First Kiss...Second? (A KR OS.)

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awsum os..

loved it..

haye tum dono ki lovestory..🤣

mast lovestory hai..🤣

nd title toh perfect hai..

mast update tha..

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

uppu nd snigs...
this is amazinggg...
lovellyyy...
beautifully written...
loved d way u guyzz expressed their feelings...
frm strt till end its allin flow/...
i jst love it...
nd uknw guyzz... title is d best thing happen to this os...
it made me lyk i wanna read it at any cost...
nd wen she say its second thn i got it she is talking abt buttrfly kiss//...
aurkya bolunn...??
jst loved it tod core...^_^
one of d best os's...
nd avt second post ..roflll guyzz...
i wanna read dose cmnts...;)
thnxx 4 dis beautiful os guyzz...:)

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Vishal sharma

@My_loveis_gone

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Amazing work dear. Lved it.

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Amazing ... !!!

loved it totally ... <3 <3

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

first of both of you for such a beautiful os ... 🤗...
i am speech less it was just mind blowing and amazing... 😆
loved it... to the core of heart...

😆

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wowww!!!!! Amazing... awesome... me loved it... 😃

Ab toh kriya chahiye hi chahiye... mere se control nhi hota...😛

Agar vo na aayi na... toh besharmo tumhe hi peetungi... aag laga di dil me...😡😆

Itna touchy os... I was'nt crying.. but my heart weeped at every moment.. feeling the immense love of universe's most beautiful couple... 😭

How I wished ... it should'nt have ended.. ever... but can't deny the happiness,, I get by thinking of her comeback...😊

Beautifully written... just wish to see it turning in reality ...

Kriya won't be able to face rey... coz he won't listen to her... instead swayam is the best option ... as he's her bestfriend.. 😳

Yes yes.. I want to see them clearing it all out in fireexit... its their place.. (itne din se dekha bhi ni ) so many memories... tiffs.. start of friendship.. confession... its sooo special!!!!

Ab tak rey kriya ke liye 'someone better' dhundh raha tha... but kriya ki ek statement pe usse kisss kar diya... kitni der se control kiya hoga na... . 😆😉

Hayeee... 2nd kiss.. sachhi me... my kiri.. cute as butterfly... I want her back at any cost...🤗

& I'm restless after watching her dance yesterday... she looked so flawless... so beautifully carved figure... her cute face... awww... I'm just soo proud to be her fan...😎

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

awesome n superb os.. loved d title a lot.. 1 ques who s swayam???? upi s rey n u kria so who s swayam??? loved kria's comeback story.. loved how swayam made her tel wat happened n how with cold voice said rey doesnt love her anymore.. kria wants to talk to rey even if he doesnt love me... rey wants some1 better for kria n so s ignoring her.. thank god swayam made him understand saying away wont help both rey n kria.. FE scene was wel penned.. i thought it ll b aggressive but u made it different.. loved d way kria said he s everything she want without thinking following by kiss by rey which showed everything from love to pain in it.. loved d convo of 1st n 2nd kiss n end with rey giving butterfly kiss to kria.. awesome os.. loved each n every word...

Edited by vaishu88 - 12 years ago

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

OMGEEE...

Uppuuu... Snigs... m soo happy to see your combined work.. *eee* 🤗

And what an OS guys.. bwahahaaa.. this was soo damn freaking awesomeee.. 😃

How Reyaansh wil react seeing Kria..

Swayam helping in Mending the situations..

then things finally getting ok b/w Kriyaansh in FE itself...

i just Freaking loved it...

This was truly somthing which evry Kriyaansh fan would wish... 😳

and snigs.. what did u say..???

Uppu Reyaansh and u Kria right?

means u both kissed at the end??? 🤣

All n all faaduuu OS... 😃

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

okay

first of all really beautiful..

thank you so much you guys..

i loved it like anything

it was so so damn beautiful

it was really touchy and emotional..

and on the other hand it made so many memoris rush through my brain

and that second kiss 😳😳

my god butterfly kiss ki yaad aa gayi

this OS definitely brought loads of memories back...

thank you

love kriyaansh 😳😳

want kriya back

please PM this to me soon

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

U cmpletely make me watch the story ahppening infront of me

just took to another world (KR world) moreover the news of kria probably getyng back as CV's offered helped no less :)