Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#921

The suspense is mind blowing...Jenny!

I feel lots is going on...what if Arnav works undercover...and I's trying to solve a case...

This is just so interesting...Jenny..very different from your other work,...your talent amazes me..I'm in awe of your work!

Will be off to Mumbai...soon, but will connect from there as well...eagerly waiting...for the next...Jen!

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A_BA

@A_BA

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

Updated comment on page 129😊

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

Quite a heavy and happening chapter.

Very well written.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

unres'd on page 131 ---> here

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

Oh god, Shyam is khushi's husband? I don't even want to call him her husband because it seems he has ditched her and left her to fend for herself

So Arnav knows khushi is married then, okay I'll take a wild guess and say Shyam is the killer

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loveandluck

@loveandluck

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Ohh no!! Shyams her husband?!? How tragic. And who is arnav working with? This is intense.

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montyk

@montyk

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#927

What!!!

WOW!!

The plot thickness..

Khushi married to Shyam... And he is SIS agent??

I am guessing there is so much pain in Arnav's past.. And what's his motive??

Can't wait for the next chapter

Thanks for the PM Jenny!!

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#928

fabulous update
loved it khushi is married cant wait for the next update thanks for the pm

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#929

Jenny, first of all sorry. I know i have not been regular in commenting these days. Don't even remember where i did and where i didn't. But you know I don't miss reading any of your updates.
Forgive me dear. Just too busy these days.

This story is just an all out mystery. I have totally stopped even trying to guess what is going on,
The story, the setting, the characters are all so completely different from all your other stories and once again you doing total justice to it. I can totally picture the story happening .

I have long ago given up trying to figure out how you do it, over and over again. Now i shall just sit back and enjoy the ride.