Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16)

First Previous

Page

103

Next Last

Frequent Posters

swapna

@sindukur

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

awesome wedding. cant wait to read the next part when arnav tastes the halwa

Quote

shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

nice update...

Loved it...

Thanks for updating on time and for pm.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

GoldenEyes

@GoldenEyes

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Awesome update!
Poor arnav! I had a blast reading about his state!
Now he has to taste khushi's cooking 😆

Quote

ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

I loved that you added this pinch of comedy in 'too-serious-for-the-world' Arnav's life. Well it's not really funny when he is preparing himself for his death!

The wedding, despite all the dramas and turbulences leading to it, was a successful affair! One that brought a huge smile on my face. I wonder if every groom feels like Arnav. I mean, for us women, our dreams of getting married is finally taking place, and our entire focus goes on making sure that second of that entire event is perfect.

I am glad that Rishab did not show up to the wedding. Less drama, I say!

I am sure Khushi and Arnav's life will be one heck of a ride! Here's wishing them all the happiness in their marriage. :)

Quote

luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

omg god that was the most hilarious update in this story i have read... was awesome... firanf hunband hahaha ...this one was just awesome

" He tried, but finally had to eat the halwa cooked by his bride?"

🤣🤣

Quote

thamanna

@owin

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally they got married.

I was smiling all time while reading this one

Can't wait to read next chapter

Just awesome

Owin

Quote

Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Wow 😆 . Kya baat hain ASR wanted to eat left over lol . Very hilarious update I enjoyed each and every line .

Quote

dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

He tried, but finally had to eat the halwa cooked by his bride?

loved the update beautifully done was laughing the whole time thinking about asr pulling on the sherwani so cute poor guy dammit jumped ahead ok let start back loved the aunt doing everyting to make it special for them so cute how she was worrying and khushi did not want to give up the first wedding item glad the aunt got it away from her so cute how she was describing arnav scrunched up face and making arnav agree to wear sherwani that was cute poor guy wanted to do a register marriage poor arnav and not sure what this means but firangi arnav sitting at mandap sweating and a khushi fanning a terribly ,irritated arnav at mandap and shooting stares at karan for laughing at him love it and their dad knowing khushi was stronger than arnav and she would be his guiding light was so emotional karan be the one to do the kanyadan that was so beautiful she was always meant to be a raizada bride so cute loved summer inner thoughts on arnav and khushi so cute and the most funniest was because of some issues khushi could not stay the night with arnav that was so funny when he was thinking all the time they were not worried and both were unmarried and two door away now they are married they were worried i laght the whole time that was so cute and him wondering where every one was hearing the commotion in the kitchen and seeing khushi making a glubb poor arnav she will kill him with her cooking loved how when he realized he had to eat it can't wait for the next part loved the update thanks for the pm i loved the part were khushi said it was like peace had settle in her after wearing the signs of a married woman and risabh did not come to the wedding glad she just brush it of and not let it spoil her day

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

Quote

DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Oh no you can't stop here! I've been shaking with laughter reading the update esp the end! Poor Arnav! Not only is he going to have to taste Ladoo's cooking, he's going to have an audience while he does that! :-)

Quote

Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

hey dear:)
First of all your update was abig surprise you update early this tie;)>and make me hell happy:D

and now comming to update..I always says your this ff after arnav realizing his need to be kushi a roller coaster ride but this update was not a coaster ride but the most sweetest update..
it was the very usual thing of life but man the way you wrote it make it speciall..
the bua ji part awe love that part a worry of older woman to have nice and all ritual weddings.and making arnav agree to wear shervani aha i was actually imagining that scene:P..seriously;P and then come summer ji part awe that was great one a feeling of the master of house..you expressed those very usual things quite greatly:)..and a firangi arnav sitting at mandap sweating and a kushi in wedding dress and that too our kushi ,titliya fanning a terribly sweating,irritated arnav at mandap aha what a lovlely scene it is ni:P...and karan trying to do kaniyadan and listening to underbreaths muttering of ARNAV..
muah what beautiful scenes you awoke in my mind:P

and then come the morning scene yar you updated so sweatly and nicely this time no rolar coaster ride but a simple update with beautiful description love it andlove you for writting it it:)

a power pact update:D
continue son dear:)
and again today update was like read it again and again.and it give you a very calm feeling beautiful one dear:D

And how i forogt that marathon of arnav right after the rituals and game done aha yar i wish we could see it..i am finding a funny movie punjabi one these days but no fun but i wish i could see the same scenes live:(
and from the game i remember it would have been a treat to see FIRANGI ARNAV SINGH RHAIZDA playing games that too finding ring in milk ai haye..i am damn sure he was not excitied to find the rings or rule over her but he would have want to run from there:P

great update( sorry this is last time i am repeating my lines)

before i write something more conitnue soon\love
maria:)

Quote

1 ... 14 15 16 17 18 ... 103

Arshi

Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16) - Page 16

Related Topics

Explore Topics