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-Carrie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

🤣😉😛

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

res
dancing
dhinka chika
unres me first 😉
stalker now here
yay 😆

awesome updates

aisha ⭐️
so brave
so strong

so much accusations but still she 👏
arisha had a past 😲

very well written pov of arisha..

self composition of aisha 😛

dutta bhau n bro 😳
awesome convo

felt like watching

magical 😃

aisha again
beautifully written ⭐️

seriously wen aisha dad knows to
apparao 😡

why aisha dad blame dutra 🤢

ahaan fultoo action
👏
whistling paisa vasul update 😛

precap 😉
lol
thanks for d pm zuby ji
maja aa gya..!!

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Res

edited~

what the! Zuby precap killed me!🤢pura update bhula diya percap ne😳
sachhi mai mar ke dam logi kya ?

What an update!
There is really something in between aisha and arshad!
Loved the way people supported her,! I haven't expected this from them but i liked it a lottt.
Then she cooled down them! She is the warrior yaar!
Just too much perfect! In every sense.
Without even doing anything she was ready for the interrogation. I really liked dutta ji's interfiearnce in this.
Ab ye kaun hai jo aisha pe goli chalayi! And the chase was perfectly written! Hats off for yor writting! ❤️
haan wo thick honge hi! Warna arshad aisha ke blouse kaise fadega🤢😲😕
poor duttaji😭
continue soon
thanks for PM😕

Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awsome update zubyji!!!

Aisha!!! she really is the uncrowned queen for the people...
she is doing so much for the people who got hurt...nd for their family too...
its really hard to find such people nowadays..

and poor girl in return she is getting to face such accusations...poor her again...
the scene with her getting shocked again after watching Arshad...and later composing herself...was nicely written...

Arshad and Dutta's face off was the highlight of the update...loved it a lott...

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

honestly speaking...Dutta and Arshad's heated face offs...are a treat to read...

aww...u knw wat...i m falling for this Dutta-Aisha jodi...nd somwhr down in my heart i want it to happen now...plzzz...

haww...who were the people attacking on Aisha and Arshad this badly...people of Apparao i guess?

nd wat was dat...u literaaly ended up on a cliff note...

nd moreover the precap!!!
ab mujhe neend kaise ayegi...ye kya tha...
Arshad tore away Aisha's blouse!!! WHAT!!!

plz continue sooon

love
Aisha

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago

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Aditi

@bright_star89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

again a BRILLIANT one👏

Aisha detained... poor girl is getting framed.

Loved Arshad and Aisha's feelings on meeting at the Police station... Beautifully written Zuby!⭐️⭐️

Both were disturbed by their past equations.. but composed themselves as thorough professionals😊 i loved reading that part..😳

Also the tension betwn the two..' the proud , dominating queen' as u rightly described her.. Arshad must be feeling proud to see her in such a sherni avatar,, commanding so much authority and respect from her followers...😳

Dutta - arshad faceoff is again one ceeti- maaro scene👍🏼

I loved how they reasoned with each other.. Dutta supporting Aisha and respecting her for her dedication...

The deep intimacy , understanding is already disturbing Arshad??😳

Time for him to reconcile with her???😳 or just talk with her?😛

The attack!! omg! who is behind it?

And the precap...😲😲 shocking! wt is he trying to do😲

you have ended on a cliffhanger... write soon...:)

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fly.high

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

unresed my cmmnts on pf 7 and 8

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

here comes d comment of piya di

i m posting on her behalf 😉
firstly she missing us

update was wow todu phodu hmari band bjane wali update

arsha past kya h pulling my hairs
ayesha strong girl
beyond simple girls no rona dhona itni tough situation ko
handle krna dabbang lady

arshad ki feeling lol
i want to know arsha past track..
dutta ka bheja ghum gya h aisha ko aise dekhkar
den arshad dutta part very well written
ab ye banduk wale kha se aa gye lol
arshad ka ayesha ko cover krna
hehe
maine bich me padhna chodke imagine kiya lol
ek aur accident
precap dekhar merii phat gyi
arshad kya locha krne wala h lol
arshad dutta aisha very well written
love u for dis story 🤗

ps. i unres too on previous pg..

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Payal_156
res
dancing
dhinka chika
unres me first 😉
stalker now here I love my stalkers!🤗
yay 😆

awesome updates Thank u,Payal jee😳

aisha ⭐️
so brave
so strong

so much accusations but still she 👏
arisha had a past 😲 Bahut dhassoo past!Hosh udd jayenge😉 Padhtey rahiyo😛

very well written pov of arisha..

self composition of aisha 😛

dutta bhau n bro 😳
awesome convo

felt like watching

magical 😃

aisha again
beautifully written ⭐️

seriously wen aisha dad knows to
apparao 😡

why aisha dad blame dutra 🤢 He was the one who got Aisha into building the project na?😳 Ab uske jaan pe ban aayi hai

ahaan fultoo action
👏
whistling paisa vasul update 😛

precap 😉
lol You are laughing?😲😕😆
thanks for d pm zuby ji
maja aa gya..!!

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
Awsome update zubyji!!!

Aisha!!! she really is the uncrowned queen for the people...
she is doing so much for the people who got hurt...nd for their family too...
its really hard to find such people nowadays..

and poor girl in return she is getting to face such accusations...poor her again...
the scene with her getting shocked again after watching Arshad...and later composing herself...was nicely written...

Arshad and Dutta's face off was the highlight of the update...loved it a lott...

Thanks for the compliments,Aish😳

True! She is born into a rich family but instead of leading an idle and comfortable life she is channeling her power for a greater cause.If all privileged individuals follow this path there will be greater equality among the people of this world.

Gosh...I sound like someone from Aam Aadmi Party