Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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songcouple

@songcouple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

😊 oh my god so shyam is the serial killer , khushi is his wife
arnav and khushi are attracted but the contempt for her is because she is cheating her husband
waiting for more
arnav is suspect

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Jenny, You are still immersed in Bride with a doll??? You have written Arnab! 😃 This is the second time I am coming across this in this story! Not that I have any complaints about it. 😆

Loving this story. Only now I am able to comprehend a bit.

It is a suspense story and a crime fiction!

Loving this. Hats off girl, you are pulling it off once again and writing in a different genre.

You should read "Unspoken" that had its epilogue posted recently. You will definitely enjoy it. Something of a different kind!

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

wat a shocker twist ...shes married ...that too to snakewa

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Lovely..with a twist.

They can't be married...

Thanks in advance for the pm..😊

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Awsommmiiieee dis is getting intrsting...arnav-khushi spnd a nyt...n khushi is married 2 shyam? Wht da!!!! Is shyam da serial killr? Well luking 4wrd 2 nxt chp update sooon!!!!

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muskaansobti

@muskaansobti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

Amazing n Awesmeee update...loved it...dey spent d nght togethet...wana read more...as d story Iis movng further...update soon jenny... 😊

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adithyan

@adithyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

husband???shyam?😲;;...did he know khushi is doing all these?

P.S...why did u make shyam khushi's husband? koi aur naam nahi mila😭

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

Oh godd..
They made love..
Arnaav cnt be the murderer for sure..
And khushi marrried..
Arebu kidddin mee

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arnshi

@arnshi

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#799

The twist in story...khushi have a husband...and what thing arnav knew while leaving her apartment...?
So many questions right now...will wait for the story to progress...its getting really interesting.

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anjubua

@anjubua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#800

dear me shyam is khushi's husband I smell trouble. Arnav is detained continue soon, can we have a little insight into khushi's past and why arnav bugged her apartment. thanks Jenny 👏👏