TR FF - ETERNAL BLISS - by anshu - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
awesome update :)
cont soon
sorry for late reply
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Luvly stry but reading on FB
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
amezing hima
sry lt ho gai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
D second ch was nyc
Sry for late n n short comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Wow what a awsum story just like phela nasha phela kumaar naya pyaar hai naya itazar type 😆😆😆 just love 2 imagine taarey in different avtar n now just like a teen love story imagine taarey that 2 in school dress lolzzz so cute 🤣 🤣 ☺️☺️ ... thanks 4 pm update soon next part n don't 4get 2 pm !!!!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
wow
wow
dii
i sooo sooo sooo
loved it
plz update soon
me waiting 4 ur update!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter-3

Taani(to herself) - mera aur rey ka kuch nhi ho skta !! Humare beech koi link hi nhi hai... Shayad mujhe unhe bhul hi jaana chahiye!

Mrs. Shekhawat- Taani beta your van will be here any moment! Get ready fast...

Taani- Haan maa ho gaya bas!

Taani(to herself)- aaj toh mari mei!! Bal bhi aaj hi dhone the mujhe? Ek kaam karti hoon Van mei baal sukh jayenge aur phir school mei choti bandh loongi...

Van ka horn bajta hai...
Taani runs in hurry... Her hairs are wet.. She looks damn gorgeous!

She is standing in front of Van's gate and suddenly the gate opens up...

Rey was sitting on the door side! He moves out to let taani in...

Taani sees Rey!

Taani- hey krishna ji!! Ye kya kiya aapne ? Mei aur rey same Van mei...

She gets inside... Meets sharon...

Sharon- Taaani... I am so happy to see you! Tumhara pehla din kaisa tha?

Taani-(looks at rey) Bahut accha tha sharon... naya school bhi... And rey bhi...
Oo sorry mera matlab hai aap sab bhi...

All the time during this conversation Rey was looking outside the window...
He looked somewhat lost...

Taani was busy noticing him...

They reach school...

Scene changes...

Bell rings!
Taani moves out of the class to go to washroom...

She hears music from somewhere...
She is curious to know from where the music is coming...

She reaches the rehersal hall...
It was a rehersal hall any dancer could dream of! (just like the new renovated rehersal hall of D3)

She sees Rey there... He's dancing...

Ladkon ki ungli pe naache hai zamana...
Simple ye funda hai kudiyon ko batana...
Lutey nhi lut jaaye ...
Cheene nhi pat jayye...
Kudiyan hai jebon mei rakh le...
Kudiyan nu thug le thug le...
Thug le thug le thug le...

Taani is busy adoring Rey's dance...

Female part starts...

Simi is dancing...
Ladkon ko lagta hai easy jeet jana..
Ladkon ko lagta hai easy jeet jana..
Iss baar unko harake hai dikhana..

Taani(to herself but a little loud)- aare ye step aise nhi aise hoga...

Simi hears this... She's angry...

Simi- oh so now this new girl will teach mei how to dance?

Sharon- simi calm down!! Taani please come here!
Hmm...
So tell me what were u saying darling?

Taani- sorry Sharon it was nothing!!

Sharon- No please show how that step was supposed to be!!

Simi- yeah please!!

Taani- If you say so sharon...

Precap- Taani dances... Rey is amazed to see her dance...

Hope you all like it...

Eternal bliss-taarey...

Recap- simmi Challenges Taani ... Sharon motivates Taani to dance!

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Chapter -4

1234...
Taani starts dancing...

Ladkon ko lagta hai easy jeet jaana...
Iss baar unko haara ke hai dikhana...

She revolves around rey...
And looks at him with big affectionate eyes.. Blinks at him and moves away...

Badi badi aakhein hai...
Yuhi hawa phakey hai...
Jeben bhari khali hai akme...

Mundiyanu thug le thug le...
Mundiyanu thug le thug le...
Thug le thug le thug le...

Taani stops dancing...
Her breathe can be easily heard...

Music starts again...
Rey right in front of her...

Jitni ghaas dalo taarifein nikalo..
Utne hi inke bhaav badhte hai...

Taani is amazed to see this...

She continues to dance with rey...

Mauka taadtey hai chauka maarte hai... Haath pakada do sir pe chadhte hain...

Rey does his signature step...

Todey inke chalein...
Sheh me maat de daale...
Ye maza maza leke chak le...

Song ends...
Khudiyaanu... Mundiyaanu...
Thug le...
Both are facing each other... Having an eye lock!!

Swayam interupts them- Guys what a Dance!! Taani you amused us all... You are such a superb Dancer and the Chemistry between you and rey was terrific!!

Taani (smiles at rey)- thanks swayam!!

Swayam- Now you know Simmi tum kahan galat thi...??

Simmi- yeah! Sorry Taani...

Taani- Nhi simmi aap aisa mat boliye...

Sharon- Please join us taani... With you we can be the dancing champs...

Taani- No guys mei yahan sirf padhne aayi hoon! Dad ko pata chala toh I'll be dead!

Everyone- Please taani...

Sharon- ab tum hi kuch bolo rey...

Rey- (Still amazed by taani's dance) Taani Please be the part of our team?

Taani( to hersef)-Rey sirf aap bol rhe ho isliye...

Taani( aloud)- theek hai guys! Par sirf aap sabke liye...

A voice interupts all this...

2 girls move in front and Shout-

K for Kamal.. R for she's always right... I for Intelligent... Y for Yes She's the one... A for Her shear Awesomeness...
Move Aside For KRIYA has Come...

A shadow Comes from the door of rehersal hall...

Simmi- Shit! Ye yahan kyu?

Sharon- Isse bhi abhi aana tha?

Taani- kaun hai ye?

Kriya- Oh my gosh! New bee! Dear tum mujhe nhi jaanti? Mei iss college ki the most popular girl hoon... Aur haan Rey ki gf bhi...

Rey- Kriya? Tum yahan?

Kriya- haan baby... I was missing uh... Tumhare paas to mere liye time hi nhi hai naa!! Din bhar dance!!

Rey- Ye sab baatein yahan mat karo! Chalo mere saath!

Kriya- Rey kahan leke jaa rhe hai aap mujhe?

Rey- Chalo kriya...

Rey and kriya exit...

Taani was shattered!! She couldn't think of anything!! Usse samjh nhi aa rha tha how to react!! She was shattered from inside!!

Sharon- Pata nhi ye Rey ki life mei kahan se aa gayi? Isse zyada pagal maine kabhi nhi dekhi...

Taani- Guys mujhe kuch yaad aa gaya mei late ho jaungi ghar jaatey jaatey...
Sharon tum van se chali jaana...
Bye guys...

Sharon- okay taani! Bye!

Everyone- bye taani!!

Bell rung!!
Whole school was empty...

Taani went to rehersal hall...

She started crying out loud!!
Taani (to herself)- Kyu taani kyu tujhe itta fark padta hai? Hai kaun rey ? Jaanti bhi nhi hai tu unhe!!

She gets up! Starts dancing...

Jab jab tere paas mei aaya ek sukoon mila...
Jisse me tha bhoolta aaya vo vajood mila...

Suddenly taani sees a shadow... She runs after it...
She finds no one is there...
Then she blindfolds herself!!

Starts dancing again...
Dil sambhal jaa zara phir mohobbat karne chala hai tu...

Suddenly someone grabs her from her waist... And pulls her...

Kaun hai? Taani sceams...

That somebody puts his finger on taani's lips and softly says- Shhh... Just dance...!!

Precap- The Dance with the stranger...

Guys!! Iss story mei Kriya maine non dancer rakhi hai...and she's full of attitude and kind of Dumb!!
Sorry for that!!

So how was today's Chap?

love anshu ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awsome update... 😊
kriya rey's gf yuck...😉
I think stranger is rey...😊
waiting for nxt part update soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Superb part.precap is interesting...do continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Awesome update dear
Thanks 4 long update
Taani thinks about rey all time 😉
Talks what she feels he want to listen 😉
Mad 4 rey
Kriya rey ki gf ohhh!!!!!!
Yeh kya , taarey ff mein Kriya
Bas bas plz aur torture mat karo
Taani blindfold, strangercomes
Whooo! I kno ki that is rey
May be rey per taanika magic chal gaya
Update soon waiting , waiting, waiting

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