Prishna FF I Have Always Loved U-chapter 2 pg 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: FizaluvsKinshuk

OMG yay an FF from you, can't wait for you to update, and how about Pari and Jai? lol

fizu i love these 2 names going to be using them as the twins names thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Will be posting the 1st chapter next week.
@Lisa thanks for all the name suggestion will be using a few of them in this ff and my ss.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandiab

Will be posting the 1st chapter next week.
@Lisa thanks for all the name suggestion will be using a few of them in this ff and my ss.

You are welcome Sandia
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Krishna was in her bedroom in front of the mirror putting the last touches to her makeup and then she picked up a picture of Pintu and said hi handsome, u shocked right, that I can put on makeup perfectly but u shouldn't be. U know me once I want to learn something I learn it perfectly and after all today is our 5th anniversary so I have to look perfect for u. She than got emotional and a tear rolled down her face as she said that just like the others years u haven't wished me, not once have u ever wished me and then clutched the picture close to her heart. Pinky who had been outside her room had heard everything and was heartbroken but when she saw the kids coming said loudly Pari, Jai and when Krishna heard she quickly put the picture away and looked at her. Pinky immediately lowered her eyes and then walked away as Krishna called out to her even as she called her back a little part of Krishna was glad that she left. Sometimes she couldn't stand to look at her coz every time she did she remember what she had lost coz of her but she finally managed to tell herself that she wasn't dealing with Pinky anymore that person was gone and she was now Priyanka a loving caring mother to not only Sonu but also to her niece and nephew. She wanted to go to her but knew that we all have to deal with our own mistakes in life and that only when Pintu came back could Priyanka truly forgive herself and move on in her life. Just than her 2 loving distractions came in the room Pari wore glasses and was the exact replica of her mom quiet, serious and studious and then there was Jai who was as mischievous as Sonu and his father. The kids balanced each another perfectly never allowing the other to be too serious or too naughty and they both where her life and the only thing that helped her to stay strong without Pintuji by her side. Krishna heard the worry in the kid's voices as they told her that something was wrong with their chichi and she told them not to worry that their chichi just had to rush to the kitchen and not to worry. She knew they won't be easily fooled coz they knew Pinky very well so to distract them Krishna asked if they had cleaned their room which she knew they hated to do but the kids surprised her by saying they had, Krishna looked at the 2 suspicious and asked and your toys? Jai said all put away with the cutest smile and Krishna knew that she was in trouble coz that smile only meant 1 thing they wanted something and when she saw him nudge Pari wondered what it could be that he got even Pari to be in his plan. She couldn't help but smile at him he truly was adorable and when he told her ma u looking sooo beautiful today, just perfect, she smiled even more coz at that moment he looked as naughty as his father. And finally said out with it young man what do u and your sister want from me is it a new play station, a new book and both kids said no. Pari finally said we want to come with u on trip and Jai said we won't worry u at all we promise and we can take Aruna chaciji with us so u can do your work and she will look after us. Krishna normally left them home when she went on any of her work trips but maybe coz she was missing Pintu today and these 2 where just so cute that she just couldn't say no and told them that they could come but she would be very busy and that they would have to be on their best behavior and they both immediately hugged her and screamed yes ma.

A limo stops outside a posh Delhi hotel and a very handsome man steps out dressed in a black suit followed by an entourage of people asking him to sigh papers and jotting down things that he told them. As they enter his room he told them to leave his brief case on the coffee table and went over to the window and looked out at the city as he made a few calls and then was going to his room when he stops end in his track as he sees a news paper on top of his bag and almost in a trance like state went over to it and picks it up. He finally managed to put it down shakily he couldn't believe she still had this affect on him and knew in that moment that he might have tried to put millions of miles between them but that she had always been there with him. She had always been in the back of his mind, her name on tip of his tongue, her skin on his lips and touch of her on his hands and her smell all around him. His obsession, his motivation and the one person he wanted the most but could never have. He controlled everything in his life but when it came to her he couldn't control his feelings and that killed him and now she was going to be in the same city as him. He ran his hands through his hair and looked at her picture and then ran a finger tip on her face he knew just for a little while he had to somehow be close to her. He knew it was crazy and she was married for god sake but called his right hand man Aditya in and told him to find out where Krishna Raj Singh was staying at and to book him a room right next to hers. Just as he left his secretary Aarti came in and said Kabir Sir that his fianc Nishna was on the line.

Edited by sandiab - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Good one Sandia...
many new characters here...and no Pintuji??

that's sad...we need him in every story ...in every update...

as we never had that in AB all the time...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Good one Sandia...

many new characters here...and no Pintuji??

that's sad...we need him in every story ...in every update...

as we never had that in AB all the time...

so sorry i actually went to update my other ss so i forgot to put up a picture of kabir i will find a picture of him and put it up in a few minutes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mr Kabir khan will obviously be played by Kinshuk Mahajan as if i would write a prishna story and not have Pintu in it. but now whether Kabir is Pintu's twin or Pintu himself u will have to wait for the next update.




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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Ok...but how long do we have to wait for you take too long to update dear...😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Ok...but how long do we have to wait for you take too long to update dear...😛😆

i actually thought i had deleted my ss and ff the other week i seriously couldnt find it on my hard drive and i use glasses so i dnt know why i just kept on missing it otherwise i would have posted it when i said i would lol. Dnt be mean to me Fizu is even worse than me when it comes to updating her amazing ss and ffs lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sandiab

i actually thought i had deleted my ss and ff the other week i seriously couldnt find it on my hard drive and i use glasses so i dnt know why i just kept on missing it otherwise i would have posted it when i said i would lol. Dnt be mean to me Fizu is even worse than me when it comes to updating her amazing ss and ffs lol


yes i know that...one of her FFs got locked too...😆😛

just kidding Sandia...and is one of the KM's free...I mean unmarried in your FF??? 😛

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