ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 8 - COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

First part was very emotional ,like arnav why did shashi sent khushi to London when she was so young

Finally both are together . Both had a insecured life in past

Really looking forward for the wedding update

It was a emotional but beautiful update

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Moumita Mukherjee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

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the first part was so emotional..
and like a good husband he didn't let her feel alone!!
he went to Gupta house to bring her back!!
sigh! both of them shared such a painful past :(
but finally they are together..
after stating away from each other for so long :)
I love reading impatient Arnav..
the Doctor part was kinda funny :P
he's the best husband anyone can ever get!
I wonder if someone like him exists in this world
he's so damn perfect ;)
he's planning their HM :D :D
I can't believe this :P
waiting for the next one :)

P.S. I will wait with some tissue boxes ;) m ready to cry buckets :P

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Awesome update...
Khushi shared her past with arnav... I love how arnav without thinking about anything just reached for khushi... The only thought that was having that khushi needs him... For khushi he tried to be normal with her parents...
Khushi never showed to any one how lonely she feels... But when it came to arnav she open up to him... Loved how arnav handled her and showered her with his love and care...
Love their romance... Khushi surely knows how to make arnav weak...
Continue soon...

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tanu3579

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

he does relly love her too much naa :) :) ... i somehow hv a feeling htt he wud nt b able to see it easy tht shashi n garima suffered as much as khushi did... n all fr him n his family...

it feels .. fr nw atleast... tht he will nt b able to luk past khushi's pain... :)

as of desperate... well arnav... u r as desperate as her 😉, if nt more 😉

khushi's past... it really md me sad... such a small kid.. plus she had no clue y it was happening to her..

n her thots on saving herself... :) well who knws in wht ways destiny n god work :) ... mayb this is really was destined fr her always :) :) ..

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pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

fabulous update...felt bad abt kushi s childhood..
loved their romantic moments

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Pari

@ammavedu80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Awesome update
Arnav is so understanding
Kushi and arnav r inseparable
Waiting for next updates
Still didn't get why kushi parents sent her away
They missed to shower their love to her when she needed the most
Just for the sake of some astrology belief
Poor kushi

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beenish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

aww wonderful update ..

i was crying while reading khushis side of story ..

eagerly waiting

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lala rukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

awesome update deeps...very emotional one..blended beautifully with lil bit of naughty acts which brought smile otherwise i was continously crying while reading it...

uff itna dookh...itni shadeed udasi ...woh bhee aik aysae lardki k dil mein jo hur waqt hasti rahay hasati rahay...the difference btw alone and lonely is big ...its not easy for every one to understand...honestly u have shown that difference...emotions at its peak ...understanding btw two souls at its peak...samjhana aur samajhna kiya hota hay ...u have written it deeps beautifully...

the way she broke down...it hurts a lot

that abh mein agaya hoon...

aj bauhat roola deya nah...

uff kash koi aysa mil jaye jo yeh keh dey tou aur life mein wt else one can wish for ...:)...

loved her night dress ...i was like woow... tou arnav WT THE hona hee tha...its obvioius :)...hilarious grandma night gowns..hehe...arnav is damn witty

loved the way he said correction , 2 nights...hmmm deepu 2 :)

very sexy dress khushi babes...arnav is controlling how...i simply dont know...may b deepu u can give tips on control management too lol🤣

awe he is still thinking y she is looking sad in her childhood pic...loved when he nodded in yesin reply to khushi for taking her parent pic along

poor garima one night mein she is seeing so much...hehehe...well shashi is very intelligent here :)...i loved his pagal hay yeh lardka ...:)

loved the way arnav turned back and apologise to garima...he is having forsure good manners:)

that breakdown of khushi...uff ...i was like uff my heart is going to burst at that moment...very very heart touching...his anger as he dont wanted to listen wt she wanted to say as he is not willing to think only abt her body ...he loved her soul...and reply the way she shattered down in front of him...his hugs kisses to soothe her pain was like out of this world yaar...deepu hats off for writing such emotions and pains so so beautifully...she was keeping her body,her heart her soul all safe for him...uff and wow

so IT DAWN ON BOTH OF THEM THAT ACTUALLY THEY R MEANT FOR EACH OTHER FROM CHILDHOOD

Her showing him the pic which she made with not eyes but with her heart eyes was like speechless moment for me too ...

hmm she woke up at 2...LOL :) :)

loved there cuddling ,ticklish ,happy ,naughty moments in bed...

woow how beautifully khushi romance with his body ...it was like too too good...i guess we all enjoyed it with arnav 🤣

best part was when ahem ahem...he make her realise wt her kisses did to his special part :) :)...that was damn woow moment...

hmm so she is eager to go on honey moon...there chit chat on chums...5 days a month means 60 days a year was like ...hilarious talks and calculations...:)...from nerd to pervert ...right khushi :)...lovely

pre cap is looking great...awesome update deep,love u loads

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MeenuCrazyPanda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Deep DIii

I was really at the verge crying loudly

but Oly tears rolled down silently

I always enjoy the story

but today i felt I was in Khushi's place

(just talking about her loneliness)

Even I was lonely.. even now. Though i have my parents around they are busy with their work as both are working and I dont have frnds neither in school nor college. My marks oly gain me the attention and all i got was the title NERDY

and ppl just come to me to get my help with their notes n studies

SORRY DI... I COULDN'T HOLD MYSELF from saying all these... When I read Khushi's words, All my feelings and frustrations that i buried in myself just came out.

Must say Deep di, Your words have the power of drilling a person's heart whom people call Robot as I never Cry or Blush or anything like others

Arnav is just awesome... He ran to her just to take her in his arms when she is crying.

Arnav's those 8 years Di, Whenever I think how a man could suffer so much, I really feel the fact hard do dissolve. CRUEL WORLD.

Arnav is making her feel special which no one else tried.

Before her tear coud roll down her cheek, He was there.

TRUE LOVER he is

Khushi's outburst is something so needed.

Her feelings that she had buried have to come out and she let everything to him. she compared him To NK to let him know that, how she saved everything of hers only to him.

I loved the way you have portrayed it DI..

not forgetting his Teasing on her Night dress.. BESHARAM RAIZADA

Desperate Raizada.. cant even wait for the Doc to examine her and 5 min was LONGGG for him

And DI

you know how to twist the atmosphere you have created. You made it so emotional and with her Naughty acts you made a hidden smile appear on my face

Must say these two are out of world

AMAZING CHOICE GIVEN BY ARNAV to KHUSHI.. but kya karen, both are same.

Di now I am eagerly waiting for the Farm house scene

I am not Weak heart. But i'd like to let out my tears to show that I am not a ROBOT