KR OS: With the Black Coffee

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

amazing.. awsome...

mannu..

loved it..

thnks for the pm

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

wow awesome OS...

loved it...

kriyaansh are sooo cute...

thnx fr d pm...

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Mannu tu ne Rey ko 'Chef' bana diya , As in Dancer se seedha Chef , not Bad han 😉...

Mai ne toh future ka soch liya...

Kriya Seducing Rey with her Dance N Rey like good Husband will cook for her , how's it??

🤣

Jokes apart , This was Great 😃...

Pehli meeting mein he dono ek doosre k kaam agaye...

Oh!! So Rey Chef ban k Kriya ko bhool gaya But Kria famous ho k bhi usse nai bhooli...

Ulta system ho gaya 😆...

N then uska dimg chal he gaya , then hua confession ...

Me loved it ❤️

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

superb.. loved it.. awesome.. cute n sweet.. it al started with the black coffee last line of os was superb... loved d way u showed kria being a success choreo n rey a successful chef.. kria remembers him while he forgot abt her.. loved d way kria went daily to meet him n give hints abt who she s ... n finally falling in love with him.. rey s upset for not understanding why he s not getting d feeling abt kria n finally understood he s in love with kria n also found d reason behind d hints kria s being giving him ... d proposal was super n cute.. awww kria wants a grand proposal on their date.. aww cute.. loved d os..

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Pooh

@..Sugary_Pie..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Hey amazing os! Kria a choreographer nd rey a chef! Luved the way rey proposed her though he was nervous...Interesting storyline nd update was fab! How do u write such gr8 updates yaar?!??! Amazing! Tanx 4 d pm...!

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Beautiful os ...

Loved it ...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Amazingly penned...
I liked the way you started off with.. the way she still remembered their first meet..
it was all so cute..
boys will be boys !! men will be men !! 🤣 they can easily forget everything, and girls remember even the minute details !!

Great job!!