Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Monalisaa

@Monalisaa

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#811

What was that Jenny? You mad my morning, mean everything was going perfect until i read the last part shyam jha is Khushi's husband, ooh nooo.

Who is Arnab and why did he plant all those camera's in Khushi's house? Is Arnav one call for Khushi or there is someone else? will wait for u too tell us.

And without forgetting thanks for the pm

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#812

The mystery just got deeper.

Shyam is a secret agent and Arnav the suspect.

And why is Arnav's body covered with scars?

And why doesn't he like anyone touching his face?

What I can't understand is why is Shyam married to a bar dancer?

You spring surprises on the reader with every update.

This is the mark of a good writer of thrillers.

Nobody will believe this is your first attempt at writing a thriller.

Bravo Jen! 👏

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710617

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Posted: 11 years ago

#813

Khushi is married to Shyam who is a secret agent good or bad don't know .. Arnav knows that and is spying on Khushi ..

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#814

Wat the helll?????????????? Creepwa is here!!!! Unbelievable...Arnav used here..if it waa to get th documents,he cud hav just given her sedative or chloroform..y did he opt for such away??? Such a tangled condition!!!!!!

Poor poor poor Khushi!!!! Lot of questions to ask..but I hav an exam tmrw...c u in nxt updae...may be ateaser soon????

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#815

My my my

So arnav Loathes Khushi and i guesd he believes that she is with Her Kamina Husband

Oohh Holy crap Shyam is khushu's husband?i guess he shares a past with major raizada.lets wait and watch..

Too much interesting..cant wait for next update now

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#816

Beautiful Update..

What is Arnav up to?? why is he arranging all at kushi's place..

Shyam is Kushi's husband?????

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#817

wht the!!wht a twist jenny..khushi is married dat too to shyam..??double jhatka...
so arnav was der to collect info abt shyam bt why?? whts his connection with shyam??
also arshi made love..did arnav really like her or its jst da part of his game??
nd khushi she confessed she likes arnav..den wht abt shyam..??
oh god so many ques..jenny i'm dying out of curiosity to knw all these..
egarly waiting for mystrey to b unfold..
continue soon:)

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#818

alot of things opening up while alot more to know... but simply loving the suspense... im sure will be more clear on the next update...

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#819

confused right now i wait for next update before judging any character. each and every character is so mysterious here that i really get confused whether to sympathize with them or brutally criticize them. that is the beauty of your writing.

as usual amazing update

thanks for the pm

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#820

OMG Wht was that arshi fully gave into their harmonies. But arnav is on a mission he just made her unconscious or was she totally drunk. God he fixed microphones. And read the letters. Now khan is here to take him for an interrogation. Man the shocking moment was khushi is married holy nuts Wht was that and that to Shyam is her hubby are they divorced or is something fishy. Gosh dame excited for the next update. Thks for the pm dear.