Prishna FF I Have Always Loved U-chapter 2 pg 5

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Lisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Love this first chapter Sandia,, 👏it is totally amazing and so different. Felt Krishna's pain of separation but the joy she found in her twins was nice and how she gave in to them that day,, aww,, and Kabir oh so handsome,,😉 I love him and his deep attraction to Krishna... hmmm ... interesting... 😳

Can't wait for your next chapter,,

Love it Sandia !!!!

(did Pintu change his identity when he left)

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prishna4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Wonderful chapter Sandia..sad... yet...passionate..

Great writing..

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sandiab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: kmfan_2
lol mmm he will be unmarried for a few chapters lol u can have him uptill than lol

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sandiab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: trinilisa
Love this first chapter Sandia,, 👏it is totally amazing and so different. Felt Krishna's pain of separation but the joy she found in her twins was nice and how she gave in to them that day,, aww,, and Kabir oh so handsome,,😉 I love him and his deep attraction to Krishna... hmmm ... interesting... 😳Can't wait for your next chapter,,Love it Sandia !!!!<(did Pintu change his identity when he left)

thamks for the sweet comment Lisa and glad u liked it and lol if i give u the answer to your question what will u give me? lol

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Lisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sandiab
thamks for the sweet comment Lisa and glad u liked it and lol if i give u the answer to your question what will u give me? lol

You are most welcome Sandia,, just don't keep us waiting too long and of course in return it can only be "Love"... 😉

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sandiab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Chapter 2 of I have always loved u

Krishna and the kids where in their hotel room for the 1^st day Krishna had decided to give all of her attention to the kids she took them sightseeing and to the museum which Jai didn't enjoy much then they went to the arcade which Pari didn't enjoy much. And finally now they were in bed sleeping soundly Krishna couldn't help but smile as she looked down on their sweet faces they truly did look angelic and she wished that Pintu was here with her he was missing out on so much. Each day they were changing so fast their likes, their dislikes where changing sometimes when she saw them growing out of their clothes or even learning something new she got scared coz she knew that he would never know the person they were before. She kissed both kids on the head and smiled sadly at them wishing that they would know their father and have the sort of relationship that she had with her own father she knew even though she had so much of support from her in laws and her own mother now but she still missed father. And she couldn't help but think how her own children felt without knowing their own father and whether they ever wondered about him. Every1 was amazing with the kids from tt to babloo to her own brother they all gave these 2 a lot of love but still sometimes she saw the look on their faces when they saw other kids with their dad. Krishna tried to shake of her mood she didn't know why but since the time she had come to the hotel she felt weird and she somehow felt like she was closer to Pintu than she had ever been before

She knew if she didn't stop thinking about him that she would end up crying and so she went to her room and started going over all her case work for the next day. She worked through the night but eventually tiredness won and she went to bed. After a while the door to Krishna room opened slowly Kabir walked into the room and slowly went to Krishna bedside he looked down on her and wanted to touch but controlled himself. With tears in his eyes he looked at her sleeping his heart felt like it would combust and it was beating so erratic that he wondered how it was possible that she hadn't heard it yet. He put his head on her pillow he was so close to her yet so far their face, their head, their lips where inches apart but yet there was a wall between them as always. His hands went to touch her head but he pulled back again a part of him wanted her to wake up and see him but at the same time he didn't want that to happen he was both angry and ashamed of himself. He slowly moved away from her he stood staring down at her he was angry at her for making him feel so out of control but he was angrier at himself that he was so out of control that he had to wait like a thief to come and see her. He stood in the middle of room staring at her and it took all his strength to go back to his own room and not carry her away from everyone and keep her his prisoner the way he had been her prisoner all these years.

Krishna woke up with a start saying Pintu's name and she was looking around expecting to see him and when she didn't she put her head back on her pillow and looked at the ceiling wondering when her torture would end. Pintu was leaning against the door that separated him from Krishna's room he had managed to get a room for that had an adjourning door to her room. He felt awful that he had go and invade her privacy like that and told himself he wouldn't do that again but deep down knew that, that was one promise he couldn't keep.

The next day both Krishna and Pintu where both busy and hardly had a moment to spare but whenever Krishna was free she would be with the kids but most of the time they were with their nanny Aruna. At one point Jai and Pari decided to play hide and seek with their nanny and went and hide in the conference minutes before Pintu's and his business colleagues could go in. the kids didn't know what to do and where under the table they soon started enjoying themselves when they started seeing the socks of the men some had diff pairs on sock on black and white or blue and red and so they decided to check if every1's socks. They stopped at some1s feet and since they couldn't see what color he had Jai said they should check Pari immediately said no but Jai was going to check so Pari hands went out to stop him but she ended up hitting the man's legs. Kabir felt something hit his leg and decided to check what it was and when he did his looked into the eyes of the blackest, biggest pair of eyes he had ever seen. She said sorry so softly that he couldn't help but smile at her just than he heard a woman come in quite hysterical asking every1 if they had seen 2 little kids anyway. Jai immediately said that he shouldn't tell her that they were here and that they were playing hide and seek with her but as he heard how upset the lady was he called out and said they were here. Aruna immediately came for the kids and hugged them both she told him thanks and as she was taking them away Jai looked back at him angrily whilst Pari smiled back at him.

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Lisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Awww Sandia what a lovely chapter,,, Kabir/Pintu or is that a slip up..lol... I truly enjoyed reading it and wished it was much longer... Loved the stealing moment of passionate love that even time can't destroy... I can't believe I got choked up for the last part though... the kids so like their parents.. too cute..

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sandiab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

aww thanks lisa glad u liked it and lol kabir/pintu hehehe the mystery will be solved soon. loved the way u described the moments stolen by kabir so true. and do u krishna fans like kabir all krishna does in my ff is talk about pintu and her fans do the same lol. kabir is so getting no love from any1 lol. and why did u choke up at the last part lol?

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prishna4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Love your update Sandia... the kids are an interesting part but so sad Krishna not with her true love... 😭

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Lisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sandiab
aww thanks lisa glad u liked it and lol kabir/pintu hehehe the mystery will be solved soon. loved the way u described the moments stolen by kabir so true. and do u krishna fans like kabir all krishna does in my ff is talk about pintu and her fans do the same lol. kabir is so getting no love from any1 lol. and why did u choke up at the last part lol?

Kabir/Pintu one and the same, I think, but Krishna fans can't help it, Pintu was the ideal partner...😉 and I think it was the stolen moment before and their being so close yet apart... then him seeing the eyes... it just made me think he was going to hug them or something.. but it did not happen... 😭 Just update soon..OK..