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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

For the first time I m actually feeling great that khushi is having a fab time when Arnav is getting riled up... He deserves a lot more than this and I m glad he sees what he does ... Lovely update again... It's getting more interesting... It's refreshing to read about a happy khushi who was looked down upon till now... Great chapter ..

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

fabulous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Thanks for the pm. I Loved today's update. I want arnav to burn with jealousy. But afraid that he lash out his anger on her.

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Arnav's wrath will be unleashed . Disastrous for Khushi But a very short update😕 But awesome nevertheless

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Zee

@aamir18

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

Thank you so much for this sweet comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed the update and so glad you were excited to be the first commenter! 😆 I'm glad you appreciate Arnav's muddled feelings for Khushi. Let's see if Khushi or Bradley face his wrath! 😳 I hope my writing meets your expectations. Thank you for reading and thank you so much for the comment, once again.

Originally posted by: likeadesigirl
Yay first comment!!! I've never been the first commenter, so this is quite an achievement for me 😛 I really like how you depict the complex feelings Arnav has for Khushi. He doesn't like her, but at the same time, he wants her to be his, and only his. I hope he doesn't take his anger out about Bradley on Khushi- I hope he takes it out on Bradley. The man could use a taking down of a couple of pegs. Your style of writing is so addictive. Great work!

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

short but fantastic update!! i have a feeling bradley is not the kind of guy who wud take advantage of a drunk khushi.. what is wrong with arnav?? why won't he just let his wife leave in peace? he wud curse her back at home and now won't even let her have her time. i just pray that he wont do anything destructive to khushi after the party!! pls pls dont make this jerk do anything disastrous to her..will khushi utter some truths in her drunk state to arnav aftr the party?? update soon pls...and try to give longer updates...love this ff so much!!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Awesome update...liking bradley he sound gourgeous...an kushi deserves a man that will treat her with respect ...obviously im a arhi fan but i wouldnt mind kushi being with someone else in this ff...proves what a great wroter you are...

Edited by flowers4u - 11 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

may be the alcohol would open up Khushi and she speaks the truth to Arnav...

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

Zee😊

First of all lovely edit up there👏

Second I liked you gave Khushi some courage regardless she is doing to make Arnav happy or jealous, or angry whatever the feelings she is going through but her steps became brave enough to do that.Now if u take her to the edge where she can tell Arnav all of her gussa and her inner turmoil in this inebriated state , then it will be a pleasure to read.

Arnav a complex dude, hates her with LOVE...and Love her with HATE...

Liked the Meena attitude...👏

Don't make him yell at my Khushi...

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#500

amazing update .i really didnt want a drunk khushi dancing that too with with a stranger .embarassing and what more .but you conveyed her thoughts so effortlessly .she drank because she didnt want to make arnav embarassed.poor thing .hope he wont yell at her

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