the case, Convincing her parents to join ETF every thing flashed in front of her eyes like a picture but she was not sure what name she should give to this feeling was it a plain respect n admiration for her senior or it was a mare attraction or sympathy as he was all alone or it was love she herself was confused .
In ETF Office Arjun enters sameer cabin n found him lost in thoughts arjun goes near him n places his hand on his shoulders n says in a bit loud voice "Sam aisha ke baare main sooch raha hai kya ?" He in a lost tone replies "hmmm" N arjun burst out in laughtern that broke his trance n in annoyed tone said " Ye kya hai arjun " Arjun replies "Wahi to main pooch raha hoon Sam kya ho gaya hai tujhe itna khoya khoya kyu hai"Sameer said "Kuch nahin hua hai mujhe aur mujhe pareshan mat kar" Arjun said" Tu mujhe bewkoof aur andha samjhta hai kya ki mujhe kuch samajh main nahin aata ya dikhayi nahin deta main sab samajh raha hoon yadi tu usse itna pyar karta hai to kehta kyu nahin devdas banane se kaam nahin chalega tujhe usse baat karni chahiye sameer." Smaeer in annoyed tone "Tu pagal hai kya arjun kya janti hai wo mere past ke baare main aur maan lo yadi main usse keh bhi doon aur wo haan keh bhi de to kya de sakta hoon use main ek aise zindagi jisme har pal wo maut ke saaye main jiye jahan uski jaan ko kadam kadam pe khatra hoo aur na jaane main kab tak uska saath nibha paau." Sameer had tears in his eyes n huged arjun saying"Main kya karo arjun main chah kar bhi usse kuch nahin keh sakta" arjun patted his friend to console him.

So kaisa tha mast ya bore comment zarror karna n excuse for typing mistakes plz yaar like aur comment zarror karo as it helps me to improve n i write for u people

P recap - Aisha comes to know about the truth of sameers feeling
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Posted: 11 years ago
res... for the first time in your story...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
unres...
Awesome update...
Sameer starring her...😉😉😉
He sang song when she insisted him...😉😉😉
LOL...kamal hai jin dono ko apni feelings ke bare mein pata hona chhaiye un dono ko chodke saari duniya ko pata hai...😆😆😆 😆😆😆
I guesss now Aisha will realise her feelings for Sameer...
I really wants to know about Sameer's past...
Precaps seems interesting...
Continue soon...Advance mein Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
beautiful update
love it
sorry for let comment
Edited by khemanisarita - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

res... for the first time in your story...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

unres...
Awesome update...
Sameer starring her...😉😉😉
He sang song when she insisted him...😉😉😉
LOL...kamal hai jin dono ko apni feelings ke bare mein pata hona chhaiye un dono ko chodke saari duniya ko pata hai...😆😆😆 😆😆😆
I guesss now Aisha will realise her feelings for Sameer...
I really wants to know about Sameer's past...
Precaps seems interesting...
Continue soon...Advance mein Thanks for PM...


Thanks sneha u liked it
Next part will contain their confession n sameers past so
Stay tuned n keep commenting love u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome and mindblowing update dear.
sam stairing ayesha
he sing song when she insisted.
loll yeh dono to apni feelings nahi pehechan rahe but baaki logon ko pata hain.
i think now ayesha will realize her feelings
what was sam past.
precap looks interesting.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
and ya awesome baneer
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome yar..
Loved it..
Sasha r confused regarding their feeling for each other..
Nice precap..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..

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