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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Gosh..anjalis right...

N oh god khushi heard them

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: deeswarna
im so happy that u updated before the weekend was over because i consider updates from my favorite writers threat for the weekend! so it was a definitely a good thing:))))
im simply loving this story and how u incorporate every other characters in the story. its true that this one is about arnav and khushi but its good to see that the others are not sidelined but their indirect or direct to the contribution to the epic love story is being acknowledge!

i know i may be sounding dumb here but did by any chance shyam saw or guessed wat happened between arnav and khushi and thats y he answered to anya! i thinking no because he has considered khushi as his sister so i dont think he would have approved of that!

i like the idea of them having the group pictures because years from now they will looking at the same picture and thinking how much life has changed from them, some will thinking their lucky stars for giving them that special person while others will be cursing their fate. im reserving my comments on who will be either sides!

its so sweet to khushi so self conscious to arnav presence and his gaze! im sure her heart beats must have been running a marathon at that moment and i think that their toasting to us definitely had different meaning! its awesome to be in love and at the start of that beautiful the fluttering of the heart beats when that special person is in the vicinity is something beyond words! i hope arnav too is experiencing the same sensations as khushi!

that was so intense conversation between the brother and sister! i can see from where arnav is coming but still life goes on and anjali may not be ready to tie the knot yet but she is definitely making process otherwise she would not have let shyam in! i just hope time does its magic and make arnav see wat he is missing keeping himself out of emotions and feeling!!!!!

OMG lol for me it was hilarious thinking that khushi was behind the hedge! i know she was there to listen, i feel she came to say her personal and private goodbye to arnav!!! awhh!!!! seperation is on the way😭

Am glad I could update in time for you to read Deepa 😃 Thank you for your detailed comment :)

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

ASji u always leave me speachless and always force me to switch into thinking mode trying my best to link the prolouge with the current happenings but each time i fail miserably..how much ever i try to find i end up getting nothing and then decide to just enjoy present and vait for future..you see your story is giving an important lesson of life live in present,vait for future and dont think about past😆😆

vait a sec shyam saved khushi from the akward situation now me thinks does shyam know anything?did he see the kiss happening?? i hope ul u just clear this thing in next chapter...

the inner thots of every person you pen down makes your writing unique and this gives more clear picture and idea of every emotion playing out in a person and i njoy reading them more than dialouges👍🏼😊

this teenage gang is very cool and m just loving the whole party but m missing payal as well i wonder wen is she going to make her grand appearance and wat will happen to aakash😆😊

khushi khushi khushi i wonder wat will happen to her..wenever i see all those encounters, she fighting to keep her inner thots and emotions under control i feel lyk why is it even happening to her..will she be able to survive if anything remarkable happens, which is bound to happen...

and nani she is swwetheart and i love her the most❤️

how much a troubled marriage can affect children it was perfectly written..and m glad unlike arnav anjali has accepted everything and is ready to take a chance and loves shyam immensly..she is even ready to get married..the character of anjali you have potrayed is realistic and m happy she is this way...😊

arnav poor boy after watever he has gone thru i feel so much for him..i know he will change but m more of afraid to even think how it will happen i would love to see your version of how arnav changes and believes in love...

and the ending...im afraid(u know the kind of afraidness you get wen your awating your results😆🤣) you see your writings have dis effect on us..why khushi was there listening to all those stuffs and why arnav had to know dat she is der..i just hope khushi doest explain him going all anjali way again becoz there is lot of difference between khushi and anjali in terms of relationship they share with arnav...

me for the first tym feeling afraid to read your next update😆😆

Edited by Cute6 - 11 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

KC, Khushi is guilty of hiding things fron Anya. Until this points the friends always shared everything that was in their heart and mind.

Thank you...and changed your font colour. Nice...you must be in a cool mood..the pale blue and all :)

Ah, ok. Makes sense.

I was thinking more like Aqua blue 😉

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

He seriously needs to see life in a different perspective... Anjali is right he is still stuck and may refuse to identify relationships when they are close

Khushi listened to this argument ... I hope she puts some sense

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Loved d update
thanks a ton for d pm

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bhoomigowda

@bhoomigowda

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Wonderful update, as usual. Aftermath of the kiss was put up beautifully, specially the lines written as khushi's monologue where she talks about agnostic & atheist, those lines were really beautiful. I am bit confused with khushi as of whether she is feeling guilty for kissing her best friend's brother or for hiding her first kiss from anya, though I presume it to be the second one. Loved the way how everyone were engaged in conversation, enjoying the party. Arnav indeed sounded like a lost child carving for warmth & love. My heart went out to the poor fellow. He has buried a lot of pain within him and is still fighting the demos of his past because of which he is robbed of his youth. I hope khushi becomes shyam in arnav's life, loving him with all his scars and then may be like anjali he might also heal along with time & love. There is a saying in my language which implies its always a child who suffers most when parents quarrel and arnav & anjali are a good example of the same. Their parents might have passed away but they have left scars which will remain as a baggage for a long time. Even though arnav & anjali seem to be similar in many ways, they do have different views when it comes to family & thier past. I am glad that anjali is ready to take a chance at happiness & marriage and she couldn't have done it without shyam's love & care. Though I agree with anjali to a certain extent like it is definately time for arnav to move on & give himself a chance at happiness, to accept their mama's family as his own but I do disgaree when it comes to his career. When anjali herself is pursuing what she loves then it will only be fair enough on her part to allow arnav pursue his dreams, do what he loves to do . I would love to read anya's point of view with respect to her past, her siblings at some point of time. Curious to learn more about next turn of events with khushi witnessing sibling's argument & arnav discovering her presence. At the given moment,I am bit anxious as far as arnav & khushi's relationship is considered. Albeit they kissed eachother giving into their attraction, it will be tough ahead- courtesy being arnav's views on life.

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Wow! What an explosive confrontation. Poor Anjali...it must cut so deep to know that your only living 'flesh and blood' relative is beyond help!!!

I feel so sorry for Nani mad mama too...to do all that in the name of familial love and have it so casually and coldly thrown back in their face (albeit unknowingly on their part) is heart breaking.

You do have to feel the most sorry for Arnav though...there is some serious damage to his psyche and whilst some may see it as strength ... For he is a strong person ... He is actually weak with insecurity at his very core.

The burning question is...how does Khushi fit into this? She's obviously a bit of a curveball for Arnav...he doesn't seem like the sort to let her distract him from his ambitions or influence him to change his mind.

What will she think of what transpired between Arnav and Anjali? I get the feeling she'll be severely disappointed with his attitude to his family ... But is it enough to curb her growing attraction/feelings for him.

So much thought provocation!!! Absolutely adore this chapter!!