Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16)

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GoGreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Another 4 days to go for another update...🥺

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Sona Rajasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Lukin fwd and happy fr ur blog yar...pls update soon...

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Sanjana Seth

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Posted: 11 years ago

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update kab milegi...????

thoda jaldi karo na... please...! 😳

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incandescent

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Congrats for thread 16.

UNRES..

Awesome update. Finally they are married. 🥳 I loved the description of the ceremony and I loved how you narrated from four different perspective. As expected, Rishabh didn't attend...but I am curious...has his character ended in the story?

Khushi's first rasoi..that's sounds fun. Wonder how the halwa will turn out. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Congrats for the commencement of your blog.

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shruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: GoGreen
Another 4 days to go for another update...🥺

greeenji tell her na to update soon...so much tym left for weekend..😡

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GoGreen

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shruti46

greeenji tell her na to update soon...so much tym left for weekend..😡

KYA bolu Shrutiji... 🤗...all I can do is jaddu ki Jalapii to all of them who are waiting desperately for the update...

Annoy Ji...Annoy Ji... Sunsunsun... Hamare Pyaarbara. dun... Ki kab karoge...algae update...sunsunsun...

SUN SAIBA annoying...sunsunsun...Hamare pyaarbara dunnn...

Edited by GoGreen - 11 years ago

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IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thoda jaldi update milega? Weekend is too far... 😭

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preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

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@A- you are simply the best... With every line you write you have me pulled to think so with all my heart... I am glad that I got to know you... Now I am waiting for you to launch your blog... Hope you consider me worthy enough to have access there...

Coming to the update... Plainly mind blowing one... It was a big fat wedding but I felt at home there... You had me see through the eyes of elderly Raizada and I was able to read the emotions of everyone involved so well... I loved how you made Arnav perspire in his traditional attire and how Khushi glared at her chachu for making her groom to go through the ordeal... I loved the fatherly intervention there to settle his son in a little better way there... Buaji just showed how demanding she can get when it comes to following traditions... I loved Arnav's thoughts on how no one cared to reside Khushi in his wings when they were mere strangers and now when she is his legally wedded wife they act crazy to not house her near him...

The best part of the update was the morning after... That was the best piece I have ever read... You have no idea how much I loved it... I m thinking about it all the time ever since I read it... N You had me living the scene every time I thought about it... So beautifully written and words can't state what I exactly feel about it... It was pleasure in purest form... I m all smiles right now too... I would be left wordless when it comes to stating my thoughts on your work quite often... This scene was one among them... I can't wait to read it further... From the way Buaji encouraged her titaliya, it does really sound ASR is up for danger :)... Reality at its best :)

Edited by preethi.saseeda - 11 years ago