Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16) - Page 11

Haha. Poor arnav hope d halwa is tasty. Awesome update

It Was a hilarious update.. hope arnav survive the halwa... m glad the wedding is over... so excited for the next update. ... made my day... thnk u...

Wedding finally so cute pooor asr eheheh love the chapter dear awesome

His lovely bride awww cnt wait to knw j hope she did it right for once n surprise him. Cnt wait

Awww!! The chapter was so so so cute!!


N that last line, which he imagined would be engraved on his tomb! " he tried but end up having halwa(sic)" was so adorable!! How do u come up with such amazing lines!!

Loved it loved it loved it

So finally they are married...

Loved the firangi husband and his ever concerned bride fanning him...

So even they have the "Kal ratri" rasam when groom and bride are not allowed to sped their first night...

Khushi and Sumer little interactions made me tearful...

Eagerly looking forward to the next update...

amazing update
so finally dey both got married

I absolutely love your writing style. Couldn't stop laughing imagining Arnav in front of the agni!

It was a really cute and funny...I liked how you made it lighthearted rather than serious or intense...Will be waiting for the next part impatiently... Update soon..!!!

Gudiya ri gudiya tera gudda perdesiya
Jodi aasmani ho gayi
Shagun pe dekho shaad maani ho gayi


Such a feel good update thank you anony ji love you

uff yeh dulha dulhan kitna pareshan kerte hain buaji ko

I just love this firangi dulha he is so cute

And our sweet lil laddo now officially khushi singh raizada

this update belongs to madhumati and sumer singh raizda, love the way writerji show us how mothers feels about their children marriage how exactly mothers arrange each and everything with so much love and care, its really hard to express that feeling but writerji nailed it here it was beautifully done the way you describe madhumati's state and her love for arnav and khushi. We clearly see the content and satisfied summer singh raizada who is relishing and enjoying each and every moment of his life because after so many years of misery and hopelessness, his life has given him the most unexpected gift, his laddo and arnav are getting married, where he is not afraid of his daughters future because he knows arnav will take care of her and he is also sure that khushi will heal all arnav's wounds.

And now want to congratulate Mr. and Mrs. raizada gosh you guys are so fussy thode pagal hain mager cute hain. Just love the way khushi was remembering all the post wedding games it was a nice touch and most importantly she is happy and content. I was crying literally while reading these lines so beautifully written

Khushi cut her 22nd birthday's cake as a married woman, with her husband. But after feeding him the first bite, her eyes searched for the epicenter of her life her bade papa

sumer's eyes teared up when she hugged him and said 'Now you are actually my father, hai naa?'.

Arnav ko zyda Mubarak hoo because his mission is finally accomplished and now khushi is his legally wedded wife, due to this girl khushi, he is changed a married man now, a person who don't want to be in any serious relationship but for her he has taken the first step and with lots of manipulation and efforts he make her his, and will hold this sacred bond till eternity I am sure.

Though he don't know his khushi yet she is chalta phirta nautanki but I am sure he will survive and khushi will infused so many colors in his bleak life and writerji prove me right, he is ready to eat the breakfast prepared by khushi because its damn clear from the beginning that he cant say no to khushi.

Waise writer ji ap ne ramanchi kerdi hai I was waiting for jadu hai nasha hai, per humara dil todh diya ap ne 💔 not fair.

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