New Story * Updated Part 31 Pg 69* - Page 19

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Awssuuumm Didu...Arreeyy Nooo...Cloudburst!! Yaani Baarish!! 😆 Phewww...Chalo Atleast dey got help! They wer welcumed sooo warmly!! Luvd d Maratha Hospitality! Nd luvvdd The Marathi convo...Okkk!!! So Aayesha Dressed in Saree nd tribal jwellery!! Kyaaa Didduuu...Mere ko laga tha ki...😉😉.. Kya laga tha? Yeh aaj kal ke bacche bhi na? 😆 But anyways..she lukkd beautiful nd Arshad forgot to blink!!! Ahaannn...😉 Diduuu...Marne ka irada hai kya?? Arshad ka aisa description dogi toh main toohhh... Arey! Mere describe kiye bina hi hottie is so hottt! ArHayeee...My Dil Goes Hmmm...!!!! nd dat malham lagaying wala scene wasss...😳😳😳 Didu agar aisa dawa lagane wala mil jaye toh main toh Apni poori body pe wounds kar lunn...😳😳 Phir wo hotwaa aake mere ghaavo par medicine lagayega!!! Hayeee... Haye! Thats my dream too! I shivered right at the thought of his touch on my skin...😳 The bg song was luvly! Awww...she put h er blanket on him!! Very Cute!! Intrestinggg Precapp Dido...Damn Exciteddd! Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soon!! 😊 Thanks for reading & commenting on it!Shanaya

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

unres
this time i'll cmmnt in short due to my condition! :-(

awsm update
it ws also cutely romantic for a die hard romance person like me :-P
waiting for th mahakhulasa!
continue soon

love
beemar aisha :-(

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

bheegi bheegi raat.. Only caught my attention🤣.
Res!!!


Edited~😳 Tujhe kya hua re ladki?😛 Khoon woon nai mila kya peene ke liye,Pyaasi Vampire?😆 Muh kyun phoola hua hai?😕

Okay, so that precap really made me unstable, what he saw tht made his jaw drops😲 huh😒
then it was actually our mithi churi in pink😉..woah! Kuch to hua hai..kuch ho gaya hai..😉.

Ufff! Jaw drop kya hua sabko laga Aish ne sab kuch drop kar diya!🤣

And about Aisha? I don't know what to say about this lady now! 😳 . Her blazing fire looks, expressing more to what the eyes showed 😉. Don't know , but a longing , and the way her heart cried, for losing him again knowing that he was never her. Awesomely described Zuby. 👏

Thank u! We all feel the same for our hottiie,hai na?
Which he could not figure out, but franticly falling deep inside her . The fire of passion that is developing in between these two in the dim lighted room is wonderfully described. Both wanted to lose into eachother, but what is holding 'em back. And what conclusions will they darw after this?? 😃. Eager to know about Aisha's relation with Arshaad. Her mind voice is clearly indicating that, in no way she would let him go! The intensity of her feelings is very deep, that put me in curiosity ⭐️ . Reveal it soon😉.

Next week!😉

Oh finally he believed her about Apparao 😡 . Wow her clear cut explanation really worked on him 👏 . Yet, again what is that thing that made her to think of giving her everything for him? 😕

Woah, I must say, your song choice is so perfect. 😛 , bheegi bheegi akeli raath mai , do jane pehchane ajnabee dhunde kiska pata.. 😉 . Oh they don't have any problem, that man calling 'em as husband wife. Cool😆pakka locha hai.

Hai toh!😆 Hey !Your song is cool too!😳

Continue soon. Zuby. Till now this the best part of this story. 👏 .
Again this precap! Oh gal, what about dutta ji then? Lagta hai barmuda triangle mai phasane wali ho sabko😲. Kya karoon? Bechara Dutta! Thanks for the PM. Thanks to you for commenting Ankieee!🤗

PS: I am still angry😡.Arey! par why??????😕

Originally posted by: Meself

Should I speak the truth or...😕

Originally posted by: Meself

Okay...so I speak the truth! Honestly speaking this did not look written by you! It was too chlised. I had hoped that since Arshad's wallet was still intact he could buy her a dress/sari whatever. I mean it was okay that you showed that famed Indian hospitality but then again why trod the already travelled path? Next the rain sequences...it looked a scene straight out of YRF romance flicks. I wouldn't have mind it in other situation but given the catastrophe they are currently in, it could have been avoided. So it turned out to be bleak update with predictable lines being drawn. I knew that those village couple would take them as man and wife...that Aayesha would order cutting chai for him and...that he'd chide her back. I won't say I am dissapointed or anything...it happens at times. Its just that my dido spins amazingly fabricated webs that keeps me reeling in ectasy for over a week. So for that reason this was a let down. But since the main theme is opening up next week I am hoping you'll oh scratch that I know you'd leap in your strength and give me that thrilling adventure that I so crave!!! P.S. I am not a die hard romantic! I prefer realism with a bit of romance tweaked in. So you know...