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mwep

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Posted: 11 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI
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thnk masoon kamini for info

naam toh mat bigad paagal😡

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Andi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: mwep

naam toh mat bigad paagal😡

like i care🤢

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mwep

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Posted: 11 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI

like i care🤢

yahin pitne ka iraada h kya

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afsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#694

That was painful

I don't know how Arnav will react to the reason of being them apart in childhood

I sort of believe something wrong will happen after he knows that

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khareshelley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#695

wow wow wow what an update..!!!!!!
he brought her back home and she didn't even realize this..!!!!she told him to shut up..😆
she got scared on not finding him next morning...!!!!!! loved their new punishment and services..!!!!!
loved payash room.. it really screams purity..!!! he really had organised everything so well.. loved the hall.. entrance...stages..!!!!!!!
finally khuhsi came in mood of MRS. ASR..!!!!!!
loved the song they dedicated to each other... really happy for them..!!!!!!
pretty pretty dresses they are..!!!!!
all 4 are teasing each other..!!!!!!
love khuhsi's sms game to find her..!!!!!!
speech for payash was from his heart ...👏 👏
their romantic moment interrupted by boy... now she is going to dance with her monkey gang..!!!!!!!

superb update..⭐️⭐️ ⭐️

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indhuza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#696

i donno from which part of brain you get these awesome storyline decription screenplay...mesmerising...

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angeldream14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#697

awesome

he has to let go

he has wonderful memories with him pain will be there but in it there will also be a smile remembering abt happy days

its easy to let go things that r gone but its hard to let go things that r still there

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rini_kat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#698

Wonderful update.love it 😊

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pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#699

Very nice update. Initially I was confused when did they come back to RM from the farmhouse. The songs you have chosen are awesome, meaningful and so appropriate for them. The one Khushi sang and the one Arnav sang on stage are just right.

Wow... the location, decoration, arrangements are so beautiful. Payal and Akash's dresses were nice. But Khushi's was the best one, very sexy and beautiful.

The boy in the end was cute. The warning he gave Arnav was so sweet :-)

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lala rukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#700

wow three parts and all full of masti ,songs dance and fun...beautifully written seems to me as i am seeing it all live...:)

awesome start of the update after such heavy on heart last night btw the two :)...loved the way khushi woke up and searched for him...and seeing him coming out of bathroom rushed and hugged him :)...

its so sweet of them...both care and concern for each other is damn awesome...:)...loved it when she told him that i am glad it occured when i am with u ,i cant see u suffer alone...wow beautiful line :)🤗

hmm so the punishment on him saying thanks is great...ouch ouch damn,khushi...hehehe ,u rocked khushi :)

sorry tradition ...hmm so he activate the service ...lovely deepu...:)

omg deeps ...beautifully chosen pics...hyee kiya dreamy bed room for payal and akash...awe u have consider such minute details like no flowers or candle scents as payal feels nausea ...wah deepu tussi great jee :)

loved the ambiance which u have created with pics and songs to relive the momerioes of there shadi...its damn sweet and charismatic...all yellow lights ,flowers ,curtains,stage ...plus size zero lady ...lol...too good...

deepu very heart warming scene starting from MRS ASR style ...poor planner :)...to the song and there singing plus dance all superbly written ,loved it...its true sense seems like sangeet :)

simply fantastic clothes for all the four...payal akash ,hyee arnav in black and khushi dress was for sure breathe taking,lovely yaaar deep,maza agaya on ur selection...

loved the game of human pot,lol...arnav coming on stage and addressing payal and akash ...for sure both crazy but made for each other couple :)...arnav wording here werre simply woow :)

and that black out scene and then appears the fairy ...very very beautifully precieved and written scene ,hats off deepu...these days i am doing this so many times that now my hat is usually in my hands instead of head...hehehe...tussi ho hee itnay kamal jee kiya keroon :)...love u :)

my goodness all the songs selection is worth listening...such soft numbers with lyrics hitting straight to heart...one can easily feel romance,love in air and all around...

my my arnav he is all out of control seeing her belly ansd perfect curves...he never thought that she can be that perfect :) :)...thats so sweet of him...hyee hot moments btw the two...but from where that di ka bhai appeared...but never mind his talks with khushi was cute :)...so maaf kiya :)

I am afraid I will lose my sanity and stop acting rational if you keep surprising me like this. He flicked her belly button and walked away smirking at her, leaving her all flushed.

i am sure i have already lose my sanity all due to u deepu...u r playing with words like magic...superb...loved it ,loved it,loved it,and simply loved it :)

Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago

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