Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16)

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@love14356

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

* Sigh* finally they r married...nice chapter and I can't wait for the next one

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sunshineswirl

@sunshineswirl

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

they make quite a couple... first Arnav at the mandap and then khushi in the kitchen.

I thoroughly enjoyed this update...thank you

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

YAY they're married And hahah firangi groom love this new nick name

And Buaji did everything till it was the best and aw they didn't even get to spend the night together oh well

But hahah the morning scene is hilarious, good luck to Arnav

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

how many ever times i read cant get enough of it

amazing simply superb loved the whole wedding scene and what each one is doing to get it done and whole scene infront of of the fire how groom is uncomfortable and laddoo and karan are having there own scene and how samar is enjoying th e whole thing is very nicely put...

and really loved teh whole morning scene first rasoi so hilarious it was arnav is relucatant to eat the food made by kushi ...

poor guy i hope he gets thru the breakfast

i hope u give some insight on how the first rasoi was

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Oh ho so thanks to buaji and this ritual Arnav and Khushi were saved from spending an awkward first night together and we missed out on enjoying seeing them squirm and fluster but then like you said to be continued so i am rooting for some major entertainment in the coming up updates.

First of all I have to commend on your writing skills as always especially for this shaadi wala update , it was actually a treat and a unique twist to see the wedding from Sumer's eyes and not the protagonists.

You know what i like best about you and your stories are the raw emotions on display.

Everything from Arnav's discomfort, to Khushi's excitement , Buaji and her wishes, Karan and his responsibilities and of course Sumer's immeasurable happiness beautifully written.

There were points made so aptly of which i had not even thought of , for example when Khushi wished to use the same jewellery and clothes from the wedding gone wrong here again , it was something i never even thought of but it was given the right amount of attention here , this gesture completely reflects Khushi's naivety and pure heart.

Also when she hugged Sumer and said now you are actually my father , brilliant and an awe worthy thought.

Sumer's thoughts for Arnav and Khushi coming together also lovely.

Then the entire Rasoi Segment ... was hilarious!

I just feel so happy for Arnav , he truly is in for a ride of a lifetime with his pesky little wife.

As much as i thought Khushi will be always following Arnav , i can actually envision Arnav being a putty in her hands!😳

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Awesome update dear... All the wedding sequences were really great and sometimes hilerious.. Btw Arnav expressions were really great throughout this chapter.. Can't wait to read the next part to see what his reaction going to be after eating halwa...lol:-))

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entertain

@entertain

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

I liked the Kitchen scene and waiting for its continuation how Arnav will respond after eating it

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gopikaaji

@gopikaaji

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

congrats to Arshi ...so they marriaged...lol the final part ..me waiting for extension...

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Just loved the update. Finally Arnav and khushi are married.
Loved the fact that buaji was excited for their marriage and
made it a grand affair. The excitement over khushi's cooking
by everyone else even when they knew that she wasn't that
good at cooking was so cute 😃 . Arnav was scared for the
right reasons for once 😉 . The hilarious part was when Arnav
imagined the writing on the tombstone 😆 .Very well written.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.