Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#931

I'm dumbfounded. So shyam is Khushi's husband! And he works for SIS! Then why she was working as a bar dancer? Is it some kind of clandestine mission to catch the serial killer?

Their love making was hawt. For a moment i was almost sure that Arnav could be that killer, as he was carrying gun. And when you mentioned that he had to fulfill his mission, I became more sure. but when he put the camera, I thought he is a detective. then Khan wanted to arrest him for interrogation.

Lots of questions are rising in my mind.

I'm absolutely ejoying this mysterious tale of arnav and Khushi.

Edited by sohara - 11 years ago

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#932

Hey Jenny the story is shaping up beautifully.Arhi chemistry is present since their first encounter and Arnav's history simply adds up to the mystery.thanks for the pms I was busy and wanted to read it in peace thats why i am late in commenting.A big thanks for quick updatings and pms

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sherin1689

@sherin1689

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Posted: 11 years ago

#933

WOW!!!!! 👏

KEEP WRITING BUDDY!! TOOO GOOD!!!

LOVED IT!!!!!

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kuchnaakahoo

@kuchnaakahoo

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#934

is shyam the one who was caught red handed by Arnav with his wife by any chance,,, 😕

i am just not able to comprehend anything beyond it,,, Is khushi's marriage to shyam doomed...?? arghhh .. Tomorrow ,, plz come fast...

and y this SS comprises only of 10 chapters or so,, i was already addicted,,, Good things do come to an end soon,,,🤔

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#935

God ! Not Shyam !! What is he upto ? Is he forcing Khushi to do all that ?? Also is Arnav after Shyam ??

Interesting !!

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#936

What is arnav upto...

Possibility, shyam is behind arnav's miseries...

khan definately doesnt think arnav to be da murderer...

Wy is it dat everytime khushi has to suffer...poor girl..

But I must say da story is getting interesting day by day..

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sulu_123

@sulu_123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#937

Well... the mystery deepens.

Khushi married to shyam ? And yet getting so attracted to Arnav that she succumbs to it and dreams of a possible relationship with him ? Doesn't gell. SO is she really married to Shayam Or is it just an act both are putting up for whatever reason ?

And Shyam a scret agent ? What has Arnav got against him?

But whatever, Arnav is going to know the real equation between shyam & khushi because he now has her apartment & phone bugged.

Very very interesting indeed !!.

Just waiting eagerly for ur nxt update. Actually this is so different from all your previous works...yet very very intriguing indeed !!

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#938

What! Khushi is married to Shyam! Shyam works for some secret service and the way he was talking to Khushi seemed like they don't have a good relationship.

Arnav was pursuing Khushi to look for information on Shyam! OMG! This is turning out to be such a mystery! Can't wait to read on...

You are such a versatile writer! Each of your stories are so different and good!